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chris45

(Hi, this is based off a story I have been working on for not to long now.)
(PLEASE.. tell me if its any good cause i want to know if my story is any good)

The earth has been devastated by a nuclear holocaust. The earth is almost inhabitable. seeing human's on the surface is a rarity, most humans have gone into hiding. some rein over the surface and try to survive on what is left from the world before. Humans now kill each other for things that would usually be thrown away. How was all this caused you might be thinking. war?,madness?, maybe greed? it was a mix of all of those. The humans went to war with each other over money and land. this caused alliances of nations to be broken. Everyone was driven mad. but all of that doesn't matter to you because you aren't one of the humans at least not anymore. why? or how? you might ask well you see. You are different. You have mutated,your appearance may seem human but your body and/or mind are different. by that I mean you could be stronger or smarter than the normal human but that's not all depending on how you mutated there is a chance for you to gain abilities that humans could only dream of... like mind reading, or super strength. It is up to you to use these abilities to keep you alive until you reach your goal. your goal is to make it to the west, to a land known as pandorum. this land is said to be untouched by the nuclear aftermath.

(so here is some info you might want to know)

THE ENEMIES

The animals of earth before still exist but they have mutated making them more voracious. They have replaced man as top of the food chain. also where there is one, another lies in wait. also other humans can't always be trusted some humans have resorted to eating each other. those humans who have. cause them selves to mutate to such an extent that they don't look human at all. they look more alien then human the have long nails that are almost as hard as steel. their teeth are like that of sharks. and they have tails with a spear like point at the end.

CITIES

You will start off in either a capitol or somewhere in the north,east or south areas of the world. each area has a capital. In the north the town named rodend is the capital it is known as the city of ice because it blizzards constantly and ice covers everything , In the south soladren known as the fire capital because volcanoes erupt all the time and during the day it reaches a high of 134 degrees and at night it reaches a low of 115. in the east the capitol is Atlantis just like what it is named after the city is slowly sinking into the cold negative degree water. all of these cities are made from the steel and wood that the buildings of the world before were made from. the cities tallest buildings stand about 30 feet high.

Abilities

there are two types of abilities one is named "muscle" these types of abilities involve your character using there body as a weapon. like super strength or things along that line. one thing this also applies to is being able to change your body, like shape shifting. or changing your body parts into weapons like changing your hand into an ax.(yes its possible in this Rp. have fun with that.) the second type of ability is called control what this involves is being able to control weak minded enemies, telekinsis, levitation, teleportation, element control and many more. this type of ability can be considered close to magic like.

Weapons
any types of weapons can be used primitive weapons like knives,swords spears. and modern weapons like. grenades,machine guns and rocket launchers. but with modern weapons bullets are scarce and hard to find. keep that in mind when coming up with your weapons.

(so finally here is the character sheet)

Name: (first names only is fine, if you want to put the last name that's OK to, also nicknames or code names are good to.)

Age: (16-28)

gender: (yea I think you know what to put here)

Appearance: (pics are good but put some text in for the stuff about your character that the pic doesn't show)

Personality: (I think you know what to put here)

primary weapon: (scroll up if you need clarification)(this doesn't have to be a big weapon like a assault rifle or something. it is just the weapon you use most)

secondary weapon: (The second weapon you use)

skills: (i forgot to put this above but your character can have skills like he or she could have done martial arts before the nuclear war. stuff like that.)

main ability: (scroll up for more info)

secondary ability: (this must be of the same type as your main. so if your main was able to change body parts into weapons. then this one cant be able to control fire. your main and second must be of the same type either control or muscle.)

bio: ( just give a brief back story, it doesn't have to be long but if your character has mutations he or she needs to have been hit by the nuclear aftermath indirectly. EX: your character could have been in a building that had holes in it and when the dust from the blast got in your character breathed it in.)

