Some minor grammar/punctuation things could help but it's, as TLM said, it's a good start. Oh, also try checking "Disable smilies in text"

(it's just a bit above the "Post Reply" button).
I feel like structurally this could use expansion. The programming aspect was more or less covered thoroughly but ultimately, in the development of an MMO, there is also a lot of conceptual work that needs consideration plus the artistic talent. If you'd like, I could write some stuff on music in MMOs (which is largely applicable to any game, really).
Well done, tho.