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warriorcat80 · 04-23-2008, 07:59 PM

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Guh this kills me to do man... alright lets see what we can come up with now.... see if i can do Shiatzu some justice.....

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Name: Shiatzu Katzamora
Age: 19
Race: Human
Sex: Male
Element: Fire
Weapon: War Pike and Bow
First Form Weapon Appearance: The bow is made of a thick crimson cedar with a tight drawn string. Its nothing special besides crimson red. The War Pike is also crimson with a flame red blade. The tip of the pike is spear point of jagged black. The axe part of the blade is a crecent moon shape and is very smooth angled but sharp enough to cut through the earth itself and is also jet black like the spear point.
Second Form Weapon Appearance:
Third Form Weapon Appearance:
Final Form Weapon Appearance:
Cosmic Drive Weapon Appearance:

Special Attacks:
First Form Special Attacks:

Fire Flash: Using his inner fire emits fire from his body and weapon moves at an increased speed that causing him to turn into a type of human fireball and finishing the mayham with a single thrust that all the fire that was being harnessed is focused through doing insane damage. It can penetrate almost any surface doing insane damage possibly causing a shattering effect on objects.

SunFire: By slamming pike into ground or other surface causing a blinding hot fire to erupt in a 360 radius that blinds enemies while emitting a sweltering heated ring of fire.

Star Fire: Uses bow to launch fire energy that explodes into burning brimstone on command that sticks into anything it touches causing incredible burn damage that has a lasting effect.

Second Form Special Attacks:
Third Form Special Attacks:
Final Form Special Attacks:
Cosmic Drive Special Attacks:

Appearance:

First Form Appearance: Has long brown hair and a scruffy goatee. Has a battle tested ruggedness look about his face. Wears jet black longsleeved undergarmets with a fire red robe over the top with a black belt around the waste. Wears a traveling cloack of deep gray when journeying.

Second Form Appearance:
Third Form Appearance:
Final Form Appearance:
Cosmic Drive Appearance:

Background History: Was a low living child of the Fire Kingdom that had been abandoned at birth. At a young age showed no signs of any kind of special abilities what so ever. Shiatzu was taken care of be an elderly woman that just barely scrapped by herself so he was mainly a child of the streets. He grew up through the school of hard knocks learning to fight as a brawler mainly. When he was the age of eight the boys of the kingdom were tested to see the power of they're abilities if any. Most of the boys had moderate ability and could flick fire on and off. Shiatzu however should no signs of any power till he was being tested for a second time and ended up making the mans water bubble. The man seeing this was alarmed at the disgrace he brought his tribe. He was a water user. The man so alarmed jumped at Shiatzu to grab him but Shiatzu slipped out of his hands and ran. The terrified boy fled to his home where his mother awaited. Shiatzu told his mother of what had happened she did the only thing she knew to do. She took Shiatzu and paid for him to get voyage on a smugglers ship to the Water Kingdom where he would be excepted and not ridiculed and poked at for his different abilities. The woman kissed Shiatzu's forehead and told him that great power harbored deep in him and not to be scared of it for it made him greater than them all. Then the boy was thrown below deck and the boat set sail. While on board the smuggler's ship he was found eating a bag of apples in the cargo hold and was brought to the deck. The boy was thrown into the circle of smugglers on deck and brought before the leader. Out of fear and instinct the boy grabbed a wood plank. The men just laughed at the little eight year old boy holding the plank. Shiatzu was now shaking with fear. "Look at the puny boy," said one man "No wonder your mother gave you up to the people of the water and their soft hearted ways. Your a disgrace to the Fire people. Why don't you show us your wittle wata powers," the man toyed and laughed. Shiatzu began to become angry and shaking with fear and anger. Shiatzu started to smoke and fire consumed his eyes. The men now seeing what was happening became bewildered and scared themselves. The boy charged the man that was jeering him and thrust the plank into his stomach impaling the man and leaving him dead. Shiatzu spun wildly and as another man launched towards him and grabbed Shiatzu his grip was broken from the intense heat that was still being emitted from the boys body. The fire that was sent through the dead man's body at impalment had caught the boat on fire and began to burn like wildfire. The old boat and its cargo went up like a fresh kindling. The men were all burned to death but not Shiatzu. He was perfectly unscathed except for the fact that he was now stranded in the ocean and shaking with fear of what had happened. The boy stranded in the deep blue ocean was swept up by a current and taken to the shore of another land. A woman greeted the boy with compassion and comfort. The boy terrified of the inner power and the eruption he caused shook in the womans arms just glad to feel a warm touch. The woman was a water user and cared for the eight year old boy as her own along with her other son Tahu. Tahu and Shiatzu both were raised in the art of the spear/pike but only the woman who raised him had seen his awesome power that he had emitted that day on the boat. The people of the water kingdom knew nothing of the fierce power that harbored in the boy. At age of sixteen when Shiatzu and Tahu were being trained in the art of weapon and element imbuement. Tahu triggered his spear to turn into complete liquid water and back. Tahu was filled with glee and wonderment. Shiatzu being a dear friend of Tahu's was full of happiness for his friend but couldn't help being a little jealous since he had not used his power since a day long ago and had been named an Incapable by the water people. Shiatzu felt that something lurked deep in him but had never been able to trigger it like Tahu, even with the help of the water people. "Maybe it just isn't your destiny to be a great water sage Shiatzu," said the boys teacher. Shiatzu looked down in dismay. He himself still believed that he was a water user like he had been told by that frieghtful man many years ago. In comforting Shiatzu, Tahu grabbed a crimson bow that he had not noticed before from the curved out area of the tree he had been standing next to. "At least your still the best shot I have ever seen use one of these!" Tahu said. "This is true," said the boys teacher. Shiatzu took the bow from his friend, "Ya thank the gods," said Shiatzu sarcastically and focusing on the feeling he felt deep inside him that he couldn't call on pulled back on the bow and let it go. A projectile flew from the end of the bow straight ahead straight into the air where he had been aiming. The three of them stood in wonderment watching the fire bolt soaring that had been created out of nothing. "Now." Shiatzu said softly to himself closing his hand into a fist out of instinct. The bolt exploded and it began to rain fire down. Tahu over filled with excitment and joy looked at his friend, "That... was.... AWESOME!!!" He exclaimed. The boys teacher however had the same look as the man from the fire kingdom had when he was eight years old. "But.. But... This cannot be... No... I must tell the King." The boys teacher said his farewells and left the boys to themselves as he hurried to tell the king. Tahu wanted to rush home and tell his mother and everyone of this awesome spectacle he had witnessed. When they arrived home Tahu's mother listened to Tahu's recount of the story that had unfolded before his eyes. Tahu's mother said nothing. "I already knew you had awesome fire power deep inside you," she said after a few moments. Shiatzu not understanding as to how she could know such a thing looked at your quizically. "You remember that day on the boat as well as I do Shiatzu. I am not a fool I saw that great power you exposed and the only way you could have survived it is if you were a fire dweller yourself. I would have told you much sooner but you must learn to harness your power on your own. It's the only way you would be ever to control the fierceness and destruction that comes with it." Tahu's mother stated. Shiatzu stood and slung the bow he and Tahu had acquired over his shoulder, gave a look at Tahu's mother then to Tahu and walked to the door. "Now that you know how to harness your power it is time you learn to use it with the control of the water people," she said. Shiatzu ripped his pike out of the ground, "Thank you for everything... both of you... you'll always be my family in my heart," Shiatzu said not looking back. Tahu's mother now alarmed said, "Shiatzu... you must not leave. Great power harbors deep inside you. You must not be scared of it, for it makes you stronger than us all, but it is the awesome power that will corrupt you and and become uncontrollable like wildfire if not used properly! You must have more traniing!!" Tahu stood stunned, "Let me go with you if you must go Shiatzu! We can watch each others back and plus the company couldn't hurt." Tahu now had a small smirk on his face at the sight of adventure on the horizon. Tahu's mother shot a glance at him as to say your not going either so don't encourage him. Shiatzu laughed a little. "You need counciling on this Shiatzu," Tahu's mother pleaded. Tahu grabbed his spear, "Well even if you don't want me to go I'll just follow you cause there's no way you could lose me," Tahu joked and began to take a step forward. Shiatzu snapped his head back towards them. "No, Tahu. I have to make things right, alone," Shiatzu commanded. Shiatzu then flipped up the hood of his deep gray cloak and tapped the end of his pike to the ground. A blinding fire erupted and spit out a small radial fire. Tahu and his mother turned back and shielded their eyes. When the fire had subsided Shiatzu was no where to be seen. "...awesome..." Said Tahu. "Maybe he knows more than we thought of his power... hopefully..." Tahu's mother said under her breath.

Elemental/Guardian Spirit name: (Most likely to start with an elemental spirit if you have one)
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Elemental/Guardian Spirit Background History: (how you guys meet, etc...)