(here is mine)

Name:Emil aka Fang

age:17

Gender:Male

Appearance:



the jacket that he wears has a picture of a white wolf on it. he wears dark black pants and black shoes.

Personality: he can be a kind person, but when he just meets someone he never trusts them. when he gets to know some one he can be a great friend and a valuable ally.

Primary weapon: A double bladed spear.

Secondary weapon: two revolvers

skills: Emil studied martial arts since he was 10. Emil uses his martial arts skills when he doesn't have his weapons available.

main ability: Ice control - Emil can freeze things that he touches, he can cause blizzards to form and stop and he can also manipulate ice to take any form he wishes.

secondary ability:Telekinesis- he can levitate items with his mind.

Bio: when the nuclear war started Emil tried to get to shelter as fast and he could but he could only find a car to hide in. he hid in the car but when the wave from the bombs hit the car it broke the car's window cause Emil to breath in the dust from the aftermath and it sent Emil and the car flying. when the car hit the ground Emil was alive but he had passed out. When Emil had awoken he found himself in house. Emil saw the door and he ran for it but he was pulled away from it by someone. Emil fell to the ground and he turned around and saw a man standing over him with a knife. Emil didn't know what to do, he tried to run but the man stopped him. the man had Emil cornered when the man tried to stab Emil the knife stopped in midair it wouldn't move the man let go of the knife and it stayed afloat. the man the grabbed Emil and tried to choke him. Emil grabbed the man's arms and the man froze. Emil didn't know what was happening to him, he ran out the door and he laid on the ground. Emil began to cry because he didn't know who he was. He saw something on the ground and he picked it up it was a wallet. inside the wallet was an I.D. it had the name Emil but the last name was to hard to read. Emil then took the wallet and he put it in his back pants pocket. Emil then walked away from the house and he headed north.

(please tell me if anything confuses you just Pm me cause i don't mind answering questions, also please Pm me if you have comments about this cause i like to hear people opinions on my work it only helps me get better.)

plasmidpwner

((I like the idea!))

Name: Marcus Price a.k.a. Marksmen

Age: 26

gender: Male

Appearance: ((Couldn't find a pic.)) Marksmen wears usually anything he can find, but mostly he wears black military fatigues. With black combat boots, and black leather gloves. He usually wears a black trench coat with a full head black gas mask ((Covers both front and back.))

Personality: Determined, un-sociable ((Doesn't really talk to people.)), can seem un-caring even though he is willing to go to great lengths to protect a comrade.

primary weapon: Dual M9 pistols

secondary weapon: Machette

skills: Combat training ((He has mastered a variety of combat techniques that he intertwines into a strange yet brutal fighting technique.))

main ability: Increased Strength, Marksmen has increased strength allowing him to leap farther, run faster, hit harder, etc. But he can become tired and hungry very quickly due to how much energy he uses.

secondary ability: Tough skin, Marksmens skin is unnaturally tough. He can take serious punishment from guns, knives, even fists. He isn't bulletproof, but he can take more gunshots than normal people.

bio: Marcus reacted like every other citizen when the bombs exploded, he attempted to reach shelter but to no avail. All he could find was a small shack, the explosion sent clouds of iradiated dust everywere. Most of it seemed to land in the numerous wounds on his body ((causing a more muscular and physical mutation.)) He awoke soon after to find the world he once knew destroyed, he traveled carrying only what he had before the explosions. He soon was lucky to find what was the remains of the armory. All that was left was a pair of M9's, the rest was damaged beyond repair. He soon set out and found the capitol Atlantis. He took refuge there waiting for what would happen next.

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chris45

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Frodei

Name: Victor "Creed"

Age: 27

gender: Male

Appearance:

On his back, he got a big flame marking.

