I've recently made some SHORT lyrics for a song..idk how they are so far..
Well here they are

I want to remember what its like..
to be a child again.
life was so care free
My feelings were'nt so twisted.
Now life's a pain
a pain that cant go away.
I was in the arms of the one I love
Now those feelings just vanish

Im on a path
A path to move my feelings to one way to another
Now I know
That you were meant to be there


How'z that? I may change some things up depending on the posts. Thnxxxxx :3

Those lyrics are good. Just don't do an emo song lol

Change wasn't to wern't

And yeah, don't make it Emo. Maybe have like the first verse be emo, but then the rest of the song more uplifting? Like you know... a rising?

"rest of the song more uplifting" ya I agree, u know... like I believe I can fly by R. Kelly ...

How can this song turn emo? weird. How am i suppose to make it uplifting?
Well ill add more lyrics in a bit.

K *Updated*

Just don't keep talking about pain and life in the same lines. Although sad songs can be good. One of my favorite songs talks about how the singer's friend OD'd and he didn't show up to the funeral. I don't know, I've been digging the quiet songs lately (specifically by the Chili Peppers). I'd like to see where this is going. Is this just lyrics or are you going to make a complete song?

Yeah im gonna make it complete...maybe..i need some music to go with it first..i cant join a band yet

but yeah, i dont think its all sad in all the lyrics the 2nd verses changed

I can play bass and sing! Let's start an OnRPG Band!

well...off to bed...it must be too late if I'm saying that...

If your serious about that..we can do it..IF your serious about it..I take music serious

If your serious about that..we can do it..IF your serious about it..I take music serious lawl

That "lawl" just made the whole thing not serious. :-/

Associated supposedly lives "In The Sky". You live in Texas. I live in Michigan. I don't think we could possibly be any farther apart.

Couldn't you record yourself and send it to eachother and mix?

No, that would be a bad idea.
Cause if i sing first, the vocals wouldnt exactly blend in with the music correctly as i had planned.
And mixing the drums, bass, and guitar together would be a hard job..

I know a program that let bands work together in long distance... basically u can write the music and record it first, then u can just add the vocal in... u can also edit it any way u want during the process...

I know a program that let bands work together in long distance... basically u can write the music and record it first, then u can just add the vocal in... u can also edit it any way u want during the process...

Oh Shi- thats great.
well..anyone wanna join in the Online band for OnRpg? ^_^


Btw link pl0x

BTW: I live in maryland >_>

Meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!

I think..

That's cool, but I've seen those lines in many songs. Maybe different words. Try being orginal. I play drums, btw.

Reading this makes me want to bust out the guitar pro. You're lyrics seem kinda out played to.

Ahaha it's a first for me, im not into those depressing songs to listen to
well..I can bust out a new topic I'f you'd like
and oh yeah im in Texas. =]

AND NOW ITS TIME TO STEAL YOUR THUNDER *cheesey smile*

I BELIVE I CAN FRY!
cooking burgers with extra spice
I BELIVE I CAN FRY
goerge forman is gonna cry
when he finds out it aint his grill
i brought it from asda its bloody brill!
I BELIVE I CAN FRY
better than forman even if he cries
i beeeelivvveee i cn fry

lmfao sozzers

OK

song like this
will need

DRUMS BASS ACOUSTIC GUITAR LEAD ELECTRIC BACKING IT!
glockenspiel if u can if this is a romance song O_o? please dont make this rock it will make u sound so stupid it will be unreal screaming words like I LOST MY CHILD HOOOOOD got emo/bad rock?
if no glockenspiel get a flute or something relaxing

Flute
glockenspiel
Xyliaphone
Clarinet but high pitch all the way
No piccalo too loud
violin is good

umm..no..romance? no. and yeah its probably rock but vocal rock, not screaming
and no im not gonna do rap i phailed 2 years ago =[

this wont work then sozzers lol change the lyrics abit
now i aint a romance fan or nothing i have no particular fav

Basicly romance sounding lyrics ok with some rock songs but these i just tried putting it in a simple rock format ..really doesnt sound right..rather cheesy actuly

If it's not rap, it's crap.

LMFAO
got told?

Rock and tryin to get across this sorta lyrics never work

what kind of rock music are you talking about?

are you talking about the guitar playing constantly with drums beating loud?
thats the the rock im talking about
and yes i concur its not rap its crap

yes the same rock ur on bout it just doesnt work try it your self u will be rather ambrassed cos of the cheeseyness

oh gawd, the cheesyness will be gone when i edit it =/ and the chorus immediatly gets rid of the cheesyness. Im not posting the rest of it til later

rite kk sort it out good yea

You make my life more confusing

no . your self makes it confusing sort it out think about whats important or what u gonna sing about its not just making lyrics cos its cool

ahah i thought everyone already know what the singing is about
look back at the lyrics
[Intro]
I want to remember what its like..
to be a child again.
life was so care free
My feelings were'nt so twisted.
Now life's a pain
a pain that cant go away.
I was in the arms of the one I love
Now those feelings just vanish

[2nd Verses]
Im on a path
A path to move my feelings to one way to another
Now I know
That you were meant to be there

Well. im gonna change up the lyrics when its finished