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Nice man, especially for your first. I like the theme, as well. Nice, cool, icey feel to it.
I would suggest to make the text seem less blurry and more sharp, and put the text somewhere where people are used to reading text right away, like the top left or right. Other than that, it's pretty good. If you want more critique just pm me. |
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If you could get the character to look more into the background & not so, picture on top of a background, it'd be a lot nicer. Remember flow is good, not too much so it's machine like. Very good for a first.
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