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Originally Posted by KniteOps
Well the "lead" would be the original magazine article that he is addressing. Which might be more of a hassle to post then to simply receive criticism.
Six hours should be more than enough time for a paper.
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I am confused, I thought he was writing an article, not discussing one.
However, I think that every piece of words should be interesting, so the basic rules of news-writing still apply.
You need to lead people in or they won't come, which I wanted to point out.
You can not live without a lead.
@V-Opolis:
If you want to shorten it up, look for redundancies rather than cutting the personal aspect which I thought had a good flow.
(Six hours is a long time, I wrote a 6 page long paper on some metallurgical topic once in one sitting, lol.)