NEWWWW I HAVE THE PROLOUGE WRITTEN AND THE BACKSTORY AND WILL GET THEM UP TOMMORROW(FRIDAY NOVEMBER 2ND
I WILL ALSO HAVE MORE DETAILED CHAR DISCRIPTIONS THEN I WILL TAKE SIGNEES SO YOU KNOW WHAT YOU ARE SIGNING UP FOR KAY? Also I need a cleric for one of the parts.(good parts) cause of the whole healing mubo jumbo

PROLOGUE
The story begins in Broa the year of 2200. The world is in a shaky peace, the three powers, the alliance of xistopia(Masteria and Victoria), The republic of Lescipia(ossy), and the kingdom of ludiburm. The govenor of Lescipia, Adrian, is planning a hostile takeover of broa, but needs two pieces to finalize the puzzle, a boy named Saturos and the staff only he can find. Adrian quickly learns of a prophecy made in Jikilia(masteria) when twin boys are born and named after the prophecy spoke of in the dangerous clock keep, the boys names you ask? Ivan and Saturos. Adrian vows that in 13 years from the date he will take the boy saturos by force.

Thirteen years to that day Ivan and Saturos have an encounter with Adrian and their lives change forever.

Parts for prolouge, I:Ivan Sat:Saturos Adr: Adrian Thun:(general of the lescipian army*note* may change if someone wants the part.)

I: satty want to go to the urban forest today?
Sat: I thought we were supposed to stay in town, we were told the forest is dangerous.
I: Aww come on
Sat: alright but you have to take the blame if were caught
I: Like always *F2* but when are we ever caught
Sat: I don't know lets go there
*walk to the forest*
I:Wow this place is cooooool
*runs off*
Sat: Ivan where did you go? Come back I'm scared
*adrian steps out of the portal with Ivan in tow*
Adr: now no need to be scared I brought your brother with me.
Sat: Gee thanks
Adr: No problem would you boys like to hear a story?
I&Sat: Sure what kind?
Adr: It's a prophecy, it was made 20 years before you were born it is said 13 years ago on this day twins would be born one a great hero, the other a ruthless villan and that together they would shape the world and the war to come.
I&Sat: wow really?
Adr: yes only the chieftains and their heirs are supposed to know about it.
I: So what were the names of the twins?
Adr: that I do not know. Now head back before you get into trouble.
Sat: ok
*I and Sat walk off*
Adr: Thundera initiate the plan
Thun: As you wish.

Moments after the call from Adrian Jikalia is attacked and everybody flees safely to clock keep except the soldiers who are holding back Thunderas army.
Saturos and Ivan walk in on this confrontation, upon seeing saturos Thundera gets a large smile on his face(he was loosing)

Thun: Ahh I have what i came for
*steals saturos*
Thun: Mark my works I will come back one day and take over your city.
*disapeers*
I: NOOOOOOOOOO
*Ivan runs after thundera*
Ivan's Dad: No don't your not ready.
I: dad let me go.

2 Years later Ivan is ready to leave the town and find his brother, but saturos is nearing the end of his training and Ivan has barely started. Ivan is left the earrings of the chieftains as he is the only heir left and is told to find the Thief Lord who will instruct him further.

So that is the prologue and I will work on the fine mechanics of it later(Grammer and timing ect.) but that is overly what it is about I will write the backstory tomorrow. please tell me what you think.


Hello guys, ive decided to make a video(well its been in production for a while now) and am putting the word out to all onrpgers(preferably broans) to join my cause. This movie is hopefully going to be based off my fanfiction(which also needs revision AKA reheaval as i need a MALE protaganist.) Anyways I'm having a small spot of trouble getting the parts. I figure we can use this to put together the first few parts and such then i will make my own fourms for it so as not to clog up onrpg.
END PROLOUGE
Im doing this to get the word out.
Also i will eventually provide a backstory based on that i would like it if anyone could submit a name.

