umakari haru

OK this time i have to make a story and so on and so on blah blah blah.
O yea 1 more thing DONT MAKE FUN OF PEOPLES SPELLING.
ok here it is: There are a 10 heros all seaking somthing diffrent:like power...u no the usual. They are all in groups of two. ((you may chose your own partner)). The setting is in the mid-future((like star wars almost but not quite advanced)).((and i cant make up your story lines i can only make up the basics. so help ur self witht your story line)) Have fun!

ok the basics and a few other things

My char..((icant put in an image srry))
Hair:black skpied,with red tips.
clothes:all black with trench coat.
Wepon: advanced katana with poison and power bost and speed attack.((you can have up to 4 wepons at the start and gradually grow but u dont have to start with all four wepons at the beggining. And sorry about my spelling.))

Arri

((Imma play RP police real quick


2. SPECIFICALLY STATE THE SETTING OF THE RP IN THE ORIGINAL POST. Yes. Which means Hosts MUST give a definitive description of the starting area of the RP (or a backstory of the world the RP is set in.)

yours isn't really setting, its just "heros trying to find power" which isn't good enough (for RP section standerds apparently) ))

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Pipster

(( Above post says some of it, your post also fails to make the low standards of the grammar rule, locked once more. ))

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Jabor_

((Pipster - just pointing out that you may have forgotten to check th "Close this Thread" box on your reply, as it hasn't closed yet.))

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umakari haru

((i said specificly FINISH REST TOMARROW for a reason witch means story line and evrything. Wow.))

Deaths_Legion

((Ok, but you still broke a couple of the rules.

You obviously didn't have good grammar, so that rule has been broken from the start. No offense.

Even though you stated that you would add the rest later, you should have at least finished the story before you posted it. How do you think people would be attracted to your RP if it just says "There are a 10 heros all seaking somthing diffrent:like power".

A couple of other things I noticed that you did wrong. Even though it's not an official rule, I remember Pip actually stating once upon a time that the title of the thread must directly relate to the RP.

Not trying to be mean or play mod, just stating facts.))

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umakari haru

((i hate these kind of sites that have rules for rping. I mean if you dont want to have a damn story line exscuse my french, then u dont have to and grammer...... IDC you can't even use that as an abreviation as i don't care))

Deaths_Legion

((The point of these rules is to make RPing fun. The godmodding rule? To prevent from people being like "lol nub i kil u wit super ball of death". The grammar rule? To prevent people having to decipher your posts. The unnoficial title rule? So people actually KNOW what the RP is about. Minimum word limit? To make sure you don't just post one sentence and have one giant thread of just people talking back and forth, and other cases as well.

Each rule is made for a reason, they are not there to torture you. I can understand why you don't like the grammar rule, and I would too if in your position, but you didn't break only that rule. As long as you at least type out your words and don't add "u, lol, rofl, omg, etc." to your posts, then you should be fine. If you want to laugh, then make your character laugh; if you want to say "Oh my God", then type it out. It just kills the RP when you use leetspeak.

Again, as I said, that wasn't the only rule you broke. Next time you make an RP, review if before you post it and also take note of the rules as well. If it doesn't follow the rules, then you're not going to be able to RP. Simple as that.))

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Jabor_

On another forum I moderate, we have a place for rule-free RPing. The board title is "The Flame Pit".
See previous answer
Actually, I don't see why you would have a problem with the grammar rule. It's all abbreviations that are screwing you over in that last part.

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Pipster

(( Thank you VERY much Jabor and Deaths, I don't have to explain it now, locked! ))

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