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Old 10-12-2010, 01:55 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Well, just a 3D car I am making in 3DS Max, I will keep you guys up to date about the progress, so far I got this:

Renders without texture:

Front


Rear


Front textured


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A 3DS Max screenshot to show you all what the program is like:






To do list:
  • Unwrapping of the 3D model.
  • Texturing of the 3D model.
  • I might normal map the 3D model as well.


CnC (Comments and Criticism) please.
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Old 10-12-2010, 04:50 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Looks terrible, sorry
The car's way too stretched into the air, the tires are too big, the body too slim, it lacks details and the polygon count is too low for a car D;
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still looks decent imo.
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Old 10-15-2010, 01:22 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Well, yea it's my first car so I guess it's alright-ish but improvements are definitely possible.

Anyways I updated the thread with the textured renders.
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Try to increase the polygon count for the tires atleast, make 'em round ;o
I recommend you Cinema 4D instead of 3dsmax though, its waaaay better for beginners
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Old 10-19-2010, 02:27 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Looks terrible, sorry
The car's way too stretched into the air, the tires are too big, the body too slim, it lacks details and the polygon count is too low for a car D;
Its called constructive criticism...not be a dick...cism
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Its called constructive criticism...not be a dick...cism

It's constructive. I told him which parts need to be changed...seriously, grow some balls. I didn't say "omg fugly delete it" ¬¬
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omg fugly delete it
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omg fugly delete it
I just lol'd.

Anyway, it looks pretty cool to me o;
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