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Old 06-23-2009, 07:43 PM   #399 (permalink)
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Dzi returned back to the evil fortress, ready to confront Raynye. Dzi knew he failed his mission so he was ready to accept death. Upon entering the everyone stared at him. Raynye stood in the middle, his arms crossed. Next to him were the 3 who tailed Dzi. As fast as a flash of lightning, Raynye pulled out his sword, turned it on fire and was in front of Dzi, the sword inches from Dzi' neck. "You know.." Raynye said in a quiet voice, even though everyone could hear him due to the silent room. "I probably would have killed you it wasn't for that girl" He motioned over to one of the tailers and she pulled down her hood, revealing a beautiful face. She was around the same age as Dzi. "She is one of the most beautiful and favored people in my group. She doesnt like many people and your luckly she has taken a liking in you" The fire faded and Raynye put his sword away. He pat Dzi on the back and waved his other hand in the air as to celebrate. Music started playing and people starting to laugh and drink. Dzi got away from Raynye and sat himself against a wall, contemplating what just happened.

He didnt lose his life, and it felt good, real good to live. He also thought about the professors words. I hope you find your way back home he repeated over and over in his mind. He then looked up and noticed the girl who saved his life coming over to him. "The name is Ves" she said as she handed out her hand. Not really paying attention, Dzi continued to stare at the floor, thinking. Putting her hands on her hips, she said in an annoyed mood "Well, thanks for listening to your savior". She playfully turned away as if mad. "Oh Im sorry", Dzi said still in a daze. He looked up into her face and said sincerely "I owe you alot, I am thankful." Blushing a second, she replied "Don't think I am letting you off that easily. Your gonna be serving under me now!" This knocked Dzi out of his dazed mood and he looked at her like she was crazy. As the party continued, Dzi felt himself getting more familiar with everyone, as if he knew them for years. One would not notice that this was the evil organization, that threatens all humanity.


(I am trying to do accouple of things. One I am trying to kill some time. I dont want my return to be like a day later. Two, Im trying to show the evil side of things. To them, we are the bad people, while to us they are. I wish there was some kind of clock or something that could tell how much time has passed.)
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