Also to be in it you need a charcter on the broa server. And you must be able to go to most ever area possible(there are heavy exceptions but at least all the towns)
Anyways the parts are as follows
Good parts.
Main Protagonist(Name Ivan):Me either male or female i need to decide
Protagonists Friend(Name Andy):Arc.
Party member protagonist meets on the ship(no name currently): None
Party Member protagonist meets in many places(no name currently):none
Omega Leader: None
Antagonists.

Big evil dude: HOPEFULLY Adrian. though probaly None.
General of the lescipian(orbis) army: None(probaly me though IF no one applies)
Main Protagonists old friend and Rival:Selendrile7(RL friend)
Minion 1: None
Minion 2: none
Traitor: none.
And other parts as i need them.
If you would like to contact me about said parts or just want to add me on maple contact me either
Maple IGN: Blizzerawolf
MSN Email(messanger):Blazingwolf2@hotmail.com
Email: Cinderwolf732@yahoo.com
or Pm me here.
Thanks and here is to hoping my movie is a sucess

Hey I can help out.... does the traitor betray the Protagonist (you) if so i want to be the traitor rofl...

Herbi3 lvl 57 Sin

let me know when you film cuase ive got school and stuff

wolfy! count me in. let me know if you need more people, i know 2 or 3 real life friends who would be more than happy to help.

IGN:RobotTM

(PM me if you need friends IGN's)

Party member protagonist meets on the ship: None
Party Member protagonist meets in many places:none


I can help with either of those 2, since i only log on weekends.

Good Luck.

Zac il be the big evil guy as you said :P. But with my dexless :p

So those scenes we did in the summer was a waste?-_-
If you decide to add a traitor to the story feel free to ask me since that is what i probably am to you

is this when i get to rob you :3

I'm ready for my close up.
I'll be a minion. Dandizzle26
:)

If you can put up with my schedule, I can try and help ya' out. Fair warning though; my schedule may or may not start being a bit more hectic soon. I've requested more hours at work so I can afford a trip to see an old friend next year.

So those scenes we did in the summer was a waste?-_-
If you decide to add a traitor to the story feel free to ask me since that is what i probably am to you
Yes they were because my fraps was gay and i was being dumb when i moved secenes around.
Anyways guys the time in which i have to film the movie if its just me and someone its completly flexible but later (like after Wolf(still havn't thought of a name)es party meets up) will most likely be done on the weekends.
Ill update more but i like have to go to school soon >_>
And Vin stop moping you left the guild i could care less, sure i could be mad but whats the point. So stop brining it up and get on good terms with me NAO.
@Adrian
you may not be able it won't be for a while that you need it but you eventually need shadow partner AND avenger and i don't want to screw up you sin i think liyth has both doesn't he?

LOL.

Zac, no offense, but your grammar, spelling, capitalization, punctuation, and overall usage of formal English is a joke. And you plan to write a fanfiction...let alone make a movie?

LOL.

Zac, no offense, but your grammar, spelling, capitalization, punctuation, and overall usage of formal English is a joke. And you plan to write a fanfiction...let alone make a movie?

If you take it on the positive side, its by writing and practicing you do get better. My french sucks more than my english and yet i am writing a book too. Most people posting in forums doesn't even care about grammar (except those grammar whore who can only bad mouth about you by talking about it) so maybe if he puts effort in it, he can write a good fanfiction with almost no spelling error.

True. I think every1 here can write in a good grammar or a least look in a grammar book or in a dictionary.

LOL.

