Old 05-23-2009, 02:07 PM   #91 (permalink)
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((I edited it too, changed it too a fir ementor. And Braemm, you're not the best fire user in the school. I suggest you edit that, the people at the school would barely know how to use their powers, Jack only had an outburst of flame because he had been using it for too long. I also suggest you change the adult to a kid, the mentors, at least I dont think, haven't been infected by whatever is going on. Now Kain, please carry on.))
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Old 05-23-2009, 02:41 PM   #92 (permalink)
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Cyr rowned, still insepcting the smashed, ruined block of technology floating infront of him, he continued: "This is proberly what has driven most of the people insane, if you want to save them, whatever you do - don't ask them about this. I'm guessing whichever sick bastard behind this can kill them remoteley using this." He said, once more motioning to the block he was levitating, before he let it drop to the floor. "Don't worry about me - i'll be fine, i'm just a bit exhausted - I'll look after Niola, if you're going in there, try to find out more about this whole mess..."
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((w00t ten pages))

"Got it. Man I don't-" Ben got cut off by someone jumping out a window and running twords them, fists covered in electricity. Blake... Hes really in for it this time! Ben sprinted at him, but was stopped in his tracks by Blake's telekinesis.

"It's not you I want to kill, its Cyr, but don't worry, you'll be next." Blake dashed at Cyr and Ben dropped his swords. It took quite a bit of energy, but Ben managed to make the swords move like he was holding them. He was able to slice Blake in the neck, which allowed him to move again. Ben's arms were instantly on fire, and he was rushing at Blake. A wave of telekinetic energy went flying at him, but he did a flip over that. heh-heh, Thanks Siberius.

"Agh! You'll pay for that!" Blake turned and his whole body was electrified.
Uh-oh, that block of whatever it is must amplify the powers of whoever is being controlled.

"Damnit Blake! Can't you just leave us alone!" Ben yelled as he retrieved his swords. They were circiling eachother, waiting for the other to move.
"Cyr, you might want to get you and Niola out of here!" Ben whispered behind him, to Cyr.
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Cyr frowned, looking at ben, then to blake. "Ben. Get Niola out of here, I can take this..." He said, glaring at the electrified boy. "Besides... if he wants to fight me, then let him." Cyr stood up with a small grunt, beckoning blake to him. "If you tried to face up against that, no offence, you would be fried... And, besides... I have a little experience with electricity..."

Cyr chuckled somewhat, electricity flowing around his hands, "Don't ask." He pleaded in Ben's diection, his eyes still focused on Blake.

((I'm guessing blake is an NPC, therefor, I can control him?))
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((Yeah, he's an NPC.))

"Whatever you say..." Ben picked up Niola and sprinted. He is even faster than he was thanks to Siberius. He was out of sight of Blake before he even noticed Cyr was up. They were in the woods, no way was Ben going into the school with Niola. She moaned a little but didn't do anything else.
"Come on Niola! We need you!" Ben whispered. He saw someone walking in the woods but he seemed different. Ahh shoot! Mortal! Ben took off in the other direction but it was too late.

"Hey! What are you doing in these woods! This isn't a place for kids!" The man shouted.

"Uhhh...School project?" Ben stated. It wasn't too much of a lie, Ben wasn't a very good liar either. "I need to see the effects of this plant right here," Ben moved his head in the direction of a plant he had never seen before. "On humans when they eat them. That's why my friend here is asleep, she ate a little too much." That was a good excuse. "But now we need to get back to class. Bye!" Ben took off perpendicular to the man. This way he wouldn't go to the school or tword civilization. He wasn't about ready to go there again.

Then a thought hit Ben. What if the man behind all this killing was the man that was controlling my father? That made him so angry he almost burned Niola. Agh! I might need to stay in these woods for a while... time to remember those survival skills Ben.
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Cyr glared angrily at blake suddenly, lifting off a few feet from the ground. His hands still clenched, telekenetic energy flowing around them as he looked deep into Blake's eyes.

