Old 07-23-2008, 09:22 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Hey guys, I was referred by Sashimi and he suggested that I post my signatures here.

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Nicely done but whats up with the text... its abit hard to read
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Old 07-23-2008, 12:49 PM   #3 (permalink)
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The text pattern is bad, render quality is low, I like the rest
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The e is backwords.
This may confuse small mammals.
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Old 07-23-2008, 03:20 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Nice man, especially for your first. I like the theme, as well. Nice, cool, icey feel to it.

I would suggest to make the text seem less blurry and more sharp, and put the text somewhere where people are used to reading text right away, like the top left or right.

Other than that, it's pretty good.

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Pretty good for a first sig, i remember mine, it sucked big time. Anyways just experiment with the tools and you'll get better.
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Nice man, especially for your first. I like the theme, as well. Nice, cool, icey feel to it.
I like how you spelt icy.

If you could get the character to look more into the background & not so, picture on top of a background, it'd be a lot nicer. Remember flow is good, not too much so it's machine like.

Very good for a first.
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The e is backwords.
This may confuse small mammals.
like me for example. thank you for explaining it to me.

anyway... i don't like the text... too weird...
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Old 07-25-2008, 01:13 PM   #9 (permalink)
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like me for example. thank you for explaining it to me.

anyway... i don't like the text... too weird...
Gotta join with this dude
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