Kadadriean

((OOC: Sorry but i dont except character sheets with with links and pictures if you refer to the post on page one i also stated about this situation))

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Paralysis

My Character Sheet

Name: Pakku (No relation to the Master)
Age: 17
Bender: Yes
Gender: Male
Form: Water
Other Abilities: Healing

Appearance: Pakku is five foot eight and wears a long single braid down his back. He also has a large burn on his back. Pakku has a very skinny frame and is often considered underweight.

History: Pakku learned waterbending in the Northern Water Tribe and became a Master at the age of 14. When he left, he traveled to the Earth Kingdom to fight in the war. Pakku befriended a group of Earthbending teenagers in Omashu and together they traveled around the Earth Kingdom performing ambushes on Fire Nation soldiers. They were only caught once and Pakku has a very large burn on his back that he uses to remember that time in his life. Pakku and his friends escaped when Pakku bending the sweat out of their shirts. At the time of the comet, Pakku fought bravely but was separated from his Earthbending friends and was again captured. This time a bounty was on his head and he landed at the maximum security prison.

Weapons: Pakku has basic sword skills and often uses his bending when fighting with a sword. He is interested in learning more about weapons.

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New pic of my charatar


Kieko uses her waterbending next to Azula. Azula gets pissy and uses fire bending.

Kieko doesn't like Azula for this.


Kieko test a new form of waterbending called shrink bending.

(You know how if you suck water outta something it gets smaller)

Kieko trys it on Azula and Azula becomes the size of a barbie doll.

The Azulas clothed are raped of her by a few muscle men

Azula is then returned to her normal size by Kieko who expands the water moloculs in Azulas body


AZULA IS NOW POWERLESS TO KEIKO

kieko is the new leader of the rebelion

Nonsue

((Wtf was that.....^))

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Kieko overthrowing Azula via minimize waterbending

Nonsue

Hiroko yawned as he stretched in his bed, as his hands stretched out he felt something blocking them. He turned to notice that there was a female lying in his bed which he then remembered they "shared" it last night after he paid off the usual guard. The guard walked by saying "its free time". He then whispered "time to get up" in the woman's ear as she giggled slightly, he then quickly kicked the woman out of his bed saying "Well you took to long". He then hopped out of his bed quickly putting on his clothes turning to say "Also I don't expect a relationship either". He then quickly grabbed his straw hat putting it onto of his head, pulling the piece of straw under his chin to keep it on.

He dashed out the room as the woman was probably a dangerous one who might try to attack him. After running to a safe distance he now glanced around as he made his way to the courtyard noticing others were still in their cells while the rest were already in the courtyard. He decided that he might as well watch the Kuai Ball game since there was usually nothing better to do unless you had some form of payment for the guards. He stood there noticing a few guards seemed a bit flustered, he wondered if something may have happened before. Throwing his head back as he let out a loud yawn of bored he suddenly turned his head to see a male and a female sitting on a bench. Quickly he began to dash over but then stopped and proceeded to walk in a calm manner otherwise he may have drawn unnecessary attention to himself. Coming upon them he approached from the back as he turned his back to them crouching down behind the bench. He turned his head slightly so they could hear him and so that no one else would hear him as he spoke in a low voice saying “Excuse me but did I just hear that you were trying to escape from here”?

Kadadriean

Ryu's eyes widen thinking to himself,how could he be so careless. He doesnt turn to face the male speaking it could draw attention. Huh,so how long have you been sitting there ease dropping",Ryu strecthes his arms out wide.Anyways yeah im planning an escape at noon tommorrow.

A riot will break out here in the courtyard,thus leaving minimum security in the prisons as to the court yard. Me and whoever else that has the ability to evade,climb,and dodge will go for the warden in his quaters.If we do capture the warden we'll hold him hostage,we'll make our way to the guandala and ride it to the other side of the enclosed mountain,There we will make a run for the closest war ship near,we'll highjack the ship and ride to the nearest Earth Kingdom city most likely the Western region".Ryu quickly stops whispering as the guard walks by.

Ryu stands and walks over to a shaded corner and leans against the wall.A guard walks by and spits down at Ryu's feet. Ryu softly taps his foot on the ground creating a 3 inch uplift in the ground. The guard trips and falls.While falling Ryu knocks on the wall behind him thus creating a very small slab of rock to stand out of the ground. To small to be seen. As the the guard hits the ground his chin empacts against the slab pushing it back into the earth.Ryu laughs as the guard struggles to get back up.Rubbing his chin the guard stomps off in embarasment.Wondering what just happened

Ryu heads back to his cell cutting his recess time short. Not being able to close his door he can not do much.Moving in his cell pondering on the situation.He sits on his bed,and thinks"This prison isnt designed for benders like me,it's for fire benders and non-benders,that gives me an advantage,well nothing to do now but wait."Ryu pushes himself of the bed standing vertically on his hands pushing himself up and down perforing handstand push-up. After about 15 minutes he stands upright and crouches in a horse stance.Ryu now not leaning or touching on anything is crouched as if sitting in chair.Ryu attempts to shake his head to limit the sweat dripping down his face.Another 15 minutes have pasted and Ryu's exsuasted. Lays down on his bed to relise his cell door is closed."Well i guess i've been in here to long" Ryu states.Ryu falls asleep until 11:58 the next day.

