Lumi runned further, dodging the spears that came flying to her. A. halted and started blocking the spears with his 'foot shield'. She stopped next to him. "Let me help," She said to him," Then the others can get away easier." She did not really waited for asnwer and started forming another spear made of ice.
I shouldn't do this to long.. She thought as she fell her fingertips turn cold. She shaked her head,
But I have to.. Is that what is going to make my happy..? I wonder..
((eeh jake.. just some advice.. no offend or something but in your posts it is handy if you , just like the rest, could speak in third perspective (he form what ever you call it..) and if you could make them some more desribtive and follow the story a bit.. just saying...although I'm not the one that should be so sorry angel
))