Go Back   OnRPG Free MMORPG Forums > Main Category > RolePlaying

Reply
 
LinkBack Thread Tools Display Modes
Old 10-18-2009, 08:01 AM   #21 (permalink)
Firor's Fury
 
kain222's Avatar
 
Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: Swanage, in Dorset.
Posts: 3,043
Reputation: 94
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by TimeMasterX View Post
(Let me know if there is a problem with the character.)
Name: Simon Hunter
Description: A tall, well built figure. Wears long grey trousers, a White shirt and a military airforce overcoat. Hair is neat but long, he has brown hair and grey eyes. He looks to be in his mid-thirties. British. Handsome to those around him. Has a deep scar running over his left cheek.
Personality: Very efficient, hides a lonely past. A natural leader but not arrogant or bossy. Knows his place. Withdrawn, likes company but tends to avoid it. Protective of his avatar.
Avatar's Name: Raven
Avatar's Description: A sparrow, looks like any normal sparrow, slightly larger, however, the size of a grown man's foot. Has a grey tinge to it's feathers.
Avatar's Personality: Playful and vibrant. Friendly, will interact with almost everyone. Loyal to friends and (surprisingly) vicious and ruthless to enemies.
History Of The human And Avatar: Simon got accepted into the British Airforce at twenty years of age. He worked his way up through the ranks to the rank of Captain. His avatar appeared to him three years ago. Raven stayed with him, not even allowing him to fly alone in a plane. On more than one occasion the bird was nearly ripped apart by an aeroplane's turbines. One day Simon was ordered to report to a briefing room for an assignment, he got sedated and when he woke up he was on the convey. Raven had followed the kidnappers and had been flying after the convoy when Simon was rescued.
Abilities The Avatar Brings About: Greater stamina, greater agility, can jump very high and very far with one bound. A love of heights.
Weapons The Human May Carry: Military revolver, dagger, shotgun (on occasion)
Gender of Human: Male
Gender of Avatar: Female
Age of Both: 32
(( Your supposed to be born with your avatar, they don't "Appear" to you. :P Change it please.

And yeah, the whole water-controlling is a bit too much, Faragon. I don't mind the whole swimming faster in water, ect, though.

And I wanted to start a new thread so that it opens up opportunity for new members to join. ^-^

We're just waiting on a few key members from the old thread to sign up now. ))
__________________
kain222 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 10-18-2009, 09:08 AM   #22 (permalink)
Lives in City of Zeroes
 
farag0n's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jul 2009
Location: Fluffy Puffy Land
Posts: 643
Reputation: 18
Default

(( Ok I made the modifications. Everything else ok? About my bio ))
__________________
Calm down people, it's just me.
farag0n is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 10-18-2009, 09:44 AM   #23 (permalink)
Firor's Fury
 
kain222's Avatar
 
Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: Swanage, in Dorset.
Posts: 3,043
Reputation: 94
Default

(( Yup! That's fine. ))
__________________
kain222 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 10-18-2009, 12:08 PM   #24 (permalink)
Cingal's Collar
 
TimeMasterX's Avatar
 
Join Date: Sep 2009
Location: UK
Posts: 1,577
Reputation: 12
Send a message via MSN to TimeMasterX
Default

Ok, changed the post. Everything else ok?
__________________

They say that Time is the predator that stalks us all our lives...

"If I'm going to have a past, I prefer it to be multiple choice!" The Joker (The Killing Joke)

He may have stolen your heart, but you broke mine.




92% of teenagers have switched over to rap, if you are one of the 8% that still listens to real music, copy this into your signature.

You don't get to be arrogant enough to decide you're great at this..Let other people make up their own minds about you.
TimeMasterX is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 10-18-2009, 12:21 PM   #25 (permalink)
Firor's Fury
 
kain222's Avatar
 
Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: Swanage, in Dorset.
Posts: 3,043
Reputation: 94
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by TimeMasterX View Post
Ok, changed the post. Everything else ok?
Eh, I know I may be a bit controlling, but they would've kidnapped the raven aswell. :P As they need the Avtatar so they can ~Spoiler~ It and turn the user into a giest.

