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Splyex · 10-20-2009, 01:13 AM

Story:
10 years after the events of red night that plagued the seven children Kakeru who destroyed the crystal and freed the girl trapped in the crystal. Little fragments of the crystal made its way into the human world shredding the dimension along its way embeding them into the children of the next generation signing a silent contract with the child unleashing the spellbound seal which gave them powerful weapons/magic. The formaly known Master (forgot his name so i will call him x)x has completely ripped the dimensions between the humans and the monster. But the Fragment childs protect the city using the powers given to them at birth or they use it to their benefit. The

Setting: (anywhere in the world you want but preferably near america)

my character:
-age:16
-Height:5'7
-clothing:Black hoodie, white shirt, black/white belt/ black pants, black/white shoes
-apearence

arted hair, brown eyes,
-Weapons:cutlass in each hand
-personality:Silent really silent, trys to blend in wit the public
Your characters: (you could detail them anyway you want weapons or side powers of your choice)

P.s tell me how i did on my story and everything first time narrating or starting and rp

angel1234 · 10-20-2009, 01:32 AM

its not bad... it could use some more details though...

Name: Iggy
Age: 17
Height: 6'7
Appearance:

Weapons/Abilities: (see picture for sword) Sword and Unimaginable strength.

Splyex · 10-20-2009, 01:45 AM

(like what plus nice character

)

angel1234 · 10-20-2009, 01:47 AM

idk lol, its yur rp... but maybe some more backround on the stones inside the characters? and if the placement of the stone effects their powers? stuff like that, just details really lol

Splyex · 10-20-2009, 01:55 AM

changed it a bit trying to get used to it

angel1234 · 10-20-2009, 01:59 AM

okay, a little better... try adding in a link to what ever other thread you were talking about... red moon? so the people know what red moon was... if its not an rp, lightly discribe what its about

10-20-2009, 01:13 AM	#1 (permalink)
Splyex Cloud's Hair Spray Join Date: Jul 2007 Posts: 71 Reputation: 10	11Eyes RP!?!? Story: 10 years after the events of red night that plagued the seven children Kakeru who destroyed the crystal and freed the girl trapped in the crystal. Little fragments of the crystal made its way into the human world shredding the dimension along its way embeding them into the children of the next generation signing a silent contract with the child unleashing the spellbound seal which gave them powerful weapons/magic. The formaly known Master (forgot his name so i will call him x)x has completely ripped the dimensions between the humans and the monster. But the Fragment childs protect the city using the powers given to them at birth or they use it to their benefit. The Setting: (anywhere in the world you want but preferably near america) my character: -age:16 -Height:5'7 -clothing:Black hoodie, white shirt, black/white belt/ black pants, black/white shoes -apearencearted hair, brown eyes, -Weapons:cutlass in each hand -personality:Silent really silent, trys to blend in wit the public Your characters: (you could detail them anyway you want weapons or side powers of your choice) P.s tell me how i did on my story and everything first time narrating or starting and rp __________________ [br]Click here to feed me a Rare Candy![br]Get your own at PokePlushies! Games Currently waiting for Aion Last edited by Splyex; 10-20-2009 at 01:55 AM.

10-20-2009, 01:32 AM	#2 (permalink)
angel1234 Marineking's Minion Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: florida Posts: 2,900 Reputation: 24	its not bad... it could use some more details though... Name: Iggy Age: 17 Height: 6'7 Appearance: Weapons/Abilities: (see picture for sword) Sword and Unimaginable strength. __________________ "I have no particular talent. i am merely inquisitive" ~Albert Einstein A Life without Love is like a Car without Brakes. It'll work, but be cautious. ~Bloinx "Feeling no love, is like having no life" ~imushu

10-20-2009, 01:45 AM	#3 (permalink)
Splyex Cloud's Hair Spray Join Date: Jul 2007 Posts: 71 Reputation: 10	(like what plus nice character ) __________________ [br]Click here to feed me a Rare Candy![br]Get your own at PokePlushies! Games Currently waiting for Aion

10-20-2009, 01:47 AM	#4 (permalink)
angel1234 Marineking's Minion Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: florida Posts: 2,900 Reputation: 24	idk lol, its yur rp... but maybe some more backround on the stones inside the characters? and if the placement of the stone effects their powers? stuff like that, just details really lol __________________ "I have no particular talent. i am merely inquisitive" ~Albert Einstein A Life without Love is like a Car without Brakes. It'll work, but be cautious. ~Bloinx "Feeling no love, is like having no life" ~imushu

10-20-2009, 01:55 AM	#5 (permalink)
Splyex Cloud's Hair Spray Join Date: Jul 2007 Posts: 71 Reputation: 10	changed it a bit trying to get used to it __________________ [br]Click here to feed me a Rare Candy![br]Get your own at PokePlushies! Games Currently waiting for Aion

10-20-2009, 01:59 AM	#6 (permalink)
angel1234 Marineking's Minion Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: florida Posts: 2,900 Reputation: 24	okay, a little better... try adding in a link to what ever other thread you were talking about... red moon? so the people know what red moon was... if its not an rp, lightly discribe what its about __________________ "I have no particular talent. i am merely inquisitive" ~Albert Einstein A Life without Love is like a Car without Brakes. It'll work, but be cautious. ~Bloinx "Feeling no love, is like having no life" ~imushu

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