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Old 08-19-2011, 02:14 AM   #11 (permalink)
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No I wouldn't purchase it. Just bein honest.

But you can make money from writing books online? :O How much would publishing it cost and all that and would they want a certain percentage too or something. I could totalleh go write me up some bookness

But yeah um about yours, not trying to be overly criticizing but it sounds really generic and done before although I wouldn't know exactly as I haven't read yours so I can't say if there might be something very interesting about it or you may be a somewhat talented writer so it'd come off interesting anyway. But personally make sure when your going over like your final draft everything is as near perfect as can be. I really hate to read a book and find spelling mistakes every couple of pages or turrible grammar and the like.

And lastly stay far away from the RP section.
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Old 08-19-2011, 02:16 AM   #12 (permalink)
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I really hope you don't feel the same way about grammar and spelling in forum posts, Eusnon!
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Old 08-19-2011, 02:19 AM   #13 (permalink)
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Forum posts are completely different (and you don't spend money to look at a forum post) as you don't spend a long *** time to write one and more than likely you type it up as fast as possible then hit enter. Or submit reply, whatever.

5-7$ Doesn't seem bad but don't be afraid to be a little greedy and go for like $10 Well ok maybe you should wait until your more established or something but still. Also I'd like to read the first 10 or so pages to see how I feel about it and what not.
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Old 08-19-2011, 02:22 AM   #14 (permalink)
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Forum posts are completely different (and you don't spend money to look at a forum post) as you don't spend a long *** time to write one and more than likely you type it up as fast as possible then hit enter. Or submit reply, whatever.

5-7$ Doesn't seem bad but don't be afraid to be a little greedy and go for like $10 Well ok maybe you should wait until your more established or something but still. Also I'd like to read the first 10 or so pages to see how I feel about it and what not.
This idea is beyond generic. There isn't no main character really. There are hundreds. That die in almost every chapter. There are cliff hangers that give you chills. I do this a lot


But anyways, still writing a lot and I got a lot of ideas written out of how it's going to end for the first book.
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Old 08-19-2011, 02:26 AM   #15 (permalink)
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This idea is beyond generic. There isn't no main character really. There are hundreds. That die in almost every chapter. There are cliff hangers that give you chills. I do this a lot


But anyways, still writing a lot and I got a lot of ideas written out of how it's going to end for the first book.
Er...Hm.

Well I mean that CAN work but you have to be very careful with that because you have to have some form of main character so you can realize that hey its mainly this guy as opposed to a bunch of random people as then things start to get confusing. And really when it comes to stuff like that usually things need to tie in for it to be good so if your just having people who don't have some deeper meaning behind things sharing the spotlight you might wanna axe a few of em. I mean you could even be just trying to get people to have an image of how things are but not too many different characters are needed to do that.

And when I said generic I meant the layout of the place and all that and what was happening. Like people suddenly coming from some other place.
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