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Ax3l2323 · 04-05-2008, 10:44 PM

My third sig without tut. I just used some tips from target_practice(<3)

Have I improved?

Lighter

Darker

Target_Practice · 04-05-2008, 11:00 PM

In B4 Serix.

Your style really is improving, great job.

Runahs · 04-05-2008, 11:07 PM

I can say you are improving but theres still multiple faults though.

-No real focal, a lot of the areas are also very sharp.
-No real lighting source, its pretty much just bright all over.
-Kinda Messy
-Work on text

Other then that good job.

Ax3l2323 · 04-05-2008, 11:07 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Target_Practice

In B4 Serix.

Your style really is improving, great job.

Haha, Thanks man.

daroth · 04-06-2008, 08:03 AM

Too messy. 4/10

Ponder · 04-06-2008, 08:39 AM

It seems more like you slapped something together doesn't actually look like you had any real control over what was happening.

ramennn · 04-06-2008, 08:45 AM

I haven't seen your previous tags, but here's what I can judge:
-Lack of proper lighting, lack of depth
-Focal needs to be more focused
-Text = D:
-Colours are meh

Work on these and I'd say it could get significantly better.

Jakuza · 04-06-2008, 09:12 AM

-Slap a f-cking border on that baby, you douche.
-Personally, I think the text is great. Just, move it into the corner, and make it a bit smaller.
-The darker one is better.
-IMO, the sig is actually pretty awesome, overall.
-7.5/10.
-INB4SERIX.

Serix · 04-06-2008, 05:46 PM

- Inb4Serix

oh crap im Serix. Missed too many topic D=< shouldnt have slept till 1pm

Everythings been said pretty much. But the darker one is way better

I would like to know what the full render looks like though

04-05-2008, 10:44 PM	#1 (permalink)
Ax3l2323 Lockhart’s are forever Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Texas Posts: 375 Reputation: 23	Siegfried signature My third sig without tut. I just used some tips from target_practice(<3) Have I improved? Lighter Darker __________________ Last edited by Ax3l2323; 04-05-2008 at 10:55 PM.

04-05-2008, 11:07 PM	#3 (permalink)
Runahs Power_Gamer_6's Pick Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: amazonia Posts: 2,355 Reputation: 77	I can say you are improving but theres still multiple faults though. -No real focal, a lot of the areas are also very sharp. -No real lighting source, its pretty much just bright all over. -Kinda Messy -Work on text Other then that good job. __________________

04-06-2008, 08:03 AM	#5 (permalink)
daroth Cloud13's Clown Join Date: May 2006 Location: Tennessee Posts: 2,819 Reputation: 36	Too messy. 4/10 __________________

04-06-2008, 08:39 AM	#6 (permalink)
Ponder Chrono's Crony Join Date: Mar 2008 Posts: 3,354 Reputation: 54	It seems more like you slapped something together doesn't actually look like you had any real control over what was happening. __________________ PS3 Trophies

04-06-2008, 08:45 AM	#7 (permalink)
ramennn Eriond's Egotist Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: in the grass, by the mausoleum Posts: 1,744 Reputation: 31	I haven't seen your previous tags, but here's what I can judge: -Lack of proper lighting, lack of depth -Focal needs to be more focused -Text = D: -Colours are meh Work on these and I'd say it could get significantly better. __________________

04-05-2008, 11:00 PM	#2 (permalink)
Target_Practice Ride em’ Yoshi Join Date: Apr 2008 Posts: 183 Reputation: 10	In B4 Serix. Your style really is improving, great job.

04-06-2008, 09:12 AM	#8 (permalink)
Jakuza OnRPG Elite Member! Join Date: May 2006 Location: Flower City, NY. Posts: 10,737 Reputation: 152	-Slap a f-cking border on that baby, you douche. -Personally, I think the text is great. Just, move it into the corner, and make it a bit smaller. -The darker one is better. -IMO, the sig is actually pretty awesome, overall. -7.5/10. -INB4SERIX. __________________

04-06-2008, 05:46 PM	#9 (permalink)
Serix OnRPG Elite Member! Join Date: May 2007 Location: Mexico Posts: 5,723 Reputation: 137	- Inb4Serix oh crap im Serix. Missed too many topic D=< shouldnt have slept till 1pm Everythings been said pretty much. But the darker one is way better I would like to know what the full render looks like though __________________

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