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Hatashi · 02-27-2010, 04:33 PM

So, after Serix and Kluey gave their opinion on my first attempt, i decided to give it another go, this one seems more decent.
Still working on the strokes though!

Here it is.

Had another go at the ''Plain and simple'' type, used the same font, different background, i like it, but who am i to decide if my work is good or not xD.
I wanted another color for the font, but couldn't find anything matching the gradient+stroke ;/.
Also made it kinda sharper, assuming no wane liked the blurry part xD.
So Kluey and Serix, C&C again please!

drawnzer54 · 02-27-2010, 04:59 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Hatashi

So, after Serix and Kluey gave their opinion on my first attempt, i decided to give it another go, this one seems more decent.
Still working on the strokes though!

Here it is.

Had another go at the ''Plain and simple'' type, used the same font, different background, i like it, but who am i to decide if my work is good or not xD.
I wanted another color for the font, but couldn't find anything matching the gradient+stroke ;/.
Also made it kinda sharper, assuming no wane liked the blurry part xD.
So Kluey and Serix, C&C again please!

The gradient kinda fails, there's no transition between the gray and white.
And the @ sign looks a little messy, but I'm sure that's just the text style.
Other then that, it's good.

Hatashi · 02-27-2010, 05:02 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by drawnzer54

The gradient kinda fails, there's no transition between the gray and white.
And the @ sign looks a little messy, but I'm sure that's just the text style.
Other then that, it's good.

I could make the gradient less, if thats what you mean.

Here, i changed the font+background colour, also reduced gradient.

I'm having a really hard time with the colors, can't get the right colors so they can match...
Maybe you could help =/?

drawnzer54 · 02-27-2010, 05:18 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Hatashi

I could make the gradient less, if thats what you mean.

Here, i changed the font+background colour, also reduced gradient.

I'm having a really hard time with the colors, can't get the right colors so they can match...
Maybe you could help =/?

I'm not so good with color theory, myself.
Here's two websites that will help you in choosing colors though.

http://colortheory.liquisoft.com/
http://www.worqx.com/color/

Also, by the gradient I mean this.
Linear Gradient
Opacity = 72
Scale = 119
Angle = 90

Don't get me wrong, it looks good.
Try it with what I mention though, and let me see the result.

Linear Gradient
Opacity = 72
Scale = 119
Angle = 90

Another tool that might help you, that I just decided to find for myself:
http://www.adobe.com/cfusion/exchang...&extid=1044729

Kluey · 02-27-2010, 09:56 PM

Take away the background to make it transparent. Also every single word doesn't have to be the same size. For example,

Hatashi · 02-27-2010, 10:24 PM

How about this?

Gah, i suck at this shit xD.

Kluey · 02-27-2010, 10:26 PM

Try...

Hatashi
________________@OnRPG

Hatashi · 02-27-2010, 11:02 PM

What does ''Interlaced'' mean o_o.
Every time i save an image, it asks me if i want it interlaced or not..

Lorek · 02-28-2010, 12:13 AM

Your best in my opinion is your first attempt.

This: http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/295...shiatonrpg.png

ZormaX · 02-28-2010, 12:16 AM

Hey, Think Of Different Ways of having text instead of just putting them in. Horizontally. Depends on the effect you wanna do.

Since HATASHI is the main focus. Make it bigger and a darker color thn the one at the bottom. Just a suggestion.

I like what you've done so far though

02-27-2010, 04:33 PM	#1 (permalink)
Hatashi Banned Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Chechnya Posts: 3,284 Reputation: 237	Second attempt at text! So, after Serix and Kluey gave their opinion on my first attempt, i decided to give it another go, this one seems more decent. Still working on the strokes though! Here it is. Had another go at the ''Plain and simple'' type, used the same font, different background, i like it, but who am i to decide if my work is good or not xD. I wanted another color for the font, but couldn't find anything matching the gradient+stroke ;/. Also made it kinda sharper, assuming no wane liked the blurry part xD. So Kluey and Serix, C&C again please! Last edited by Hatashi; 02-27-2010 at 04:35 PM.

02-27-2010, 09:56 PM	#5 (permalink)
Kluey Game Journalist Join Date: Jul 2008 Posts: 982 Reputation: 44	Take away the background to make it transparent. Also every single word doesn't have to be the same size. For example, __________________

02-27-2010, 10:26 PM	#7 (permalink)
Kluey Game Journalist Join Date: Jul 2008 Posts: 982 Reputation: 44	Try... Hatashi ________________@OnRPG __________________

02-28-2010, 12:13 AM	#9 (permalink)
Lorek Cingal's Collar Join Date: May 2006 Location: Dunbarton Posts: 1,505 Reputation: 20	Your best in my opinion is your first attempt. This: http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/295...shiatonrpg.png __________________ NADragon Nest: Name: Lorek NAMabinogi: Ruari \| Name:Lorek - Retired TWMabinogi: 貝婷伺服器 \| Name:Kuchiki - Retired

02-28-2010, 12:16 AM	#10 (permalink)
ZormaX Marineking's Minion Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Home Posts: 2,907 Reputation: 79	Hey, Think Of Different Ways of having text instead of just putting them in. Horizontally. Depends on the effect you wanna do. Since HATASHI is the main focus. Make it bigger and a darker color thn the one at the bottom. Just a suggestion. I like what you've done so far though __________________ Fiora Pentakill - League Of Legends http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jYRMl8gXQRs

02-27-2010, 10:24 PM	#6 (permalink)
Hatashi Banned Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Chechnya Posts: 3,284 Reputation: 237	How about this? Gah, i suck at this shit xD.

02-27-2010, 11:02 PM	#8 (permalink)
Hatashi Banned Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Chechnya Posts: 3,284 Reputation: 237	What does ''Interlaced'' mean o_o. Every time i save an image, it asks me if i want it interlaced or not..

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