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raikun09 · 07-03-2009, 09:41 PM

been awhile since i posted the last one

did it while at work today;
lemme know if they cool.
open for crit as usual.

ps: 504. is suppose to be where the phone number is

sidimazz · 07-03-2009, 10:07 PM

It really does not seem professional to me. Sorry man.

raikun09 · 07-03-2009, 10:19 PM

im not trying to look proffesional, because................well im not a proffesional lol

how does it look design wise

Abubakr · 07-04-2009, 12:21 AM

That looks really nice. I really love it's design.

MrWafflez · 07-04-2009, 12:24 AM

Front - Good.
Back - Horrible.

I'd give constructive criticism after calling it horrible, but I can't. I simply hate every single part of the back. The text, the background, the icons, the colors, etc. It's just bad.

Serix · 07-04-2009, 02:12 AM

the font and color choice is really bad rai, shit should be brighter like on the bottom.

the bottom though just looks like a bad cluster**** of font, you didnt blend it in with the texture at all and the colors dont harmonize well, keep the flow of one idea and dont trail off into another.

raikun09 · 07-04-2009, 03:09 AM

made some quick tweaks;
tell me whats poppin now

Serix · 07-04-2009, 10:31 PM

much much much better, now do something about the last paint smudge on the back, the shading and flow is off D=<

Gaika · 07-04-2009, 10:51 PM

It looks too "collage"-ee. Y'know?

raikun09 · 07-05-2009, 12:46 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Serix

much much much better, now do something about the last paint smudge on the back, the shading and flow is off D=<

got damn pen tool failed me
i'll beat it and come back

Quote:

Originally Posted by Gaika

It looks too "collage"-ee. Y'know?

but i like it collage-ish

07-03-2009, 09:41 PM	#1 (permalink)
raikun09 Lothia's Lurker Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: new orleans Posts: 3,763 Reputation: 26	bizz card idea #2 been awhile since i posted the last one did it while at work today; lemme know if they cool. open for crit as usual. ps: 504. is suppose to be where the phone number is __________________ Click here to see naked hoes Last edited by raikun09; 07-04-2009 at 03:08 AM.

07-03-2009, 10:19 PM	#3 (permalink)
raikun09 Lothia's Lurker Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: new orleans Posts: 3,763 Reputation: 26	im not trying to look proffesional, because................well im not a proffesional lol how does it look design wise __________________ Click here to see naked hoes

07-04-2009, 12:21 AM	#4 (permalink)
Abubakr Game Journalist Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Mississauga, Ontario, Canada Posts: 4,324 Reputation: 36	That looks really nice. I really love it's design. __________________

07-04-2009, 12:24 AM	#5 (permalink)
MrWafflez Str1der's Stooge Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 3,261 Reputation: 71	Front - Good. Back - Horrible. I'd give constructive criticism after calling it horrible, but I can't. I simply hate every single part of the back. The text, the background, the icons, the colors, etc. It's just bad. __________________

07-04-2009, 02:12 AM	#6 (permalink)
Serix OnRPG Elite Member! Join Date: May 2007 Location: Mexico Posts: 5,723 Reputation: 137	the font and color choice is really bad rai, shit should be brighter like on the bottom. the bottom though just looks like a bad cluster**** of font, you didnt blend it in with the texture at all and the colors dont harmonize well, keep the flow of one idea and dont trail off into another. __________________

07-04-2009, 03:09 AM	#7 (permalink)
raikun09 Lothia's Lurker Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: new orleans Posts: 3,763 Reputation: 26	made some quick tweaks; tell me whats poppin now __________________ Click here to see naked hoes

07-04-2009, 10:31 PM	#8 (permalink)
Serix OnRPG Elite Member! Join Date: May 2007 Location: Mexico Posts: 5,723 Reputation: 137	much much much better, now do something about the last paint smudge on the back, the shading and flow is off D=< __________________

07-04-2009, 10:51 PM	#9 (permalink)
Gaika Banned Join Date: Nov 2008 Posts: 2,759 Reputation: 55	It looks too "collage"-ee. Y'know?

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