04-23-2008, 07:59 PM	#93 (permalink)
warriorcat80 Marios's Mustache Wax Join Date: Sep 2007 Posts: 9 Reputation: 10 MMOFaces Profile: None Yet	EDIT EDIT EDIT EDIT (( Guh this kills me to do man... alright lets see what we can come up with now.... see if i can do Shiatzu some justice..... )) Name: Shiatzu Katzamora Age: 19 Race: Human Sex: Male Element: Fire Weapon: War Pike and Bow First Form Weapon Appearance: The bow is made of a thick crimson cedar with a tight drawn string. Its nothing special besides crimson red. The War Pike is also crimson with a flame red blade. The tip of the pike is spear point of jagged black. The axe part of the blade is a crecent moon shape and is very smooth angled but sharp enough to cut through the earth itself and is also jet black like the spear point. Second Form Weapon Appearance: Third Form Weapon Appearance: Final Form Weapon Appearance: Cosmic Drive Weapon Appearance: Special Attacks: First Form Special Attacks: Fire Flash: Using his inner fire emits fire from his body and weapon moves at an increased speed that causing him to turn into a type of human fireball and finishing the mayham with a single thrust that all the fire that was being harnessed is focused through doing insane damage. It can penetrate almost any surface doing insane damage possibly causing a shattering effect on objects. SunFire: By slamming pike into ground or other surface causing a blinding hot fire to erupt in a 360 radius that blinds enemies while emitting a sweltering heated ring of fire. Star Fire: Uses bow to launch fire energy that explodes into burning brimstone on command that sticks into anything it touches causing incredible burn damage that has a lasting effect. Second Form Special Attacks: Third Form Special Attacks: Final Form Special Attacks: Cosmic Drive Special Attacks: Appearance: First Form Appearance: Has long brown hair and a scruffy goatee. Has a battle tested ruggedness look about his face. Wears jet black longsleeved undergarmets with a fire red robe over the top with a black belt around the waste. Wears a traveling cloack of deep gray when journeying. Second Form Appearance: Third Form Appearance: Final Form Appearance: Cosmic Drive Appearance: Background History: Was a low living child of the Fire Kingdom that had been abandoned at birth. At a young age showed no signs of any kind of special abilities what so ever. Shiatzu was taken care of be an elderly woman that just barely scrapped by herself so he was mainly a child of the streets. He grew up through the school of hard knocks learning to fight as a brawler mainly. When he was the age of eight the boys of the kingdom were tested to see the power of they're abilities if any. Most of the boys had moderate ability and could flick fire on and off. Shiatzu however should no signs of any power till he was being tested for a second time and ended up making the mans water bubble. The man seeing this was alarmed at the disgrace he brought his tribe. He was a water user. The man so alarmed jumped at Shiatzu to grab him but Shiatzu slipped out of his hands and ran. The terrified boy fled to his home where his mother awaited. Shiatzu told his mother of what had happened she did the only thing she knew to do. She took Shiatzu and paid for him to get voyage on a smugglers ship to the Water Kingdom where he would be excepted and not ridiculed and poked at for his different abilities. The woman kissed Shiatzu's forehead and told him that great power harbored deep in him and not to be scared of it for it made him greater than them all. Then the boy was thrown below deck and the boat set sail. While on board the smuggler's ship he was found eating a bag of apples in the cargo hold and was brought to the deck. The boy was thrown into the circle of smugglers on deck and brought before the leader. Out of fear and instinct the boy grabbed a wood plank. The men just laughed at the little eight year old boy holding the plank. Shiatzu was now shaking with fear. "Look at the puny boy," said one man "No wonder your mother gave you up to the people of the water and their soft hearted ways. Your a disgrace to the Fire people. Why don't you show us your wittle wata powers," the man toyed and laughed. Shiatzu began to become angry and shaking with fear and anger. Shiatzu started to smoke and fire consumed his eyes. The men now seeing what was happening became bewildered and scared themselves. The boy charged the man that was jeering him and thrust the plank into his stomach impaling the man and leaving him dead. Shiatzu spun wildly and as another man launched towards him and grabbed Shiatzu his grip was broken from the intense heat that was still being emitted from the boys body. The fire that was sent through the dead man's body at impalment had caught the boat on fire and began to burn like wildfire. The old boat and its cargo went up like a fresh kindling. The men were all burned to death but not Shiatzu. He was perfectly unscathed except for the fact that he was now stranded in the ocean and shaking with fear of what had happened. The boy stranded in the deep blue ocean was swept up by a current and taken to the shore of another land. A woman greeted the boy with compassion and comfort. The boy terrified of the inner power and the