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GrandHustle

We need more info first... are you writing this in the form of a persuasive essay or an expository essay?

Oh yeah and, I wouldn't use those reasons if I were you. You're saying that abortion can be used keep population down and prepare for global warming? You yourself made the comparison that abortion is basically murder. Now if we use the transitive property in math... that means that you're saying murder is a way to keep population down, and prepare for global warming.

Pretty morbid, if you ask me.

Use other reasons, like health reasons. If a child is to be born with a very bad health defect or disability, is it worth living at all if the child's life is to be horrible and burdened?

Secondly, if a woman is raped (though I'm not sure if this is such a good idea if you're rather young... I'm only 14 myself and probably wouldn't bring this up in an essay about abortion if I'm to be handing this in to my teacher,) they could become pregnant. This is, obviously, an unwanted pregnancy. You could easily make an argument about how abortion is ok there.

Another big one is teen pregnancy. Teen pregnancy rates are getting higher and higher, and it's really getting to be a problem.

Hope I helped.

P.S. Fix your spelling and grammatical errors.

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Deimos

guys hes like 12 years old, give him a break.

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Lord Mog

First of all: your mental compass is screwed up to a new level, sir.

Second of all: The "facts" about "Global Warming" are about as made up as Hollywood's political movies.

Third of all: Overpopulization is a lame excuse for ripping up a woman's stomach, pulling the unborn child out, and sucking his/her's brains out and using his/her's dead body in FREAKING FACIAL CREAMS.

Fourthy: If you take a glimpse outside and look at nature, your skin, your body, your body's structure, the universe and it's vastness, and still think God doesn't exist, then there is no help for you what-so-ever.

And fithly: I'm not a product of a disgusting hairy monkey, and never will be.

Now, on to helping your essay:

There are some spelling issues, so fix those up.

Space everything out a bit so it doesn't look like someone's bad excuse for a Brick O' Text.

Fix up your puncuation.

And that's about it.

Have a fun time.

- Lord Mog

shadowsworn

This thread is a mess.

And wasn't there one just like this, started by the same poster, just a short while ago?

Instead of listening to a bunch of arguing gamers who are not necessarily in possession of any of the facts, go out and do your own research: books, radio (I'm sure NPR or the BBC have something), newspapers (a lot of school libraries in high school keep an archive, as do public libraries).

I'm not going to give you my viewpoint on this issue (again), other than to say that I vehemently disagree with the post above mine...

For some reason this issue is still a hot topic, I'm sure finding stuff won't be hard.

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OMFGL33TSPEAK

You could follow this structure that my school uses.

Topic Sentences
Explanation
Example
Link to the topic and other paragraphs

Deimos

no matter how many times people get told to do their own research there will always be someone who asks for school work help in the worst possible place, a gaming forum.



har har har

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Stabkiller0

QFT

Yup, everytime these threads start...

Attila

There's nothing wrong with this. People who are sitting behind the computers on this forum are normal people who go to school just like you and me.
And it's especially good to ask on onrpg because this place is full of asian ne...Full of asians.

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