Old 02-25-2010, 07:41 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Well been awhile since I last made a sig and since this section is once more dead for the most part maybe this will bring some life back into it.



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Old 03-06-2010, 08:50 PM   #2 (permalink)
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The depth has potential, it looks good. The colouring and lighting however is off a bit. Its tough working with brown, but I can see a bit of magenta from the C4D which if you add will spicen it up. Also a bit of sharpness might help and remove the Xs.
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Old 03-06-2010, 10:05 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Glad to see someone decided to reply after 91 views .

Care to go more in depth about the coloring and lighting, more so the coloring? As it stands it looks pretty good my my point of view.
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Old 03-09-2010, 07:36 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Just add a bit of contrast to the colouring, it's a bit coffee bland if you get what I mean. And the lighting needs rework. As their are multiple sources none of which that correlate with the stock.
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Old 03-14-2010, 01:27 PM   #5 (permalink)
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I don't fully agree with availer. You should change the lighting, but that's all. It looks REALLY great. Well done.
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