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angel1234 · 11-07-2009, 04:45 AM

(quite a bit better, som grammer issues but those most people should be able to work out thnx for not taking it the wrong way)

Noah grabbed the collar of Abel's shirt "relax kid" he said turning and walking some more before crossing the street quickly, he was quite distant, emotionally and didnt much care as cars started beeping their horns.

Groteske · 11-07-2009, 05:03 AM

The man studies Eve closely and questions him. "Well son, Where's the fire?"

Eve looks back to the others and quickly pulls the glove off his right arm and hand.
"They're after me! Those people! They're trying to kill me!" Eve points with his now bare hand to the others on the sidewalk just a few feet away.

The man turns to look at Ericka, Rozelai, and Harvey, and calls out to them.
"You there! Come out where I can see you!" His voice was very loud and commanding.

jake_holland · 11-07-2009, 05:17 AM

I saw the man called eve walk up to the car and blame the others for trying to kill him "Hey thats a lie you bas@#&% he is lying it was the other people that tried to kill us!"

angel1234 · 11-07-2009, 05:52 AM

Ericka quickly slapped (jake?) in the back of the head "can i help you? ...i assure you i dont know what he is taking about, im just here with my husband and son" she pointed at harvey and Rozelai "he met a few of his friends at the... arcade and they wanted to join us at home for... pizza... yes pizza"

jake_holland · 11-07-2009, 05:57 AM

(he is called Jump and uh ow hehe)

I rubbed my head and said "Yeah it's just I didnt take my...uh...pills and i get kind of feverish..uh yeah." then quikly retreated to the back of the group.

Groteske · 11-07-2009, 06:03 AM

"Oh is that so?" The police officer begins to walk away from Eve and towards Ericka. "This place is private property!" The man looks back to Eve and then back to Ericka. "You all better get...." The man then turns around and walks back to the driver's side door of the car. "Damn psychos."

Eve heard the man call him a psycho and it made him angry. "What did you call me?" Eve smirks to the man and then raises his right hand to the man's belt. The man confused, steps back and slides his right hand onto the butt of his gun.

"Now now. Don't try anything reckless."

Eve walks closer to the man and yells to him. "I'm a psycho! I dont know what I'm doing!"

Eve swings his right hand up into the air and towards the policeman. In a quick swoop the man petrifies and a few seconds later he burts into a cloud of dust. "Idiot!"

Now with the driver dead Eve bends over and picks up the mans gun out of his ashes. With the gun firmly in his hand he walks back to the driver side door and his eyes meet the eyes of the other police officer still sitting in the passenger seat. This other man had the radio mic in his hand and he was screaming for back up. "Man down! Man down! Send back up right away!"

Eve walks closer to the door and raises the gun aiming it at the man. "They wont come soon enough for you." Eve fires one shot and then a second and then a third. The man gets hit repeatedly and slumps over in the passenger seat.

jake_holland · 11-07-2009, 06:08 AM

"Run-now!" I yelled as eve shot the man who had called for help then turned and ran as fast as i could.

Notyetdone · 11-07-2009, 06:37 AM

"What the hell!?" red scrame and started to back up a bit from them. "Stop screwing around and get your act together! we're suppose to blend in, not kill in cold blood!" Red started to say and then ran off to the other large group. calm down.. calm down.. don't do anything recless... try and rest while we walk slowly.... Red sighed and started to do a trance walk type of thing, he made sure he was in the middle of the group so he would snap out of it when he started to go the wrong way.

TimeMasterX · 11-07-2009, 01:40 PM

Harvey immediately cocked his revolver and sent a bullet whizzing right above Eve's head. "We don't kill." He said angrily, "Otherwise we're no better than them."
He moved over to the fallen policeman, closed his lifeless eyes, and took the man's revolver.

angel1234 · 11-07-2009, 08:44 PM

As noah crossed the street he heard the shots and his head whiped around. "dam it... you just got us all killed" he muttered starting to walk again.