Personality: He is a loner, as he never trusts anyone, he would never risk his own beeing to save another.

primary weapon: Sword.

secondary weapon: Deagle

skills: Before the Nukes he was a parkour pro. He was fast, and very agile.

main ability: Fire . He uses Fire, in any way he seems usable, to send out in waves, or cause just summon it from the ground etc.

secondary ability: Teleportation, Not far distances, but long enough, to either escape or get behind enemys.

bio: When the alarm had started, he instantly tried to get to a shelter, but on his way there, he had lost his little sister. He had to run back and look for her. He found her in the middle of the road, crying. He had picked her up, and he ran home, he laid her under the bed, and he tried to get any possible shelter. From the explosion he had cme in contact with some irradiated dust. It knocked him out. When he woke up, he noticed his sister was gone. He left the house, starting to search for her.

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chris45

(ok you are accepted.)

masterichi

Name:Roland "Snake"

Age:23

Gender:male

Appearance: http://media.photobucket.com/image/a...pygaia.jpg?o=3 (the tattoo on his face is that of a snake, he carries the suitcase on his back.)

Personality: Roland was never trusting to begin with. He tries not to make friends because he has lost so many already. But Roland will protect the friends he has with his life.

Primary weapon: L96 sniper rifle (here is what it looks like)http://www.mod.uk/NR/rdonlyres/2E8E4...iperRifle2.jpg

secondary weapon: SIG 556 (here is what it looks like) http://www.make-it-so.com/Guns/SIG/5...6LeftLarge.jpg

skills: Roland was a trained assassin in the past he worked for the mafia and learned all their tricks and secrets.

Primary ability: Arm blade- allows Roland to turn his arms into deadly blades.

secondary ability: Animal eyes- allows Roland to see perfectly in pitch black darkness, also able to see things miles away from him.

Bio: Roland was in the middle of a Job when the nukes hit. Roland tried to run and hide but he couldn't the dust from the blast got into his eyes. Roland couldn't see and he held his hands out in front of him trying to find out where he was. he ended up stabbing himself with broken glass. the glass dug into his hands and then the dust from the blast got in his wounds. Roland eventually found a garage to stay in. the garage was pitch black Roland slowly opened his eyes and he could see perfectly. his eyes had mutated and changed. Roland then looked at his hands and he saw the glass. he pulled out the glass from both of his hands and he sank down to the ground. he didn't know what to do with himself. he decided to stay in the garage until things started to clear up.

Hromoplast

Name: Unknown, but likes to be called "Slaver"

Age: 26

Gender: Male

Appearance: Above average in height for a non-mutated human, has snow-white hair and tough looking tanned skin. Wears a rugged pair of trousers and a leather jacket.

Personality: Very intelligent, not used to company of other people.

Primary weapon: Twin blades he smelted from some unknown metal.

secondary weapon: A crossbreed of a bow and crossbow.

Skills: Only physical activity he had in the years prior to the war was hockey so he can fight dirty better than anyone.

Main ability: He realized that he now has amazing skills at perception. He just knows almost all properties of practically any object around him by just looking at it.


Secondary ability: He was "blessed" by toughness in both his skin and bones after the Nuclear apocalypse.

Bio: He passed out at the moment the shock wave of the Nuke hit him. He woke up from his 3day coma unharmed. Well that's what he thought.

chris45

(ok you guys are accepted, i will start in just a bit.)