Zac, no offense, but your grammar, spelling, capitalization, punctuation, and overall usage of formal English is a joke. And you plan to write a fanfiction...let alone make a movie?
Buddy don't make assumptions.
First off you don't need to be super on target with most of those things,save spelling and grammer, to make a movie iv'e produced many scripts and they have been good.
Second,how the hell do you know that i can't proof read when i was writing my script i had many people proofread it plus spelling and grammer check.
Its more about vocabularly and wording then spelling and puncuation.
I could EASILLY go to your fanfic and point out many things wrong with it and go.
LOL
no offense ben, but i think because you don't do this perfectly your peice is a peice of flaming shit.
What you did was completly rude insensitive and was based purely off of what you know from this fourm,which i wouldn't take NEARLY as much time to make sure everything is working fine or use better vocabulary.
It seems that you wanted to just create a trivial, frivilous argument by saying that.
So if your not going to be constructive and offer help but just say "because i don't think your good enough i think its funny that your going to make a fanfic and a movie".
Meh don't bother going oh but this post is an example because you know what IT IS, but im not going to take the extra time to put in extra commas if my message is gotten. You would see a HUGE difference from my fourm typing and my book typing as i take extra care with it.
Oh and Ben no offense but your attempts to troll/flame(if i got it right) are a joke if yor not going to be nice or helpful don't post here as its a waste of my time and yours.
Once again DON'T MAKE HALF ASSED ASSUMPTIONS BECAUSE YOU NEVER KNOW.

Tell me your conflict, complications, rising action, climax, falling action, resolution, ending, round characters, flat characters, characterization and plans for character development, social context, atmosphere, point of view, and what kind of symbolism you plan to use, if any. Also, the basic genre and diction/jargon.

I take Honors Literature and writing classes, I know what the hell I'm doing.

Tell me your conflict, complications, rising action, climax, falling action, resolution, ending, round characters, flat characters, characterization and plans for character development, social context, atmosphere, point of view, and what kind of symbolism you plan to use, if any. Also, the basic genre and diction/jargon.

I take Honors Literature and writing classes, I know what the hell I'm doing.
But you don't seem to know the hell what your doing with me, listen just because your some honors student doesn't mean you can come and start trolling/flaming me what you did was something you NEVER treat a human being with you NEVER say no offense then procede to take them down to the most primordial level.
Your posisiton in school means NOTHING I could be taking AP clases if i did my homework i don't do it, don't take notes i ace everyclass it doesn't make me perfect, and ben untill you can learn to treat human beings with respect, wether or wether not YOU think your right, you could be the smartest person in the world and no one would like you.
So please stop flaming or i will have to ask olaph to close this topic, you brought the insulting PLEASE end it being the bigger person as you had no right to insult me, or anyone else for that matter, like that.
EDIT
also something funny is i know what most of that is and i can't tell you as of now as i have yet to think of it. there will also be multiple climaxes as i like cliffhangers and use them a lot. point of view 3rd omniscient i need to show what my characters feel and other things. The main conflict is the govoner of orbis is planning a hostile takeover of the world and the main protagonist Jenna must stop him but there will be multiple internal and external conflicts as well. Complications well you should know that theres a traitor and other things i haven't though of. The basic resolution is that the governer is defeated and that is the ending BASICALLY i haven't gotten there yet. My plans for character development is for Jenna to develop as a visionary and to not take things literaly i haven't thought of the other characters yet. With multiple climaxes i really cannot tell you the rising/falling action. i knew what round/flat characters were a while ago like 7th gradeish i can't remeber. The general genre is fiction there isn't much more to it. And i can't answer social context or atmosphere because i haven't dealt with them yet.

Did I say that the fact that I take Honors classes affects anything? No, I didn't.

You're not about to start teaching me manners all over again, because I have a friends, a girlfriend, and a life. I'm pretty damn sure that I KNOW how to treat other people with respect. You, you're some guy who doesn't take two seconds to backspace once and fix a typo and attempts to make official threads about whatever the hell the thread is about.

I say those things because I know they're true. If your "book writing" is really THAT good, then you would take the time to fix your other posts that have some kind of significance because, like some fanfic, people who read those posts are actually interested in whatever the posts are about. People read fanfics because they're interested in and expect much from them (Well, the majority anyway). Even your SIGNATURE, you would take the time to organize that if what you said was true. I mean seriously, "Heat"? It's in big letters, you did it in Paint, it's not that hard to press CTRL+Z and undo your typo.

Anyone with at least one eye can see that you don't take the time to at least organize a post or anything, yet you attempt to be all big and write a fanfiction.

