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Originally Posted by jake_holland
As I ran across the buildings I saw a group of people but did not pay attention and continued to the empire state building finished in 1931, you had to feel a bit of respect for it. As soon as I reached the convergence point i pulled out my Ipod and put on some earphones. I started listening to 'i need a hero' by bonnie tyler, I just loved it and was entranced by the music. I didn't even realise that I was there for a long time.
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(( There :P You have to remember your commas, otherwise the sentances become over-long and a pain in the arse to read. ))