~Intelligence can get you through college, wisdom can write a good book, but common sense gets you through life.~




-Ryan G.



The observer




The observer hears;
Feet walking down concrete only to be shoot down
The music that kills them mentally
The water that almost made them drown
But there is no sympathy

The observer sees;
The hearts of young girls broken
The money for rims borrowed
The lives of children stolen
But there is no sorrow


The observer knows;
The mistakes made in his life
Not to be corrupted
All the things that are right
He knows all this, but he still loves them

nice that was good i like alot

thx, i have another thread like this with different things but it died.

~Intelligence can get you through college, wisdom can write a good book, but common sense gets you through life with poor education and labourous work with low pay?.~

Fixed. :3

What a sad poem eh?

very funny

</sarcasm>

very funny


But very true.

not really

I think/hope you mean musing, cause mussing is like messing something up (eg mussed up hair)

*cries*
BEautiful. Absolutely beautiful. Hey, look! Someone else who doesn't use propar grammar! SHOOT HIM!

I think/hope you mean musing, cause mussing is like messing something up (eg mussed up hair)

yes i made a mistake and hit "s" twice.

i liked it... kinda sounds like wen jesus forgave everyone of there sins

i based that poem on my uncle.

wis·dom (wzdm) Pronunciation Key Audio pronunciation of "wisdom" [P]
n.

1. The ability to discern or judge what is true, right, or lasting; insight.
2. Common sense; good judgment: “It is a characteristic of wisdom not to do desperate things” (Henry David Thoreau).

in‧tel‧li‧gence  /ɪnˈtɛlɪdʒəns/ Pronunciation Key - Show Spelled Pronunciation[in-tel-i-juhns] Pronunciation Key - Show IPA Pronunciation
–noun
1. capacity for learning, reasoning, understanding, and similar forms of mental activity; aptitude in grasping truths, relationships, facts, meanings, etc.
2. manifestation of a high mental capacity: He writes with intelligence and wit.

INTELLIGENCE=WISDOM=COMMON SENSE

~If you are faced with hard times and troubles, then it is meant for you to overcome these obstacles. because if you do overcome them then it will make you stronger~


-Ryan G. aka raikun09

~Fight or run~








~I get it now~



At first it was unclear what this boy..s true motives were.
Him, he didn..t know if it was to pursue her.
He doesn..t know where she is now so that dream is over.
But he was rich in common sense and intelligence and wanted more.


He wanted the fog to clear.
To know not only what it was he must do, but what would be his guide?
Other than some pocket change or that chick on tha side.
It was a constant headache that stayed on his mind.


Still after losing some much, life became intangible .
The thoughts of what was, and was not was eating away at him like a cannibal.
After being so sick from the constant decline of his thoughts and resoning.
He has realized making it through this won't be an easy thing.

After loosing so much and gaining so little
All I can do is just listen to my music
All I can do now is try and pursue her
All I can do now is walk under that bridge

Yeah...im gonna do that till.. I get it

~If you are faced with hard times and troubles, then it is meant for you to overcome these obstacles. because if you do overcome them then it will make you stronger~


-Ryan G. aka raikun09

~Fight or run~








~I get it now~



At first it was unclear what this boy..s true motives were.
Him, he didn..t know if it was to pursue her.
He doesn..t know where she is now so that dream is over.
But he was rich in common sense and intelligence and wanted more.


He wanted the fog to clear.
To know not only what it was he must do, but what would be his guide?
Other than some pocket change or that chick on tha side.
It was a constant headache that stayed on his mind.


Still after losing some much, life became intangible .
The thoughts of what was, and was not was eating away at him like a cannibal.
After being so sick from the constant decline of his thoughts and resoning.
He has realized making it through this won't be an easy thing.

After loosing so much and gaining so little
All I can do is just listen to my music
All I can do now is try and pursue her
All I can do now is walk under that bridge

Yeah...im gonna do that till.. I get it



this is the stuff that was in the last entry.....