ok. this is a normal rp-type thing, just with different subclasses, which are all different types of shinobi.(ninja) what you do in your turn is measured by "action points". each jutsu(technique), movement, and basic taijutsu(martial arts ) strikes take AP. in addition jutsu may also take up chakra(spirit energy- is the energy measurement for this rp) everyone of the same class are on the same team, unless someone wishes to become an Akatsuki(rogue ninja) just let me know. (btw, system of power: the first person on a team is the leader, but they can be operthrown by a challenger, and make/break alliances)
the clans are:
puppet master- control human sized puppets with their chakra. these are no ordinary puppets, of course, but rigged with weaponry.
notes: this is the most customizable class, and will probably take a long time as compared to my normal 2 minutes.(these take around 10-15, and thats just because i have been making rps for 3 years, and my friends and i made a system for super quick and yet actually very detailed abillity system- with most people, it would take at least five hours.)
puppets add a bit to your total AP, but share actions with the master.
base stats:
strength 5
dexterity 20
speed 7
defense 7
charisma 15
wisdom 10.
Aburame- shortly after birth, all Aburames are placed in a chamber containing special creatures called the Kikai bugs, which eat chakra, and TURN THEIR BODY INTO A NEST FOR THESE BUGS. in exchange for a home and food, the Kikai help them in battle.
note: the Aburame have the most versatile array of actions at any given time out of all the clans, because the Kikai are so versatile.
stats:
strength 8
dexterity 8
speed 12
defense 7
charisma 6
wisdom 10.
Uchiha- have a special eye gene called sharingan which allows them to tell an opponents next move... or copy it exactly.
stats:
strength 7
dexterity 7
speed 7
charisma 10
wisdom 25.
hyuga- have a special eye gene called byakugan which lets them see tenketsu(chakra points) and close them with a strike.
stats:
strength 10
dex 25
speed 10
charisma 8
wisdom 10.
Nara- can manipulate their shadow to capture their opponent and force them to copy their moves as close as possible.
note- this is a very strategic class.
stats:
strength 5
dex 10
speed 6
charisma 6
wisdom 18.
Akado- can use their special abillity to absorb chakra from an opponent, or give some to a friend.
notes: this clan can absorb chakra, and then use it for a normal jutsu, then get some more.... ya see the advantage here?
stats:
strength 9
dex. 7
spd. 8
char. 7
wis. 7
the taijutsu specialists- no i repeat NO CLAN can have stat increases a forth as good as these. they can open the 8 chakra gates to increase their power past the breaking point.
stats: strength 25
dex 5
speed 25
charisma 5
wisdom 7.
Inuzuka- can have their dog companions turn into clone of themselves, and do team up moves. stats:
str. 10
dex. 8
spd. 10
char. 8
wis. 8.
yamanaka- can send their mind into their opponent's body and control it.
stats:
everything is 8.
note: the most balanced clan.
controlers of ice: name says all. they can manipulate and create ice to use as weaponry.
stats:
str. 7
dex. 7
spd. 25
char. 7
wis. 7.
note: if you want to make your own clan, pm me about it.
now come the jinchuriki, the container of the bijuu(multiple tailed demons). their are 9 bijuu, so only 9 jinchuriki, and they are on teams by themselves. jinchuriki can only be non clan, and therefore have no kekkei genkai.( bloodline power)
the bijuu are:
the 1 tailed shukaku( there is no english for shukaku, it is a native creature to japan, similar to a dog and raccoon mix, but not.) special abilities:
allows the jinchuriki to control sand, for armor or attack.
released form jutsu: wind style: air bullet.
two tailed cat: give the holder speed and reflexes, as well as retractable claws for battle.
released form jutsu: lightning arc burst.
three tailed sea beast: gives the holder flexability and the ability to breathe under water, as well as a knack for water jutsu.
released form jutsu: water style: crashing tsunami.
four tailed reptile: gives the holder a better defense, and stronger musles.
released form jutsu: earth style: earthquake stomp.
five tailed dog: gives the holder increased strength and speed.
released form jutsu: air style: piercing howl. note: this is an exeption to the rule, and can be contained by an Inuzuka.
six tailed weasel: gives the holder flexibility, dexterity, and proficiency with weapons.
released form jutsu: metal style: storm of blades.
seven tailed badger: gives the holder added health and strength.
released form jutsu: earth style: death hold jutsu
eight tailed snake: gives the holder an elongated and strong tongue for attacking, and venemous fangs.
released form jutsu: poison style: venom spray.
nine tailed fox: gives the holder slightly increased strength and speed, and a whole lotta chakra.
released jutsu: flaming fox barrage.
izzat any better?