"If you want my advice, i'd run." Cyr stated, growling lowly - seeming angry, which was a rare occurance, though. He wanted to protect the girl - somthing about her reminded him of someone... He couldn't put his finger on it...

Blake leapt at Cyr, sending out a psycic scream at him as he tried to pummel Cyr with his fists. Cyr deflected two punches with his own, electrified hands, and returned the blows with a quick haymaker, followed by an uppercut that sent Blake flying into the air due to the mixture of telekenetic force and electricity behind it.

Cyr then spun on his heel as Blake reached the height of the punch that had sent him upwards, charging phsycic energy in his hands as he went. When he faced Blake, he let loose a massive shockwave of telekenetic energy at Blake, which sent him hurtling.

Cyr then leapt into the sky, his mind feeling cleared as he soared, flying above Blake's smashed body, as he continued to hurtle, they neared the school.

Cyr smacked Blake across the face, grunting as he did - and recieved a punch in the chin in return. The two teenagers brawled as they fell towards the school roof. Cyr grunted, then sent out another wave of telekenetic energy, sending Blake smashing into - and through the roof. This, of course, sent Cyr hurtling back lightly, he grunted as he thudded on the roof - the impact softened lightly by his own energies cushioning him before he hit the ground. He sat up, breathing heavily and feeling exhausted. He smiled as he saw Ben shooting through the forest with Niola on his back.

((Hope that wasn't -too- powerfull, xD. Seeing as Cyr's nearly graduated, I can make him atleast a bit powerfull, right? ))
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((yea that's fine, don't go to much more powerful tho And by shooting through the forest I hope you don't mean coming out back to the school, you'll see why in this post.))

Ben looked around. Nothing much around. Then he realized something, What if I'm lost? Shoot! I think I am! Niola stirred, but then went limp again. Maybe when she wakes up, she can Help us get out of here. Ben didn't like the idea of living in the woods. He was a city boy.

Oh well, might as well set up shop. He ripped off a few branches from a tree. He grabbed some vines that looked sturdy enough to hold some weight. He also got some huge leaves that would keep them dry. He set up the branches, tied them together with the vines, and laid them down on top of everything. There. A nice tent that should keep us warm and dry. Ben was proud of himself. Being a city boy, he never knew how to set up a tent.

Now, for a fire. He got more branches, cleared an area, and tried to light the branches. But only a spark came out of his hands. Ah man! This forest must limit your powers! I need to get out of here!

((not trying to say the forest steals your powers, you just cant use them whilst you're in it.))
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((yea that's fine, don't go to much more powerful tho And by shooting through the forest I hope you don't mean coming out back to the school, you'll see why in this post.))

Ben looked around. Nothing much around. Then he realized something, What if I'm lost? Shoot! I think I am! Niola stirred, but then went limp again. Maybe when she wakes up, she can Help us get out of here. Ben didn't like the idea of living in the woods. He was a city boy.

Oh well, might as well set up shop. He ripped off a few branches from a tree. He grabbed some vines that looked sturdy enough to hold some weight. He also got some huge leaves that would keep them dry. He set up the branches, tied them together with the vines, and laid them down on top of everything. There. A nice tent that should keep us warm and dry. Ben was proud of himself. Being a city boy, he never knew how to set up a tent.

Now, for a fire. He got more branches, cleared an area, and tried to light the branches. But only a spark came out of his hands. Ah man! This forest must limit your powers! I need to get out of here!

((not trying to say the forest steals your powers, you just cant use them whilst you're in it.))
(( Well he only started the fight like... 20 meters from the actual school anyway, so. :P ))

Cyr grunted as he got up, he was feeling weak... light-headed. He looked down, seeing that he made a pretty big crack in the school roof. He chuckled to himself, rubbing the back of his head as he stumbled, his body hurt - but he could deal with that. He peered around and cursed lightly, due to the massive amount of wind users, there was a large tornado-like wind surrounding the school, though inside of it, it was strangeley calm. Though, people who couldn't control wind certainly wouldn't be able to get inside without help. Or, atleast, uninjured.

