(quite a bit better, som grammer issues but those most people should be able to work out thnx for not taking it the wrong way)
Noah grabbed the collar of Abel's shirt "relax kid" he said turning and walking some more before crossing the street quickly, he was quite distant, emotionally and didnt much care as cars started beeping their horns.
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