Old 03-02-2010, 03:50 PM   #211 (permalink)
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Forced to move and climb the stepladder Kayla placed her hands on the bars and started to climb, the deamons right behind her. She knew that they laughed at her but she pretended not the notice, she didn't care about it anyway. When she arrived at the end of the stepladder and sticker her head through the opening she first was dazzled by the sudden outburst of light that made her narrow her eyes and move her hand up. Next was an explosion of sounds. In her 'cell' it had been quiet except for the hammering sound but suddenly like a wave all kinds of sounds hit her making her ears squeak. The deamon behind her started to push and Kayla had no other option than to move futher up.

When she finally stood on the ground again, sand actually or something that looked very much alike to sand, she looked around and almost fell over from suprise. The hammering sound had swollen and had become some sort of beat but she now saw where it was coming from.

She was standing on a large round open pace covered with 'sand' that was surrounded by grandstands. It was like the Coloseum in ancient times in Rome. The stands were filled with hunderd, thousend deamons that were all stamping and marching on there place and so creating the hammering sound she had heard in her 'cell'. To her left she saw a bit more decorated grandstand where only one deamon was sitting and another one was standing next to him. It was better that he was standing for there wasn't possible a way that he could sit down. This deamon was huge, like mega huge and purple with big, large hands with five fingers.

"FRIENDS!" Suddenly an extreme loud voice emerged out of nowhere and the hammering sound lowered to a soft beat as the person who made this sound continued.

"And for our next battle we can praise our great hunters for this will be the battle of the day! What am I saying! Not from the day, from the year, the era!" The crowd started to scream and yell. Their raw voices hurted Kayla's ears. "For this battle will have a very special contestant!" All eyes turned to Kayla who wanted to run back to her safe and comfortable cell and she would have done it if that had been possible but it was not. What she noticed now was that her guardians had dissapeard and that the platform had been closed. The only things left behind except her were two long blades standing up straight in the ground.

My blades?!

"We haven't had this kind of battle since the time of Grasishn VI!" The voice continued driving the crowd mad. "Yes my fellow deamons on this side we have a GUARDIAN! A fresh and newborn guardian ready to be tested. And on the otherside..." All eyes including Kayla's moved over to the other side of the stadium where a platform started to move and something started to appear out of the darkness.
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Old 03-02-2010, 04:38 PM   #212 (permalink)
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Revun opened his eyes wide as he saw kyaputen-Rayne charging at him, his sword starting to turn to what seemed like a thick, blackening red liquid and him, being so tired. He jumped up and was sweating, his sword blade literally turning to liquid.

"cmon, i can do this..." he thought in his head.
Strike at him! "I CANT!"
why not? I am completely ready for you, just strike!
"You're completely ready? What?"
Thats enough information for you, go!

Revun got up all the way swooing a little right then, and then held his sword in both hands. He charged at his captain and swung, sword against sword, then all of the sudden a hardening of ice like sound was heard. and you can see kyaputen-Rayne's blade is in the middle of Revun's. "What the hell~!?" he said, amazed. When all of the sudden it turned back to liquid and Revun ran backwards.

Good job, Kid he heard in his head. His mind was starting to go blank and he had started to see everything a little fuzzy. Revun ran back to the rest of the group, behind them all and he fell to the ground, coughing up blood. he got onto one knee and was starting to rest a little.
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Old 03-02-2010, 06:17 PM   #213 (permalink)
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Alistair has now Channeled a huge amount of energy into Pain,Alistair Spins around in a circle sending dust and dirt flying everywhere,he then Throws Pain at Rayne, Alistair just realized that pain Had disappeared and all you could see was a trail of dust leading to Rayne it appeared as if Pain had become invisible,

'what the hell is up with that?' alistair thought to him self has Pain's Dust trail was at the Verge of hitting Rayne's Blindside,Alistair fell to his knees and hands 'Damn i have used way to much energy i dont think i can keep this up much longer' He thought to himself has he starred at the Rock-solid ground,
He then Stumbles back up to his feet he takes his right hand and Grabs Death,

Energy from Death Starting pouring into Alistair, 'Whats going on!' alistair thought to himself as a Very Deep and Dark Purple and Black Colored energy started to pour into Alistair and around his right arm,Alistairs Eyes Become a Deeper and Deeper Red Has the more and more of the mysterious energy flowed into him, "He Screamed at "Rayne,What is happening to me?",As soon as he said that His eyes Become A blood red color with a speck of Dark blue in the middle by this time the energy was Twirling all around alistair destroying anything that it came into Contact with.


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((Hey TKkira, can you put periods? Its kinda hard to read when its just one big run on sentence. Not trying to be mean, but its pretty hard to understand your post when you are trying to respond to it))
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((Yes, please put periods. It makes everything so much easier to read and understand. Also, can you maybe try to cap things, like the beggining of sentences, or what not. If you could I would appreciate it.))
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Old 03-03-2010, 12:05 AM   #216 (permalink)
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((everyone pick on TK,then why dont they haha j/k,yeah guys i'll try but i will warn you i suck at Grammer and proper puncation or however you spell that,Sorry to cause trouble for you all))
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