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Murxidon's Maid
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Baby Bowsers Soiled Diaper
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The sig is fairly decent.
I would however suggest you brighten the focal up more to make it draw more attention to itself. Also maby spice up the background some. As for the text use clipping mask to make it blend in better. |
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Looks like a good start - what I mean is you could build on it. Add some contrast, continue with that flow from the blending and the way he's facing, and definitely some lighting.
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Baby Bowsers Soiled Diaper
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Version A is alot better, but you still need to add a light source. The focal is simply to dark. For example add a light source right above where he's looking. Also try a different text.
Edit: For example like this ![]() See the difference a little light can make? Of course thats a rough example. Last edited by spiritorange; 10-12-2009 at 12:13 AM. |
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