Though, Cyr seemed relativeley safe, there was little fighting going on on top of the roofs, and he sat down again, trying to regain his strength. He frowned, I need to get to the bottom of this... He thought, moving down to the hole caused by Blake, he saw the teenager laying motionless in the crater that had resulted from the Battle. He placed two fingers at the teenagers neck and sighed.

No pulse. He thought to himself, he moved his hand over to the block-like device that was in the boy's neck, and tore it out, his hand dashed with blood as a result. He studied the device curiously, and slid it into the pocket of his trenchcoat.

He blinked, noticing a seeming barricade to a room that seemed familiar. It was the main hall, the entrance was blocked by various shields of elemental energy. He closed his eyes, and mentally seperated himself from his body - Farsight, some called it. Only some telekenetic users possessed it. Luckily, Cyr did. As he drifted into the hall like a ghost, passing through the wall, he saw dozens of panic-stricken students, makeshift shelters were being made. He saw some of the masters inside, and smiled.

Atleast not all of them have those deadly devices inside of them... He thought to himself. Before opening his eyes once more and returning to his body. He walked up to one of the shields, and rapped gently on it.

"Can I come in...?" Cyr asked. A young boy moved to the shield and blinked, he seemed about 13, his eyes were a sparkling blue and his skin a pale white. He had scruffy, ginger hair, and freckles matted his face.

The Boy peered at Cyr, conversed with one of the others, then nodded. The shield dropped for a few moments. Cyr quickly jogged through, and the shield closed.

"I'm glad to see that people are safe..." Cyr stated, frowning and seeming quite out of it. He smiled and waved to Jacob, who was sitting at one of the tables.

Jacob nodded and smiled at Cyr in return, before Cyr made his way over to him.

"Do you have any idea of what's happening...?" Cyr inquired, seeming dashed with bood.

Jacob shook his head slowly, his eyes filled with sadness despite his smile, "No. You look tired, Cyr. And by the blood marks, I presume that combat has taken it's toll on you - sleep. There are some beds on the balconys."

Cyr nodded, he moved up some stairs to one of the balconys, and let himself drift into a deep sleep. He let his mind roam again, situating his mind from his body once more, his "Spirit", though, that's not really the right way to describe it - Hovering a few feet over him.

He allowed his mind to soar, seeking out Ben, he saw him, vainly trying to start a fire. Though, Ben could not see him, he drifted and let his mind sit against a tree as his body slept a blissfull sleep.

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((OOC: Kain, I mentioned earlier that there weren't that many wind users. :/ But if my post can remain, (I wrote it BEFORE the forest post *sobs*) you could say it came from Niola, without really knowing it...)

***Flashback***

Niola's huge, childish eyes fluttered open, slowly but surely. The rays of sunlight seeped through condensed clouds and effortlessly awoken Niola by dazzling her sensitive eyes and causing her to search mindlessly for the source of light. Rising her head upward, Niola could barely see the streaks of light brightening the gloomy sky, as though some form of obsticle was obsurring it. Trying to clear her vision, Niola realized she was trapped under debris and other remains of what used to be...her village. Suddenly realizing what happened, the struggling child punched the "rocks" away from her with the help of the wind. Then she scrambled out and looked around. The scene was far from the beautiful and peaceful scenery that greeted her everyday; it was grotesque and depressing.

However, the condition of the village was not what shocked her. It was the state the people within the village were in. Most of them--if not all of them--laid hidden within the rubble...dead. A frightened scream echoed through the destroyed village, yet no one would come to comfort her. Instead, Niola sat rocking in the tragic remnants of the village, sobbing and wailing to the Heavens. Niola wanted to understand--she wanted to know why she, of all people, was the only one able to weep and scream out to no one in particular. Everyone was covered in blood. Their eyes were motionless and the deep crimson blood flowed from their lifeless bodies...their unmoving, cold, blood-stained bodies... The village was a death pit, dragging the souless shells into its depths as Niola, the only survivor, allowed her saddened, unknowing tears trickle down her cheeks.

