Old 11-05-2009, 06:49 AM   #61 (permalink)
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As i ran across the buildings i saw a group of people but did not pay attention and continued to the empire state building finished in 1931 you had to feel a bit of respect for it. As soon as i reached the convergence point i pulled out my Ipod and put on some earphones and started listening to 'i need a hero' by bonnie tyler i just loved it and was entranced by the music and did not even realise that i was there for a long time.
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Old 11-05-2009, 07:36 AM   #62 (permalink)
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As the crowd had gathered again it began shouting, cursing the mutants, not feeling as comfortable anymore Ketan stood up and began to walk away.
Hearing police sirens in the distant, the sound becoming weaker by the second he wondered if the mutant had got caught up with, finally having gotten out of the crowd he continued walking, lost in thoughts he passed a group of three, a bit absently he noted one of them wearing a white mask. Such odd people these days he thought to himself a bit ironically, he guessed being a mutant he made one of them.
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Old 11-05-2009, 08:15 AM   #63 (permalink)
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As people pass by on the street next to the alleyway, one guy seemed to look at them. Caim looked at the guy, while grabbing his own shoulder in order to rotate it a bit. He felt a bit stiff.

"Always staring.. guess I can't blame 'em", Caim said but not loud.

Caim stopped looking the guy on the street and resumed his position next to the wall. He looked at the ground, it was filled with litter, consisting vomit and broken bottles for instance.
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Old 11-05-2009, 04:13 PM   #64 (permalink)
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(( oh for jesus christ's...

Can you people PLEASE wait if I havn't posted in a while? I go out for a -day- and there's about 4 pages I have to read through in my own damn thread. >.> Especially when there are a few major plot points people have asked me about.

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And allso, Cel didn't go to collage and i'd prefer if you just knew him from when the shield was still in action. And you REALLY need to work on your grammar, Jake. I can barely read what you've typed half of the time. Same with the spelling, it doesn't even look like your trying tbh :|. Sorry to be mean. ))

Cel blinked in stunned suprise as the man floated down from the sky, his brilliant black wings spread out before him. He blinked, staring at him a few times before warily taking the clothes. "Uhm..." He started, then it seemed that people were bombarding him. He seemed confused by the sudden social interaction, he was not used to it. He began to hear sirens in the distance, and cursed. Before abruptly flipping, "Oh what the ****! I was just trying to blend in and then you people just crowd around me!" He exclaimed - by the time they had finished blabbering, people had proberly noticed the black-winged mutant - many were staring at him, and as the news bulliten began to disperce, the crowd was walking down the streets near the alleyway. Broken up, but still massive. Cel cursed under his breath as some of them began to run at the group, showing jeers of hatred. "Yeah, real nice move." He said, sighing and cursing again, "Thanks for the clothes though."
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Old 11-05-2009, 04:32 PM   #65 (permalink)
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(( Not much really, just idle chit-chat, people are getting to know each other. There's two groups (or sort of groups) which are in different locations: the other one includes Caim, Xyza, Charlie and possibly Ketan. The other one includes Cel, Nox, Jack and Serenity. Grief is a loner at the moment. Your group is heading to Empire State Building, but I don't remember why right now. That's about it I think ))
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Old 11-05-2009, 06:17 PM   #66 (permalink)
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(Sorry kain but i thought i was doing good on grammar its just i dont usualy check every word i type also i think you are mistaken i never said you went to college i said i went to college.)
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As I ran across the buildings I saw a group of people but did not pay attention and continued to the empire state building finished in 1931, you had to feel a bit of respect for it. As soon as I reached the convergence point i pulled out my Ipod and put on some earphones. I started listening to 'i need a hero' by bonnie tyler, I just loved it and was entranced by the music. I didn't even realise that I was there for a long time.
(( There :P You have to remember your commas, otherwise the sentances become over-long and a pain in the arse to read. ))
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"Nice to meet you both." Charlie flashed a friendly smile at the two people in front of him. He looked at Xysa properly, she had a spark in her eye that he liked, she seemed streetwise and smart too. A few years ago, if she had been a mutant, he would have put her forward for membership in The Shield.
Caim seemed different, he had a sense of hostility that Charlie didn't like.
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((fagar0n maybe a wierd question but do you pronounce Caim as Saim or Kaim, I think namely that it can be both.. :P))

Caim.. The name of the man turned around and around in Xyza's mind. He was kinda... strange but also he facinated her, he had some sort of arau around him that radiates hatred. Why.. I wonder. She thought. Charlie on the other hand seemed quite asure of himself, but well he seemed allright, for now. Double C.. is it coincedence.. or faith.. or neither of one
Another guy walked by, staring at Caim. She couldn't really blame him, Caim kinda looked weird, with his white mask. Nevertheless she called out to him. "Staring is not polite, you know." She said and her eyse made her way over his body. Today is a really weird day.. She thought chuckled.
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Charlie felt the future shifting, he had to do something now. He looked at the Xyza and Caim. "Look, today's going to get weirder, especially when the police arrive so I'm gonna get moving." He paused, "But can I offer either of you a coffee? I'm heading by a cafe and you're welcome to come with me if you want?"
That was a possible future that was available.
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