You don't have to change it if you don't want to, though. ))
__________________
kain222 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 10-18-2009, 12:27 PM   #26 (permalink)
Cingal's Collar
 
TimeMasterX's Avatar
 
Join Date: Sep 2009
Location: UK
Posts: 1,577
Reputation: 12
Send a message via MSN to TimeMasterX
Default

lol np. will just change that. doesnt make that much of a difference. The avatars were rescued as well, yeah?
__________________

They say that Time is the predator that stalks us all our lives...

"If I'm going to have a past, I prefer it to be multiple choice!" The Joker (The Killing Joke)

He may have stolen your heart, but you broke mine.




92% of teenagers have switched over to rap, if you are one of the 8% that still listens to real music, copy this into your signature.

You don't get to be arrogant enough to decide you're great at this..Let other people make up their own minds about you.
TimeMasterX is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 10-18-2009, 12:56 PM   #27 (permalink)
Spyro’s Burning Cough
 
Fieryfly's Avatar
 
Join Date: Sep 2009
Location: the Netherlands
Posts: 533
Reputation: 15
Send a message via MSN to Fieryfly
Default

((sure you'll remember me :P))

Name: Kanya
Description: Kanya has short black hair with a few grey/white stripes in it and her eyes are light grey. She is around 1.70 m (donno about feet ..) and is slender which makes her very flexible. She wears a bit torn, dark blue jeans, a grey shirt with a white print of an unknow mark and a black jacket.

Personality: Quiet, Observing, Likes to be on her own, doesn't say much most of the time.
Avatar's Name: Tioga
Avatar's Description: Tioga is a black/dark grey wolf with white/grey stripes and light grey eyes. He is slender and therefor quite flexible.

Avatar's Personality: Also quiet and observing but he can also be as cheerfull as a small puppy, jumping around after a prey. He can make even Kanya become cheerful sometimes and he is very arrogant sometimes.
History of the Human and it's Avatar: Kanya and Tioga lived with her parents in the woods where she was outside all day, she loved her parents. But one day when she came back they were dead, killed by Geists, she could smell them. She left her house looking for Geists, looking for revenge for what they did.
Abilities that the Avatar brings about: A for being a wolf Tioga gives Kanya the abilitie to walk without a sound, and to be able to observe people very carfully before jumping into action, she can likewise read their movements and predict what they would do. Besides that he grands Kanya far more better senses than a normal human would have.
Weapons the human may carry: Set of small knives for killing without a sound and two beautifull silver pistols with on every side a wolfshead, a gift from Orson.
Gender of Human: Female
Gender of Avatar: Male
Age of Both: 18
__________________


Quote:
A man said to the universe:
"Sir I exist."
"However," replied the universe,
"this hasn't created in me
a sense of obligation."

Last edited by Fieryfly; 10-18-2009 at 02:45 PM.
Fieryfly is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 10-18-2009, 02:08 PM   #28 (permalink)
Firor's Fury
 
kain222's Avatar
 
Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: Swanage, in Dorset.
Posts: 3,043
Reputation: 94
Default

(( Right! Now we have all the major players that were posting lateley in that thread, we'll start. Give me a second to conjour up a first post.

Any from the old thread - feel free to PM me when you decide to come back, i'll fill you in on the story and you can just pretend you were with the group all along on whatever this may lead on to. ))

Sunlight.

It poured into the van as the heavy, metal doors opened - Inside where around twenty people from all different walks of life - Doctors, citizens, crinimals, fighters, proffessors, homeless. All of them had wide eyes, all of them were scared. They were clutching their avatars, most of them - anyway. Some eyes showed trauma, some showed anger. But most showed fear. All of them needed a leader, all of them needed a home.

And Orson was going to give them both.


"Right, let's get down to buisness." He stated.