"What happened...God, what happened to make so many innocent souls get taken..." Niola cut off from her interrogation briefly, only to stand up, face the Heavens, and shout, "WHY AM I THE ONLY ONE THAT IS ALLOWED TO LIVE?! WHY DO I HAVE TO SEE MY FRIENDS'--MY FAMILY'S SOULESS CORPSES?! WHYYYYYYYYYY?!"

Still, no one listened. No one answered the baffled and terrified child. No one would explain why Niola was left to live, while everyone else had their souls ripped from their wounded bodies as the village came tumbling down. No one...nothing...and yet...
***End of Flashback?***

Niola could hear it. That sweet, corrupt melody that played to an audience of one, as if asking for her to repeat it to the world around her. It seemed to wrap around her and motion for her to sing. Helpless, Niola obeyed and opened her mouth. Yes...that same devilish, holy song would be repeated for the tormented students who too no longer held onto their will. She, like them, was a puppet now...a soul captured momentarily to carry out someone else's deed, no matter how pure or impure it was. The only difference was that Niola did not have some kind of device within her. The only thing that was strung to her defenseless soul was the string of hatred and regret. Hatred coming from her inability for not being able to resist the regret of losing someone she loved. Regret from her inability to bring back the ones she loved from the ones she hated.

And so Niola stumbled away from Ben, her eyes glazed over in a dreamy coating. Her legs wobbled a bit, as though the puppeteer was having trouble moving Niola's body correctly, like a sleep walker dragging their legs to wherever their subconscious body decided to head to. From the manner Niola carried herself, someone could have easily grabbed her, yet they would soon find out that this was no easy takes. With each step, a steady wind began to build with momentum, swirling around her body and warding away those that tried to interfere with the proceeding. All the while, a rich murmer was pouring from Niola's lips, rising in volume along with the wind. The closer Niola grew to the academy, the louder and clearer the mysterious tone could be heard. Finally, a coloratura soprano note filled the air -- a high-pitched sound that transformed into a miraculous melody that could make even an aggressive bully cry (in the inside, at least). Unfortunately, Niola's inner power, which came forth whenever such an angelic melody was performed by her, did not harmonize well with the wind. Almost immediately, a wind storm developed around the forest and headed for the academy, which Niola was facing. To make matters worse, Niola's body was nearly enclosed in a cocoon of sorts, and she was levitating off the ground, her body limp and facing upward, as though her stomach was the only part that was being held up. The song still continued...

((OOC: Please do not make me rewrite this! Niola has basically gone beserk, caused by her coloratura soprano singing, (the highest pitch of singing I could find that I liked) which does not harmonize with the wind. Since Niola can manipulate the wind, her condition causes it to transform into a wind storm of sorts; it is not super powerful, but it does make it harder to move around. Even though the wind is acting as a shield around her, it can still be pierced. I just wanted to make some sort of obstacle that lasts more than two or three posts. D: Obviously, when she is "rescued", Niola will remain in an extended coma state. T_T She will also be dealt severe wounds caused from the over-use of her powers...drat...what have I done! ._. ))
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Jack slowly awoke to find himself still falling through the air, towards the roof of the school. He tried to use his powers but the outburst had stopped him from doing so. He found that his clothing was brunt and he had numerous cuts on his arms, but he was losing quite a bit of blood from his chest. He smashed through the top of the roof and landed on another boys body (Blake) Then looked over at what seemed to be a door, but barricaded. He scraped himself up and approached, then scratched on the door and murmured "Help me...." Before sliding down and leaving some bloodstains over the door.
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