Old 02-26-2010, 11:40 PM   #1 (permalink)
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So, my first attempt at text.


And the resized one.


C&C please, i want to improve it so it looks better ^^.

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Old 02-27-2010, 02:57 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Thats a cool one you got there, now of course all you need to do is add somethings, i dont know if this is what you were going for in the beginning, but that text goes perfectly with most circular vector styles, i would most likely think about that as a possibility.
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Old 02-27-2010, 04:28 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Try something simple like,



, look at it in a black background.
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Try something simple like,



, look at it in a black background.
Euhm, don't know if you noticed, but its the effect i made, its not just type it in and save, i edited it for a kind of moon effect, if you are able to see it ''
I know how to make reflections and lines, its effect what I'm new to.
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Old 02-27-2010, 09:59 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Simple but looks good
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Old 02-27-2010, 10:12 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Simple but looks good
Thats kinda what i wanted out of it .

Il try some more colours xD.
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The edges look too soft/blurry if you'd ask me. ><
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Euhm, don't know if you noticed, but its the effect i made, its not just type it in and save, i edited it for a kind of moon effect, if you are able to see it ''
I know how to make reflections and lines, its effect what I'm new to.
it's just a gradient and some outer glow >.>

try and keep it sharp when starting with text, any sort of blur if not handled correctly screams novice.
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it's just a gradient and some outer glow >.>

try and keep it sharp when starting with text, any sort of blur if not handled correctly screams novice.
Seems rather sharp to me.

And try to add ''Just'' glows and gradients, you will see you will have an different outcome =/.
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