Nari was beside him, her powerfull form impressive - Orson was carrying his love, Kanya - in his arms. She was recently wounded in the gunfight, but her condition was stable, and she would live. He had more important matters to get to - his eyes were hard, determined. Allthough he seemed collective and in organised chaos as a leader most of the time, he was an exellent speaker. His tone was bold, resonate and full of meaning. And he stood there, a slight breeze making his loose, brown, long hair flow. The corners of his mouth stayed where they were, they were sullen - and full of purpous.

"I suppose I should explain what happened - Though I think most of you allready know. You were kidnapped, most of you know not who your kidnappers are. Well - I'll tell you. The leaders of your country, the politicians. The lie-crafters in suits, the arms of the military. They were going to ship you away. They tore you from your family, your homes. Mereley so they could have a few mindless slaves! They were going to tear your avatars away from you, causing you to become a beast, without imagination, without freedom. Some of you may have your families torn from you, others loved ones - berhaps both.

So, are you going to stand up and fight? Or will you let them turn the entire damned nation into these mindless beings - I sure as hell know I won't! Who's with me?!" He asked, slightly stunned, the crowd stood in silence - before a massive cheer spread through them (( Not saying your character would do so if you're new to the RP, but i'm saying most of them did. )), they had seen what Orson described with their own two eyes, and they wanted revenge, payback, and a home.
__________________

Last edited by kain222; 10-18-2009 at 02:16 PM.
kain222 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 10-18-2009, 02:59 PM   #29 (permalink)
Spyro’s Burning Cough
 
Fieryfly's Avatar
 
Join Date: Sep 2009
Location: the Netherlands
Posts: 533
Reputation: 15
Send a message via MSN to Fieryfly
Default

Tioga had looked carefully how Orson picked up Kanya and walked away with her. With a bit of effort he stood up and walked after them. Now that Kanya had been helped by Orson he could also breath more easily and he was able to walk normaly again. He followed the leader of the pack to the truck and as he peered inside, standing next to Nari, he saw a group of people sitting inside. They were scared, he could smell it, the scent was all over the place. He looked back to Kanya and sat down as Orson started to speak.

Kanya came back from the dark, noticing she was carried. She did not open her eyes but let her senses taking every detail from the environment. She smelt Orson and knew he was carrying her. What happened? She thought a bit confused, she did feel pain but it was not so bad anymore, she could handle it, for now... Orson started to speak and she listened to his voice going up and down as he got more and more excited. She smiled in herself, it had worked, they had saved those people and at the same time she felt relieve, Orson did not get hurt. She had no idea what he went through when she got shot.

She opened her eyes a bit, that was all she could do now and looked up to Orson. She made a faint smile. "You did it." She said faint, almost like a whisper.
__________________


Quote:
A man said to the universe:
"Sir I exist."
"However," replied the universe,
"this hasn't created in me
a sense of obligation."
Fieryfly is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 10-18-2009, 03:23 PM   #30 (permalink)
Lives in City of Zeroes
 
farag0n's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jul 2009
Location: Fluffy Puffy Land
Posts: 643
Reputation: 18
Default

Cyan was sitting in the middle of the second row of captives. He was trembling in fear, he kept his eyes closed. He kept his arms around his legs tightly. Hamefolk had circulated around Cyan in order to protect him.
When Orson opened the door Hamefolk stirred his eyes since it was quite dark inside. Hamefolk studied Orson, Kanya, Nari and Tioga quite carefully before speaking.

"He needs rest", Hamefolk pushed gently Cyan's head with his own, "he has gone through a lot, undoubtedly all of you have, but he is still quite young"

Cyan was still keeping his eyes closed. He didn't tremble so much anymore because of Hamefolk's familiar voice.

Everything will be alright, Cyan

"I am sure Cyan is willing to assist you once he is back to himself again. May I ask your names?"
__________________
Calm down people, it's just me.

Last edited by farag0n; 10-18-2009 at 03:26 PM.
farag0n is offline   Reply With Quote
Reply

Thread Tools
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Trackbacks are On
Pingbacks are On
Refbacks are On



All times are GMT. The time now is 09:36 AM.


Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.6
Copyright ©2000 - 2012, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
SEO by vBSEO 3.6.0
OnRPG, Copyright ©2003-2011, Game Entertainment Enterprises