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artlanzer · 03-08-2010, 07:46 AM

Hi, I can illustrate your MMORPG Character and make a poster, pin-up or wallpaper for a minimal fee. I'm a comic book artist just looking for some projects to work on during my free time. Anybody interested? Just reply here or e-mail me through artlanzer@gmail.com if your interested.

Paladuck · 03-08-2010, 08:16 AM

Post some examples of your work?

artlanzer · 03-08-2010, 08:55 AM

Here's a sample of my work:

uhjpae · 03-08-2010, 10:51 AM

That's a nice one!

IronyTaken · 03-08-2010, 11:32 AM

Good drawing but you need to work on anatomy a little more.

The guy on top of the shield has his hand the wrong way. And his left leg is either too short or not positioned correctly with what you want to convey.

Captain America has disproportionate legs too. Also I am not sure what that brown stuff is below them that seems to engulf parts of their bodies.

Oisterboy · 03-08-2010, 12:01 PM

WOW. That is awesome.

To be honest, I was expecting something like this...

But wow, you really stepped it up there. Nice.

thedudesam · 03-08-2010, 12:26 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by IronyTaken

Good drawing but you need to work on anatomy a little more.

The guy on top of the shield has his hand the wrong way. And his left leg is either too short or not positioned correctly with what you want to convey.

Captain America has disproportionate legs too. Also I am not sure what that brown stuff is below them that seems to engulf parts of their bodies.

With "Good drawing" as the only praise praise and the rest criticism, sorry but i have to ask can YOU do better?

I think the picture was absolutely stunning, great work.

What prices are we talking here? just out of intrest.

Espio0 · 03-08-2010, 12:39 PM

i've got this feeling that norrin is going to make you rich.

IronyTaken · 03-08-2010, 04:03 PM

Wow you guys don't understand what constructive criticism is.

Seriously stop b*tching.

His drawing is good and it has some nice uses of lighting and colors.

What would be the point of only praising a person?

They do not improve that way and there is always room for improvement.

Adding criticism helps others improve their knowledge and skills.

He has a good understanding of how cloth weighs and the wrinkles.
And he understands how shading is applied depending on the varied light source/s.

But some of his stuff looks a little flat in comparison with other stuff that has depth in them. The helmets on the soldiers are a little flat especially the one in the lower right corner.

And the muzzle flash seems a little out of place when comparing it to the consistency in the overall piece. Maybe clean some of the yellows in the flash so they blend better together.

And again the guy above the shield has his right hand that looks like a left hand.

Xenonight2 · 03-08-2010, 04:11 PM

@IronyTaken: That guy was trolling and his post has been moderated and dealt with. In the future, I recommend simply reporting troll posts like that one and carry on with what you are doing. No need to waste your time by responding to it - we mods can handle that part. Onrpg encourages constructive criticism.

(Your response post will stay, too, since it contains more constructive criticism for the OP.)

03-08-2010, 07:46 AM	#1 (permalink)
artlanzer Marios's Mustache Wax Join Date: Mar 2010 Posts: 4 Reputation: 10	I can illustrate your MMORPG Character Hi, I can illustrate your MMORPG Character and make a poster, pin-up or wallpaper for a minimal fee. I'm a comic book artist just looking for some projects to work on during my free time. Anybody interested? Just reply here or e-mail me through artlanzer@gmail.com if your interested. Last edited by artlanzer; 03-08-2010 at 07:49 AM.

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Paladuck Roon's Rogue Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: The Pond Posts: 4,270 Reputation: 260	Post some examples of your work? __________________

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uhjpae Rock Man Join Date: May 2009 Posts: 510 Reputation: 11	That's a nice one! __________________ My Game

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Oisterboy \| (• ◡•)\| (❍ᴥ❍ʋ) Join Date: May 2006 Location: Just Past Jupiter Posts: 16,558 Reputation: 644	WOW. That is awesome. To be honest, I was expecting something like this... But wow, you really stepped it up there. Nice. __________________

03-08-2010, 04:03 PM	#9 (permalink)
IronyTaken Banned Join Date: Jan 2009 Posts: 8,400 Reputation: 292	Wow you guys don't understand what constructive criticism is. Seriously stop btching. His drawing is good and it has some nice uses of lighting and colors. What would be the point of only praising a person? They do not improve that way and there is always room for improvement. Adding criticism helps others improve their knowledge and skills. He has a good understanding of how cloth weighs and the wrinkles. And he understands how shading is applied depending on the varied light source/s. But some of his stuff looks a little flat in comparison with other stuff that has depth in them. The helmets on the soldiers are a little flat especially the one in the lower right corner. And the muzzle flash seems a little out of place when comparing it to the consistency in the overall piece. Maybe clean some of the yellows in the flash so they blend better together. And again the guy above the shield has his right hand that looks like a left hand. Last edited by IronyTaken; 03-08-2010 at 04:13 PM.*

03-08-2010, 08:55 AM	#3 (permalink)
artlanzer Marios's Mustache Wax Join Date: Mar 2010 Posts: 4 Reputation: 10	Here's a sample of my work:

03-08-2010, 11:32 AM	#5 (permalink)
IronyTaken Banned Join Date: Jan 2009 Posts: 8,400 Reputation: 292	Good drawing but you need to work on anatomy a little more. The guy on top of the shield has his hand the wrong way. And his left leg is either too short or not positioned correctly with what you want to convey. Captain America has disproportionate legs too. Also I am not sure what that brown stuff is below them that seems to engulf parts of their bodies.

03-08-2010, 04:11 PM	#10 (permalink)
Xenonight2 POPOPOPGOESTHEGLOCKGLOCK Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 8,335 Reputation: 321	@IronyTaken: That guy was trolling and his post has been moderated and dealt with. In the future, I recommend simply reporting troll posts like that one and carry on with what you are doing. No need to waste your time by responding to it - we mods can handle that part. Onrpg encourages constructive criticism. (Your response post will stay, too, since it contains more constructive criticism for the OP.) __________________

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