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Old 11-23-2009, 12:16 AM   #1 (permalink)
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What say you people about them? For me it's most likely the only poetry I shall ever write. I also recently remembered that a few years ago I started turning the Lord of the Rings into a haiku story. I shall give a few excerpts.

Enter the hobbit
Bilbo Baggins was his name
He stole the One Ring

Gandalf the wizard
Tells him to go to the elves
And bring the gardner

The Rider’s attack
But they stab only pillows
Those tricksy hobbits

Frodo is wounded
He needs some athelas now
But more, he needs elves

Frodo awakens
“Where am I?” he cries out loud
And now, Gandalf speaks


And that's as far as I got, storyline-wise.
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