eruption he caused shook in the womans arms just glad to feel a warm touch. The woman was a water user and cared for the eight year old boy as her own along with her other son Tahu. Tahu and Shiatzu both were raised in the art of the spear/pike but only the woman who raised him had seen his awesome power that he had emitted that day on the boat. The people of the water kingdom knew nothing of the fierce power that harbored in the boy. At age of sixteen when Shiatzu and Tahu were being trained in the art of weapon and element imbuement. Tahu triggered his spear to turn into complete liquid water and back. Tahu was filled with glee and wonderment. Shiatzu being a dear friend of Tahu's was full of happiness for his friend but couldn't help being a little jealous since he had not used his power since a day long ago and had been named an Incapable by the water people. Shiatzu felt that something lurked deep in him but had never been able to trigger it like Tahu, even with the help of the water people. "Maybe it just isn't your destiny to be a great water sage Shiatzu," said the boys teacher. Shiatzu looked down in dismay. He himself still believed that he was a water user like he had been told by that frieghtful man many years ago. In comforting Shiatzu, Tahu grabbed a crimson bow that he had not noticed before from the curved out area of the tree he had been standing next to. "At least your still the best shot I have ever seen use one of these!" Tahu said. "This is true," said the boys teacher. Shiatzu took the bow from his friend, "Ya thank the gods," said Shiatzu sarcastically and focusing on the feeling he felt deep inside him that he couldn't call on pulled back on the bow and let it go. A projectile flew from the end of the bow straight ahead straight into the air where he had been aiming. The three of them stood in wonderment watching the fire bolt soaring that had been created out of nothing. "Now." Shiatzu said softly to himself closing his hand into a fist out of instinct. The bolt exploded and it began to rain fire down. Tahu over filled with excitment and joy looked at his friend, "That... was.... AWESOME!!!" He exclaimed. The boys teacher however had the same look as the man from the fire kingdom had when he was eight years old. "But.. But... This cannot be... No... I must tell the King." The boys teacher said his farewells and left the boys to themselves as he hurried to tell the king. Tahu wanted to rush home and tell his mother and everyone of this awesome spectacle he had witnessed. When they arrived home Tahu's mother listened to Tahu's recount of the story that had unfolded before his eyes. Tahu's mother said nothing. "I already knew you had awesome fire power deep inside you," she said after a few moments. Shiatzu not understanding as to how she could know such a thing looked at your quizically. "You remember that day on the boat as well as I do Shiatzu. I am not a fool I saw that great power you exposed and the only way you could have survived it is if you were a fire dweller yourself. I would have told you much sooner but you must learn to harness your power on your own. It's the only way you would be ever to control the fierceness and destruction that comes with it." Tahu's mother stated. Shiatzu stood and slung the bow he and Tahu had acquired over his shoulder, gave a look at Tahu's mother then to Tahu and walked to the door. "Now that you know how to harness your power it is time you learn to use it with the control of the water people," she said. Shiatzu ripped his pike out of the ground, "Thank you for everything... both of you... you'll always be my family in my heart," Shiatzu said not looking back. Tahu's mother now alarmed said, "Shiatzu... you must not leave. Great power harbors deep inside you. You must not be scared of it, for it makes you stronger than us all, but it is the awesome power that will corrupt you and and become uncontrollable like wildfire if not used properly! You must have more traniing!!" Tahu stood stunned, "Let me go with you if you must go Shiatzu! We can watch each others back and plus the company couldn't hurt." Tahu now had a small smirk on his face at the sight of adventure on the horizon. Tahu's mother shot a glance at him as to say your not going either so don't encourage him. Shiatzu laughed a little. "You need counciling on this Shiatzu," Tahu's mother pleaded. Tahu grabbed his spear, "Well even if you don't want me to go I'll just follow you cause there's no way you could lose me," Tahu joked and began to take a step forward. Shiatzu snapped his head back towards them. "No, Tahu. I have to make things right, alone," Shiatzu commanded. Shiatzu then flipped up the hood of his deep gray cloak and tapped the end of his pike to the ground. A blinding fire erupted and spit out a small radial fire. Tahu and his mother turned back and shielded their eyes. When the fire had subsided Shiatzu was no where to be seen. "...awesome..." Said Tahu. "Maybe he knows more than we thought of his power... hopefully..." Tahu's mother said under her breath. Elemental/Guardian Spirit name: (Most likely to start with an elemental spirit if you have one) Elemental/Guardian Spirit Appearance: Elemental/Guardian Spirit Background History: (how you guys meet, etc...)