Puppet

*Out of nowhere a demon by the name of Darkness jumped out from a hole**laughs sadistically* this is gonna be fun... *grins with a evil look on his face* NOW ITS TIME TO DIE!!! *laughs sadistically...AGAIN*

kain222

(( dude, i dont usually say thus, but...

you

Absoluteley
SUCK!

Seriously, there's no narrative what-so ever, no speech marks, and your contribution to the thread is one sentance long.

At-least try and read other posts and see how its done. ))

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Puppet

Wow Thanks You Suck Worse Buddy!!:d

lokuri

((OOC: No he does not! Besides, this is already dead, so why did you comment on it? Kain is the nicest person on here, and for him to tell you your attempted RP sucked, well, that means you need a long way before your next post. Kain is not the kind of person to flame people, unless it is really true, because he always gives the benefit of the doubt.

Next time, try to keep it 40 words or more, use proper grammar, keeep your sentences in line, and above all, give it your best shot. Just a few tips; it does not have to be a novel, but a few sentences would not hurt. If you really are unsure, past it on word and use word count, so you can tell how much you used and whether or not your need more words.

~Final note: This is not flamming, rather, suggesting ))

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Puppet

i like to call it flaming.

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conmon

((Dude seriously ive been flamed hard core ive been reading all there posts here by the way really good lokuri and kain im was gona do this cuase it looked cool and i was gona role play better but seriously lokuri and kain are nice so dont be a rude t her when shes being nice to you anyways ill get back to reading posts i might play kain and i promise ill play better than befor no im super uber anymore k bye))
((oh and please dont be like the one person who flamed me so much))

lokuri

((OOC: Flaming or not, this RP is dead, and you just revived it. I got scolded by JubJub for trying to bring back a dead RP, but this one is both died and has been renewed elsewhere, only to die again x.x

And thank you, conmon. Yes, the person who flammed you did not have to say those kind of things ;x))

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conmon

Name:Ven
Apperance: Thin, he has scales on his head.Most mistake him for a demon He has scales on every inch of his body.He is covered in black cloth all except his eyes. He has many stun, poision, and acid darts in a pack. He has double katanas on his back.His eyes are blood red. His teeth are sharp.
Small Bio:He was cursed by black magick to have this scaly apperance. Ever since he has trained with a martial arts master even in a assassins guild.Wich was 15 years ago till he was abandond. Now he livs in a hole in the ground in the forest.
Age: Unknown
Height: 5'3
Weight:Unknown

Ven's hole was disturbed agine he runs out quickly from one of his tree entrances. He quickly makes his way up some branches so he can hide and watch whats going on. (( gtg srry goign off line ill type tommorow or the day after tommorow and then ill finish this))

lokuri

((OOC: I hope you know this is dead o.o;; ))

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Endra

Username:sailver-eyed witch roukan/ sailor T-elos
Name:Brenda sevatas
Age:24
Gender:female
Personality:cooled lonely and harsh
Appearance:
Bio:she has wanted to be a scientist all her life, and now she is one her dream came true. But she was working on some analisys for something when she was kidnapped, she didn't want to go into detail but the kiddnapping is how she became so cold