That mass of text is hard on the eyes.

Try re-formatting it so it's easy to read.

Ridiculous or not, you better come up with a storyline quick, or this topic will go into lockdown.

ah, yes, i forgot something. the plot. well.....................
the five great nations of fire, water, wind, and lighning have fallen apart from war. each clan now holds control of a small village, only because people feel protected around them.
however, the war continues as the akatsuki are using this as an advantage to take land, food, and people, and the villages are trying to secure the same things to stay alive.
now they will need to defeat the akatsuki and eachother to survive, and ressurect the power of the hokage, mizukage, kazekage, and raikage( the elemental "shadows"(a figure of speech, the powers are actually contained in large gems. ) to bring about peace.... or take over the earth.

It's still just a big block of text.

Heard of having a blank line between paragraphs?

More to the point, heard of capitalization?

ok. this is a normal rp-type thing, just with different subclasses, which are all different types of shinobi.(ninja) what you do in your turn is measured by "action points". each jutsu(technique), movement, and basic taijutsu(martial arts ) strikes take AP. in addition jutsu may also take up chakra(spirit energy- is the energy measurement for this rp) everyone of the same class are on the same team, unless someone wishes to become an Akatsuki(rogue ninja) just let me know. (btw, system of power: the first person on a team is the leader, but they can be operthrown by a challenger, and make/break alliances)

the clans are:
puppet master- control human sized puppets with their chakra. these are no ordinary puppets, of course, but rigged with weaponry.

hyuga- have a special eye gene called byakugan which lets them see tenketsu(chakra points) and close them with a strike.
stats:
strength 10
dex 25
speed 10
charisma 8
wisdom 10.
Nara- can manipulate their shadow to capture their opponent and force them to copy their moves as close as possible.
note- this is a very strategic class.
stats:
strength 5
dex 10
speed 6
charisma 6
wisdom 18.
Akado- can use their special abillity to absorb chakra from an opponent, or give some to a friend.
notes: this clan can absorb chakra, and then use it for a normal jutsu, then get some more.... ya see the advantage here?
stats:
strength 9
dex. 7
spd. 8
char. 7
wis. 7
the taijutsu specialists- no i repeat NO CLAN can have stat increases a forth as good as these. they can open the 8 chakra gates to increase their power past the breaking point.
stats: strength 25
dex 5
speed 25
charisma 5
wisdom 7.
Inuzuka- can have their dog companions turn into clone of themselves, and do team up moves. stats:
str. 10
dex. 8
spd. 10
char. 8
wis. 8.
yamanaka- can send their mind into their opponent's body and control it.
stats:
everything is 8.
note: the most balanced clan.
controlers of ice: name says all. they can manipulate and create ice to use as weaponry.
stats:
str. 7
dex. 7
spd. 25
char. 7
wis. 7.
note: if you want to make your own clan, pm me about it.
now come the jinchuriki, the container of the bijuu(multiple tailed demons). their are 9 bijuu, so only 9 jinchuriki, and they are on teams by themselves. jinchuriki can only be non clan, and therefore have no kekkei genkai.( bloodline power)
the bijuu are:
the 1 tailed shukaku( there is no english for shukaku, it is a native creature to japan, similar to a dog and raccoon mix, but not.) special abilities:
allows the jinchuriki to control sand, for armor or attack.
released form jutsu: wind style: air bullet.
two tailed cat: give the holder speed and reflexes, as well as retractable claws for battle.
released form jutsu: lightning arc burst.
three tailed sea beast: gives the holder flexability and the ability to breathe under water, as well as a knack for water jutsu.
released form jutsu: water style: crashing tsunami.
four tailed reptile: gives the holder a better defense, and stronger musles.
released form jutsu: earth style: earthquake stomp.
five tailed dog: gives the holder increased strength and speed.
released form jutsu: air style: piercing howl. note: this is an exeption to the rule, and can be contained by an Inuzuka.
six tailed weasel: gives the holder flexibility, dexterity, and proficiency with weapons.
released form jutsu: metal style: storm of blades.
seven tailed badger: gives the holder added health and strength.
released form jutsu: earth style: death hold jutsu
eight tailed snake: gives the holder an elongated and strong tongue for attacking, and venemous fangs.
released form jutsu: poison style: venom spray.
nine tailed fox: gives the holder slightly increased strength and speed, and a whole lotta chakra.
released jutsu: flaming fox barrage.
izzat any better?

