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TheRequiem · 03-17-2007, 04:53 AM

I've recently made some SHORT lyrics for a song..idk how they are so far..
Well here they are

I want to remember what its like..
to be a child again.
life was so care free
My feelings were'nt so twisted.
Now life's a pain
a pain that cant go away.
I was in the arms of the one I love
Now those feelings just vanish

Im on a path
A path to move my feelings to one way to another
Now I know
That you were meant to be there

How'z that? I may change some things up depending on the posts. Thnxxxxx

AthlaS · 03-17-2007, 04:58 AM

Those lyrics are good. Just don't do an emo song lol

Associated · 03-17-2007, 05:10 AM

Change wasn't to wern't

And yeah, don't make it Emo. Maybe have like the first verse be emo, but then the rest of the song more uplifting? Like you know... a rising?

Meteo · 03-17-2007, 05:15 AM

"rest of the song more uplifting" ya I agree, u know... like I believe I can fly by R. Kelly ...

TheRequiem · 03-17-2007, 05:20 AM

How can this song turn emo? weird. How am i suppose to make it uplifting?
Well ill add more lyrics in a bit.

K *Updated*

Kriff · 03-17-2007, 05:37 AM

Just don't keep talking about pain and life in the same lines. Although sad songs can be good. One of my favorite songs talks about how the singer's friend OD'd and he didn't show up to the funeral. I don't know, I've been digging the quiet songs lately (specifically by the Chili Peppers). I'd like to see where this is going. Is this just lyrics or are you going to make a complete song?

TheRequiem · 03-17-2007, 05:42 AM

Yeah im gonna make it complete...maybe..i need some music to go with it first..i cant join a band yet

but yeah, i dont think its all sad in all the lyrics the 2nd verses changed

Associated · 03-17-2007, 05:42 AM

I can play bass and sing! Let's start an OnRPG Band!

well...off to bed...it must be too late if I'm saying that...

TheRequiem · 03-17-2007, 05:48 AM

If your serious about that..we can do it..IF your serious about it..I take music serious

AthlaS · 03-17-2007, 06:04 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by TheRequiem

If your serious about that..we can do it..IF your serious about it..I take music serious lawl

That "lawl" just made the whole thing not serious.

Associated supposedly lives "In The Sky". You live in Texas. I live in Michigan. I don't think we could possibly be any farther apart.

03-17-2007, 04:53 AM	#1 (permalink)
TheRequiem Firor's Fury Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: I love you. Posts: 3,072 Reputation: 30	I need musical help I've recently made some SHORT lyrics for a song..idk how they are so far.. Well here they are I want to remember what its like.. to be a child again. life was so care free My feelings were'nt so twisted. Now life's a pain a pain that cant go away. I was in the arms of the one I love Now those feelings just vanish Im on a path A path to move my feelings to one way to another Now I know That you were meant to be there How'z that? I may change some things up depending on the posts. Thnxxxxx __________________ Last edited by TheRequiem; 03-17-2007 at 05:35 AM.

03-17-2007, 05:15 AM	#4 (permalink)
Meteo Eriond's Egotist Join Date: May 2006 Location: Fremont, CA Posts: 1,770 Reputation: 78	"rest of the song more uplifting" ya I agree, u know... like I believe I can fly by R. Kelly ... __________________ Games I'm playing atm: HoG by F2PMMO.com

03-17-2007, 05:20 AM	#5 (permalink)
TheRequiem Firor's Fury Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: I love you. Posts: 3,072 Reputation: 30	How can this song turn emo? weird. How am i suppose to make it uplifting? Well ill add more lyrics in a bit. K Updated __________________ Last edited by TheRequiem; 03-17-2007 at 05:35 AM.

03-17-2007, 05:42 AM	#7 (permalink)
TheRequiem Firor's Fury Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: I love you. Posts: 3,072 Reputation: 30	Yeah im gonna make it complete...maybe..i need some music to go with it first..i cant join a band yet but yeah, i dont think its all sad in all the lyrics the 2nd verses changed __________________

03-17-2007, 05:48 AM	#9 (permalink)
TheRequiem Firor's Fury Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: I love you. Posts: 3,072 Reputation: 30	If your serious about that..we can do it..IF your serious about it..I take music serious __________________ Last edited by TheRequiem; 03-17-2007 at 06:19 AM.

03-17-2007, 04:58 AM	#2 (permalink)
AthlaS Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Michigan, USA Posts: 2,208 Reputation: 13	Those lyrics are good. Just don't do an emo song lol

03-17-2007, 05:10 AM	#3 (permalink)
Associated Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: In The Sky Posts: 1,495 Reputation: 8	Change wasn't to wern't And yeah, don't make it Emo. Maybe have like the first verse be emo, but then the rest of the song more uplifting? Like you know... a rising?

03-17-2007, 05:37 AM	#6 (permalink)
Kriff Wand of !!!!!!11!!! Power Join Date: May 2006 Location: Las Vegas Posts: 784 Reputation: 28	Just don't keep talking about pain and life in the same lines. Although sad songs can be good. One of my favorite songs talks about how the singer's friend OD'd and he didn't show up to the funeral. I don't know, I've been digging the quiet songs lately (specifically by the Chili Peppers). I'd like to see where this is going. Is this just lyrics or are you going to make a complete song?

03-17-2007, 05:42 AM	#8 (permalink)
Associated Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: In The Sky Posts: 1,495 Reputation: 8	I can play bass and sing! Let's start an OnRPG Band! well...off to bed...it must be too late if I'm saying that...

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