Old 12-29-2006, 03:00 AM   #1 (permalink)
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These are my first 2 sigs i ever made. The green one was the first one i made about a week ago, and the red one i finished just today. I don't have much experience in photoshop but i have learned a whole lot in the past month or two. I gotta say I'm enjoying making sigs and soon i will post my 3rd project.

Please tell me if i can improve on anything and any other critique is welcome and appreciated. These sigs are related to game called Cabalonline.

P.S. Both sigs are completely original. I have looked through some tutorials but i did not copy or follow any particular tut.

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Also i was looking for a dedicated sig thread but couldn't find one... maybe mods should sticky one up.
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Old 12-29-2006, 03:13 AM   #2 (permalink)
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wow i really like them both! the text in the bottom one could flow better, but it looks ok, also your main render could blend a bit more, play around the smudge tool, on the red one i very much dislike to the text but i like the rest, although i still think your render could be blended and their could be more dark by the text


looks good overall
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Old 12-29-2006, 03:14 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Those look really good man. I like the green one more, but the red is awesome too.
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Old 12-29-2006, 03:24 AM   #4 (permalink)
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the text and bg on the 2nd one is good for a beginner, but the render qual is next to shit.


tha first one is good but the text isnt that good
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Old 12-29-2006, 05:16 AM   #5 (permalink)
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wow, ur first 2 sigs? ur going pretty good man.
i like the red one. good job.
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the red one is a bit plain....they all hav good text....8/10
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Old 12-29-2006, 01:52 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Appreciate all the feedback.

Like i said these are my first two projects, and i feel that doing both i learned a whole lot. Also thanks for your critique I'm sure it will improve my future projects.

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Old 12-29-2006, 05:47 PM   #8 (permalink)
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They look pretty cool for your first. You need to work on text.

The first looks pretty cool, for text remember to use the eyedropper tool to get the right colours. The red outline on the text doesn't match nicely, it is too light. Also the render on the left with red eyes, I like the effect a lot but it doesn't fit in very well, try using eyedropper tool.

The 2nd one's render looks pretty bad quality and the one in the shadows looks free transformed. The render in the 2nd one messes up your whole sig there.

Try to make the render blend in more, the renders don't look like they fit in.
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Old 12-29-2006, 05:57 PM   #9 (permalink)
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aww man i cant w8 till i get photoshop today so i can do awesome beter sigs ine are from plain ol gimp
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The text takes away from the red one a bit, but...they are awesome!
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