Old 03-18-2007, 03:03 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Newest. I like it except for the text. I arranged it well IMO, but I couldn't get the right colors. Anyway, comments/ratings please.
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Old 03-18-2007, 04:24 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Yeah, pretty damn cool. The only problems are that you raped the render with effects. So now I can't really tell what's there...That and there's no lighting. As for the text, it's not a real problem. It would probably look better white, though.

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Old 03-18-2007, 07:35 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Strengthened the lighting and got rid of the uneccessary distortions to the render.
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Old 03-18-2007, 07:40 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Rid it of the text, and it would be great. =O
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Old 03-18-2007, 08:26 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Rid it of the text, and it would be great. =O
You mean make it textless, or fix the text?
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It's too compacted.
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Old 03-19-2007, 12:32 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Simply awesome,PSPJunkie's right,it feels a bit compacted,the text in purple would look better in red or white in my opinion,but still,awesome.
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Old 03-19-2007, 12:35 AM   #8 (permalink)
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the text is sweet.
the way you postioned it.

you could've added some light.


other than that its sweet






oh and are you mad at me for stealing your smiley design?
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You mean make it textless, or fix the text?
Fix the text colors. Try something lighter.
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Thanks. I'll make final revisions after school.
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the text is sweet.
the way you postioned it.

you could've added some light.


other than that its sweet






oh and are you mad at me for stealing your smiley design?
Lol nah idc. I was actually kinda honored. XP Plus it's gone now anyway (you have the Jay-Z sig).
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