I took liberty of making a transformed/reformatted form that will make it easier or something to read.

Ok, This is a normal RP-Type thing, just with different subclasses, which are all different types of Shinobi.(Ninjas) What you do is your turn is measured by "action points". each Jutsu(Techniques), Movement, and Basic Taijutsu(Martial Arts ) strikes take AP. in addition Jutsu may also take up Chakra(Spirit Energy is the energy measurement for this RP) everyone of the same class are on the same team, unless someone wishes to become an Akatsuki(Rogue Ninja) Just to let you know. (BTW, System of power: The first person on a team is the Leader, But they can be overthrown by a challenger, and make/break alliances)

The Clans are:
Puppet Master- Control human sized puppets with their Chakra. These are no ordinary puppets, of course, but rigged with weaponry.

Notes: This is the most customizable class, and will probably take a long time as compared to my normal 2 minutes.(These take around 10-15, and thats just because i have been making RPs for 3 years, and my friends and i made a system for super quick and yet actually very detailed abillity system with most people, It would take at least five hours.)

Puppets add a bit to your total AP, but share actions with the master.
Base Stats:
STR (Strength) 5
DEX (Dexterity) 20
SPE (Speed) 7
DEF (Defense) 7
CHA (Charisma) 15
WIS (Wisdom) 10

Aburame- Shortly after birth, all Aburames are placed in a chamber containing special creatures called the Kikai bugs, which eat chakra, and turns their body into nests for these insects. In exchange for a home and food, the Kikai help them in battle.

Note: the Aburame have the most versatile array of actions at any given time out of all the clans, because the Kikai are so versatile.
Stats:
STR 8
DEX 8
SPE 12
DEF 7
CHA 6
WIS 10

Uchiha- They have a special eye gene called Sharingan which allows them to tell an opponents next move... or copy it exactly.
Stats:
STR 7
DEX 7
SPE 7
CHA 10
WIS 25.

Hyuga- They have a special eye gene called Byakugan which lets them see Tenketsu(Chakra) and close them with a strike.
Stats:
STR 10
DEX 25
SPE 10
CHA 8
WIS 10

Nara- They can manipulate their shadow to capture their opponent and force them to copy their moves as close as possible.

Note- This is a very strategic class.
Stats:
STR 5
DEX 10
SPE 6
CHA 6
WIS 18

Akado- They can use their special abillity to absorb Chakra from an opponent, or give some to a friend.

Notes: This clan can absorb Chakra, and then use it for a normal Jutsu, then get some more.... You see the advantage here?

Stats:
STR 9
DEX 7
SPE 8
CHA 7
WIS 7

The Taijutsu Specialists- No Clan, I repeat No Clan can have their stats to increase four times as good as these. They can open the 8-Chakra Gates to increase their power past the breaking point.
Stats:

STR 25
DEX 5
SPE 25
CHA 5
WIS 7

Inuzuka- They have their own Dog Companions. They can turn into clone of their master (Inuzuka), And do team up moves.
Stats:

STR 10
DEX 8
SPE 10
CHA 8
WIS 8

Yamanaka- They can send their mind into their opponent's body and control their own opponent.
Note: This is the most balanced clan.
Stats:

STR 8
DEX 8
SPE 8
CHA 8
WIS 8

Controllers of Ice: It's name says all. They can manipulate and create ice to use as a dangerous weapon.
Stats:

STR 7
DEX 7
SPE 25
CHA 7
WIS 7

Note: If you want to make your own clan, PM me about it.
now come the Jinchuriki, the container of the Bijuu(multiple tailed demons).