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The guards dragged a young male into the cell block. He was twitching lightly as the pulled his head across the floor. A long black braid was the last thing any prisoner would see should they look out of their cells to see the new arrival. He was young, no older than eighteen, surely the boy was not threat enough to be placed at the Boiling Rock. The guards kicked the limp body one last time before slamming the cell and locking it firmly. A groan was emitted from the throat of the young man as he rolled onto his feet. He spat blood on the floor and wiped his right hand across his mouth. "Water..." said a raspy, clearly dehydrated voice. "Yeah right." said the guard. "We have to make sure you aren't going to bend it so you'll have to wait a while." They snickered and walked off. Pakku sat on the bed, it was cold and hard. His eyes searched the room, then other cells and he noticed a man sleeping. He was clearly Earth Kingdom, perhaps he was friendly. "Excuse me." the raspy voice of Pakku rang out toward the man named Ryu. "Could you spare a little water?"

Kadadriean

((OOC: Just out of curiousity,how much Avatar do you watch ive seen almost every episode))

Ryu wakes up and looks across his cell,a new inmate.Wow,still being a kid Ryu felt sad for the new skinny fellow. Ryu notices that his own door is open and his and the cell across from him is not.He stands to his feet and walks to the other cell door.Looking throughh the rectangular peep hole.I will give you some water but you got to promise that you'll help me escape.Ryu slips a pouch of water in the cell andan extra pouch of water."Eh when we enter the courtyard you need thaat pouch of water to bend,i mean come on that ponytail dont come from those other nations".Ryu quickly stop whispering when he detects a guard walking by.Ryu pushes himself off the cell door and dashes in his room.The guard walks by and Ryu states "Woo your in for some pain today chump"."Yeah well its Recess head to the court yard."the guard now walking away.Ryu thinks in his head "perfect
Now standing in the middle of the courtyard.The sun is setting.
Ryu shouts to the top of his lungs"People of the boiling rock we do not deserve this even a criminal does not deserve these harsh conditions"."We have been torture,or pride has been stomped on and who is the cause of this,The old crappy warden"."So people of today i ask of you not as a child but as a friend,riot with me,Ryu raising his fist in the air,and today we shall be FREEEEEEE!!!!!!!" Ryu smiles to the reaction of the inmates which whom are all yelling and raising their fist in the air.Ryu shouts back,"No im not done yet,do not think of me as a 14 year old child,because in my heart i have the spirit of a 25 year old warrior,so do not think of me as a Boy of today,BECAUSE IM A FREE MAN OF TOMMORROW,SO LET'S RRRRRRRRRIIIIIIIIIIIOOOOOOOOOTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!
Flames,rocks,and water fly everywhere.Ryu slowly sit on the ground and takes his prison shoes of.He then quickly stands grasping the earth with his toes.Ryu stomps his foot sending him launching up in the air,whle in the kicking the rocks towards guards as a form of defense to the rocks coming towards him.As Ryu falls out of the he bends his legs making his knees touching his chest.Wrapping his arms around his legs Ryu yells"Cannonball"!!!! Ryu drops at tremendous speeds makes impact with the ground thus causing an earthquake and slabs of rocks to push out of the guard striking both guards and inmates.Ryu dust the dirt of his clothes and spots the warden,he dashes for dodging the incoming rocks and fire,He shouts ,"Your mine"!!

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((Hey, Kadadriean, you seem to enjoy roleplaying a lot so I just want to explain to you on how to use the proper tense, right now you are using the wrong one. Let me show you have your latest post should look something like.))

Ryu woke up and looked around his cell, a new inmate. Ryu felt some sympathy for the skinny lad. Ryu noticed that his own door has been opened and his and the cell across from him is not. He stood up to his feet and strode across to the other cell door. After having a good look through the rectangular peep hole Ryu stated to the man in the next cell "I will give you some water but you got to promise that you'll help me escape". Ryu slipped two flasks of water through to the next cell. "Eh, when we enter the courtyard you need that flask of water to bend, I mean... Come on, that ponytail doesn't come from those other nations". Ryu quickly stopped whispering when he detected a guard walking by. Ryu pushed himself off the cell door and dashed in his room. The guard walks by and glares at Ryu.
"Woo your in for some pain today chump"
"Yeah... Well it's recess head to the court yard." Ryu heard the shuffling of the guards' feet as he walks away. Ryu thought in his head "Perfect."

Now standing in the middle of the courtyard. The sun is begining to set.
Ryu shouts to the top of his lungs
"People of the boiling rock we do not deserve this even a criminal does not deserve these harsh conditions. We have been tortured, our pride has been crushed and who is the cause of this. That old crap-bag we call 'warden'. So people of today I ask of you not as a child but as a friend, rebel with me!" Ryu raised his fist in the air and exclaimed
"Today we shall be Free!"

Ryu grinned at the reaction of the inmates of which whom are all yelling and raising their fist in the air. Ryu shouts back,
"No! I'm not done yet, do not think of me as a fourteen year old child, because in my heart I have the spirit of a 25 year old warrior, so do not think of me as a boy of today... Because I am a free man tomorrow! Let us rebel!

Flames, rocks, and water begin fly everywhere. Ryu sits himself on the ground and takes his prisoner shoes off. He then stood up, grasping the earth with his toes, Ryu stomps his foot sending him launching up in the air,whle in the kicking the rocks towards guards as a form of defense to the rocks coming towards him. As Ryu falls out of the he bends his legs making his knees touching his chest. Wrapping his arms around his legs Ryu yells "Cannonball!" Ryu dropped at tremendous speeds and finally makes impact with the ground causing an earthquake and slabs of rocks to push out towards the guard striking both guards and inmates. Ryu dusts off the dirt of his clothes and spots the warden, he dashed along and dodged the incoming rocks and fire. He then shouted as he neared the warden "Your mine!"

((I did not do a thorough check of all your mistakes, but you have tons of them and I put some effort into fixing up all the errors in your post, try to get used to spacing after a full stop(period) and a comma. Overall fix up your grammar, your tenses and make sure all your sentances make sense))

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