Emil awakens to the bitter cold that has engulfed his room. he thinks to himself"" man, I am lucky I found this city when I did. I can just imagine what its like outside."" Emil opens the door, he then grabs his jacket, his spear,his guns and he walks out into a small hallway. he finds the stairs and he walks down them. there is a man standing at a makeshift counter that seems to be made from wood or something like it. Emil goes over to the man and he takes a small broken pocket watch from his pocket. he gives it to the man and he says " this should cover my stay right?" the man's hands start to tremble and shake he reaches for the watch and says"oh this is quite nice. it should cover you for at least two more nights" Emil looks at him and he says" good well I will be back shortly." Emil walks outside into the icy blizzard. Emil looks out at the snow covered city. Emil walks over to a small house it seems as if it is a store of some kind. Emil walks inside. a man is standing at a counter he is holding a gun and he says "who are you stranger your not from around here, If you dont want me to blow your head off i suggest you put your hands in the air" Emil does what the man asks and he then walks over to the counter Emil says to the man "I just wanted to see what you have in here I need some supplies before I go back on the road" the man looks at Emil he then puts his gun away and he tells Emil "go ahead and have a look around, I got some of the finest things around." Emil looks around and he finds a box of bullets. Emil grabs the bullets and he keeps looking. Emil doesn't see anything else of interest so he goes up to the man and he places the box on the counter and he places a pocket knife nest to it. the man takes the knife and he gestures for Emil to leave. Emil takes the box of bullets and he walks out of the store. Emil goes back into the house he was staying in and he goes up to the man at the counter and he says " I'm going to be leaving now so I am going to be needing my watch back." the man points a gun at Emil's head and Emil grabs the gun and it freezes the man drops the gun and he places the watch on the counter Emil takes it and he leaves the house. Emil starts to walk south. the icy snow from the blizzard hits Emil. Emil then looks up at the sky with eyes so red them seem as if they are soaked in blood. the blizzard then ceases and Emil continues walking south.

plasmidpwner

Marksmen woke up to the sound of splashing water. "Screw this damn city, can't even get a good nights sleep with all this water splashing everywere." Marksmen muttered as he sat up on the small dirty bed in his small dirty room. He took out a piece of cloth and spit on it, then he proceeded to wipe a semi-clean spot on the grimey window. He looked out to see that it was almost morning due to the rising sun. "Time to leave." Marksmen mumbled as he slipped on his boots and trench coat. He slipped his two M9's in there rightfull place in there holsters. He then grabbed his machette and slid it into the sheath on his back. He grabbed his pack and slipped it onto his back. He pulled on his gas mask as he stepped outside. He was met with cold water splashing against his face. He approached a counter were a man was sleeping and snoring loudly. He tossed what was left of a pack of cigarettes on the counter. The man shuttered and opened his eyes. "Payment for the nights stay." Marksmen said quietly to the man. "Aye, this ain't gonna' be enough. I need something a bit more, valuable." The man said with a greedy glint in his eye. "This'll have to do." Marksmen said to the man with an edge of malice in his voice. "I don't think you bees hearin' me boy. This ain't enough." Marksmen moved his trench coat over to the side showing off his M9 pistols. "This'll have to do." He repiled again. "Oh, you have a gun do ya'. So does every other damn person out here. Hell, even I got one." With that the man grabbed the handle of a sawn off shotgun. "Put the gun down. You really don't want to point that at me. If you do, I'll plant a bullet straight between your eyes." Marksmen said as he gripped his M9. "Fine, I'll let ya' slide this time. Just get your *** movin'." With that the man put the shotgun down and signaled for Marksmen to leave. "Thank you." Marksmen muttered as he walked away.

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Hromoplast

(( ok guys, who's meeting who? xD Plasmid, ima coming your way, so it's kinda up to you if we meet or not... ))

Slaver shook of the dirt from his quiver as he woke up inside the remains of a commercial building he took shelter in over the night. The building was a massive one before it had gone down, and Slaver can imagine it going 50 stories high and more than twice that in both length and width.
He looked slowly into his quiver and realized that there we're only 10 bolts left.
Goddamnit. Already time to make a new batch., he thought.
In the far corner of the room lay the remains of a dead non mutated deer. Slaver was smart enough not to eat the flesh that was already decomposing.
He took out his blade and sliced the back of the corpse. Inside the slice, larvae we're scuttling. He grabbed a handful and headed out of the building.
He could see someone watching him from the tops of almost all the buildings but he did not care for he did not pose a threat to them. Slaver though he should go visit the legendary capitol city of Atlantis where he thought he should stay for a while to replenish his supplies and weapons.