Ericka rand up to evve and uppercutted him onto the roof of the police car. "now you've done it" she said quietly "dont follow us or we WILL kill YOU!" she turned and hurried off to catch up with the others.

11-07-2009, 04:45 AM	#181 (permalink)
angel1234 Marineking's Minion Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: florida Posts: 2,900 Reputation: 24	(quite a bit better, som grammer issues but those most people should be able to work out thnx for not taking it the wrong way) Noah grabbed the collar of Abel's shirt "relax kid" he said turning and walking some more before crossing the street quickly, he was quite distant, emotionally and didnt much care as cars started beeping their horns. __________________ "I have no particular talent. i am merely inquisitive" ~Albert Einstein A Life without Love is like a Car without Brakes. It'll work, but be cautious. ~Bloinx "Feeling no love, is like having no life" ~imushu

11-07-2009, 05:03 AM	#182 (permalink)
Groteske OnRPG Elite Member! Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Holocaust Prison Posts: 6,551 Reputation: 196	The man studies Eve closely and questions him. "Well son, Where's the fire?" Eve looks back to the others and quickly pulls the glove off his right arm and hand. "They're after me! Those people! They're trying to kill me!" Eve points with his now bare hand to the others on the sidewalk just a few feet away. The man turns to look at Ericka, Rozelai, and Harvey, and calls out to them. "You there! Come out where I can see you!" His voice was very loud and commanding. __________________ You put stuff in your mouth, right?

11-07-2009, 05:17 AM	#183 (permalink)
jake_holland Cingal's Collar Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: Where you live. Posts: 1,584 Reputation: 21	I saw the man called eve walk up to the car and blame the others for trying to kill him "Hey thats a lie you bas@#&% he is lying it was the other people that tried to kill us!" __________________ First started RPing in October 2009, back then I was one of the worst you'd see grammar-wise. Now in less than a year, I've progressed to be one of the best RPers here. I'm not the most original guy around, but if I get in the mood, I can create posts the God of Literature would be proud of. Along the way I've insulted I've pretended to be female I've become a super perverted guy and I've gained the ability to curse without limit. If I say motherF-er it is simply exclamation.

11-07-2009, 05:52 AM	#184 (permalink)
angel1234 Marineking's Minion Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: florida Posts: 2,900 Reputation: 24	Ericka quickly slapped (jake?) in the back of the head "can i help you? ...i assure you i dont know what he is taking about, im just here with my husband and son" she pointed at harvey and Rozelai "he met a few of his friends at the... arcade and they wanted to join us at home for... pizza... yes pizza" __________________ "I have no particular talent. i am merely inquisitive" ~Albert Einstein A Life without Love is like a Car without Brakes. It'll work, but be cautious. ~Bloinx "Feeling no love, is like having no life" ~imushu

11-07-2009, 05:57 AM	#185 (permalink)
jake_holland Cingal's Collar Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: Where you live. Posts: 1,584 Reputation: 21	(he is called Jump and uh ow hehe) I rubbed my head and said "Yeah it's just I didnt take my...uh...pills and i get kind of feverish..uh yeah." then quikly retreated to the back of the group. __________________ First started RPing in October 2009, back then I was one of the worst you'd see grammar-wise. Now in less than a year, I've progressed to be one of the best RPers here. I'm not the most original guy around, but if I get in the mood, I can create posts the God of Literature would be proud of. Along the way I've insulted I've pretended to be female I've become a super perverted guy and I've gained the ability to curse without limit. If I say motherF-er it is simply exclamation.