Their are 9 Bijuu, so only 9 Jinchuriki, and they are on teams by themselves. Jinchuriki can only be non-clan, and therefore have no Kekkei Genkai.( Bloodline power)

The Bijuu are:
The One-Tailed Shukaku( There is no English for Shukaku, it is a native creature to Japan, similar to a Dog and Raccoon mix, but not.)
Special Abilities: Allows the Jinchuriki to control sand, for armor or attack
Released Form Jutsu: Wind Style: Air Bullet.

Two-Tailed Cat: Gives the holder speed and reflexes, as well as retractable claws for battle.
Released Form Jutsu: Lightning Arc Burst.

Three-Tailed Sea Beast: Gives the holder flexibility and the ability to breathe under water, as well as a knack for Water Jutsu.
Released Form Jutsu: Water Style: Crashing Tsunami.

Four-Tailed Reptile: Gives the holder a better defense, and stronger muscles.
Released Form Jutsu: Earth Style: Earthquake Stomp.

Five-Tailed Dog: Gives the holder increased strength and speed.
Released Form Jutsu: Air Style: Piercing Howl.
Note: This is an exception to the rule, and can be contained by an Inuzuka.

Six-Tailed Weasel: Gives the holder flexibility, dexterity, and proficiency with weapons.
Released Form Jutsu: Metal Style: Storm of Blades.

Seven-Tailed Badger: Gives the holder added health and strength.
Released Form Jutsu: Earth Style: Death-Hold Jutsu

Eight-Tailed Snake: Gives the holder an elongated and strong tongue for attacking, and venemous fangs.
Released Form Jutsu: Poison Style: Venom Spray.

Nine-Tailed Fox: Gives the holder slightly increased strength and speed, and a lot of Chakra.
Released Jutsu: Flaming Fox Barrage.
Is that any better?

Translated from n00binese, to Pr0inese.
From
-smackhack

EDIT

Forgot the storyline.

ah, yes, i forgot something. the plot. well.....................
the five great nations of fire, water, wind, and lighning have fallen apart from war. each clan now holds control of a small village, only because people feel protected around them.
however, the war continues as the akatsuki are using this as an advantage to take land, food, and people, and the villages are trying to secure the same things to stay alive.
now they will need to defeat the akatsuki and eachother to survive, and ressurect the power of the hokage, mizukage, kazekage, and raikage( the elemental "shadows"(a figure of speech, the powers are actually contained in large gems. ) to bring about peace.... or take over the earth.

I took liberty of blah blah blah, reformatting, transforming, blah to make it easier to read.

Oh yeah, I forgot the plot.
The Five Great Nations of Fire, Water, Wind, Lightning, and Sand have fallen apart from war. Each clan now holds control of a small village, only because people feel protected around them.

However, the war continues as the Akatsuki are using this as an advantage to take land, food, and people, and the villages are trying to secure the same things to stay alive.

Now they will need to defeat the Akatsuki and each other to survive, and ressurect the power of the Hokage, Mizukage, Kazekage, and Raikage( The Elemental Shadows, A figure of speech, the powers are actually contained in large gems. ) to bring about peace.... or take over the earth.

first of all, i'm lazy, not newbish. second the five nations was a very large typo. the 4 nations are fire, water, wind, and lighning. third, the jinchurikki are to powerful, so, the deal is: anyone can be a jinchurikki, so long as they can defeat and capture the bijuu.

3 things.
1. lazy, not newbish.
2. there are errors in your "pr0iess". one-fourth, not for times, for inctance.
3. please. if you can't not be a prick, shut up and stay away.

this has been brought to you by STFU! ya prick! industry for pricks to shut the heck up.