11-07-2009, 06:03 AM	#186 (permalink)
Groteske OnRPG Elite Member! Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Holocaust Prison Posts: 6,551 Reputation: 196	"Oh is that so?" The police officer begins to walk away from Eve and towards Ericka. "This place is private property!" The man looks back to Eve and then back to Ericka. "You all better get...." The man then turns around and walks back to the driver's side door of the car. "Damn psychos." Eve heard the man call him a psycho and it made him angry. "What did you call me?" Eve smirks to the man and then raises his right hand to the man's belt. The man confused, steps back and slides his right hand onto the butt of his gun. "Now now. Don't try anything reckless." Eve walks closer to the man and yells to him. "I'm a psycho! I dont know what I'm doing!" Eve swings his right hand up into the air and towards the policeman. In a quick swoop the man petrifies and a few seconds later he burts into a cloud of dust. "Idiot!" Now with the driver dead Eve bends over and picks up the mans gun out of his ashes. With the gun firmly in his hand he walks back to the driver side door and his eyes meet the eyes of the other police officer still sitting in the passenger seat. This other man had the radio mic in his hand and he was screaming for back up. "Man down! Man down! Send back up right away!" Eve walks closer to the door and raises the gun aiming it at the man. "They wont come soon enough for you." Eve fires one shot and then a second and then a third. The man gets hit repeatedly and slumps over in the passenger seat. __________________ You put stuff in your mouth, right? Last edited by Groteske; 11-07-2009 at 06:08 AM.

11-07-2009, 06:08 AM	#187 (permalink)
jake_holland Cingal's Collar Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: Where you live. Posts: 1,584 Reputation: 21	"Run-now!" I yelled as eve shot the man who had called for help then turned and ran as fast as i could. __________________ First started RPing in October 2009, back then I was one of the worst you'd see grammar-wise. Now in less than a year, I've progressed to be one of the best RPers here. I'm not the most original guy around, but if I get in the mood, I can create posts the God of Literature would be proud of. Along the way I've insulted I've pretended to be female I've become a super perverted guy and I've gained the ability to curse without limit. If I say motherF-er it is simply exclamation.

11-07-2009, 06:37 AM	#188 (permalink)
Notyetdone Dante’s Inferno Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Coolin in Cali Posts: 606 Reputation: 13	"What the hell!?" red scrame and started to back up a bit from them. "Stop screwing around and get your act together! we're suppose to blend in, not kill in cold blood!" Red started to say and then ran off to the other large group. calm down.. calm down.. don't do anything recless... try and rest while we walk slowly.... Red sighed and started to do a trance walk type of thing, he made sure he was in the middle of the group so he would snap out of it when he started to go the wrong way. __________________ "Computer games don't affect kids, I mean if PacMan affected us as kids, we'd all be running around in darkened rooms, munching pills and listening to repetitive music." - Kristian Wilson ▲ ▲ ▲ "wat"

11-07-2009, 01:40 PM	#189 (permalink)
TimeMasterX Cingal's Collar Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: UK Posts: 1,577 Reputation: 12	Harvey immediately cocked his revolver and sent a bullet whizzing right above Eve's head. "We don't kill." He said angrily, "Otherwise we're no better than them." He moved over to the fallen policeman, closed his lifeless eyes, and took the man's revolver. __________________ They say that Time is the predator that stalks us all our lives... "If I'm going to have a past, I prefer it to be multiple choice!" The Joker (The Killing Joke) He may have stolen your heart, but you broke mine. 92% of teenagers have switched over to rap, if you are one of the 8% that still listens to real music, copy this into your signature. You don't get to be arrogant enough to decide you're great at this..Let other people make up their own minds about you.

11-07-2009, 08:44 PM	#190 (permalink)
angel1234 Marineking's Minion Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: florida Posts: 2,900 Reputation: 24	As noah crossed the street he heard the shots and his head whiped around. "dam it... you just got us all killed" he muttered starting to walk again. Ericka rand up to evve and uppercutted him onto the roof of the police car. "now you've done it" she said quietly "dont follow us or we WILL kill YOU!" she turned and hurried off to catch up with the others. __________________ "I have no particular talent. i am merely inquisitive" ~Albert Einstein A Life without Love is like a Car without Brakes. It'll work, but be cautious. ~Bloinx "Feeling no love, is like having no life" ~imushu

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