Wolf,you've changed recently. You seem to offended easily at little things.And you seem to feed the fire more often. So your grammar isn't perfect? Who gives a damn? Just ignore him and continue with your little movie.

Also he didn't insult you, he just stated a fact.

Now all of yoos bees quiets or else this thread will be locked.:grit:

Did I say that the fact that I take Honors classes affects anything? No, I didn't.

You're not about to start teaching me manners all over again, because I have a friends, a girlfriend, and a life. I'm pretty damn sure that I KNOW how to treat other people with respect. You, you're some guy who doesn't take two seconds to backspace once and fix a typo and attempts to make official threads about whatever the hell the thread is about.

I say those things because I know they're true. If your "book writing" is really THAT good, then you would take the time to fix your other posts that have some kind of significance because, like some fanfic, people who read those posts are actually interested in whatever the posts are about. People read fanfics because they're interested in and expect much from them (Well, the majority anyway). Even your SIGNATURE, you would take the time to organize that if what you said was true. I mean seriously, "Heat"? It's in big letters, you did it in Paint, it's not that hard to press CTRL+Z and undo your typo.

Anyone with at least one eye can see that you don't take the time to at least organize a post or anything, yet you attempt to be all big and write a fanfiction.
But thats the point you could have easily pointed out the error in my post said Zac you should just take extra time to proofread as you have a bit of trouble with spelling ect ect, but instead you decide to blow it all out of preportion(i did it a small bit too) and flame me saying you have a "life" i have one too i also have a girlfriend whats the point about that. also you must have meant it meant something because you brought it up so you were trying to use it as grounds to win your argument. You also cannot state them as fact because in reality i AM more careful with writing stories and i proofread them multiple times, here i do not care as much because i don't view a post i make in 4 minutes as important as a book(fanfiction) i write and even if i make typos here i DO use the backspace key, the problem? I'm usually typing too fast to notice these typos and post them. I also only made this thread to find onrpgers that would like to participate did i think i would be flamed by having someone make a mockery of my English because i have a problem with spelling(always have its a mental problem i was born with), no i expected a bunch of people to say "cool I'd love to do that" and make it with me. Now are you seriously judging me based on the fact i miss typos and cannot spell very well? Why of course because thats the first thing to jump on.
Ben maby you should be thought manners again I am not saying you have none it just seems like you could have handled this very constructively yet you chose not too.
Also I'm sorry I am bad at organizing things that is another problem i have had since 1st grade and i cannot fix I try my hardest(online and off line) to fix my organizational problem but i really can't, I also think i am pretty dang good at writing and I do this for fun, I am not trying to be "big" as you call it but merely try my hand at something i find interesting.

Also while it wasn't the nicest thing thank you for pointing out the error in my signature i was not aware of it and I will fix it right away.

@ Rishiko
It is NOT a fact unless you can back it up with proof and even then if i can provide counter proof(aka something wrote with good everything) then it is not a FACT it is merely his assumption based off me posting in a forum as to why this is, It's also not a little thing however you think it telling someone something like that is very rude and is not a way you treat others like i said he could have put it nicely(aka constructively as your told to do in English classes and others) but he decided to basically troll the thread and flame me. Also this thread will only be locked when i flame back or ask olaph myself to lock it,neither of which i plan to do.
Please Rishiko don't say something is a fact without proof.

So please stop posting or i will have to ask olaph to close this topic

Oh man, you just made my day.

But anyways, I think what Chrome is trying to say is that if you want to do something, really put your effort into it, make it your best. If you want to be taken seriously, put structure to your ideas, thoughts, and furthermore-- your posts. Put your heart into something and try at it, type into your fingers bleed, philosophize until you fall into a minor depression, these are all minor sacrifices to the big picture.

Oh, and it's okay to stroke your ego when you're right, arrogance works beautifully with genius, just make sure you have the latter before the former.

Oh man, you just made my day.

But anyways, I think what Chrome is trying to say is that if you want to do something, really put your effort into it, make it your best. If you want to be taken seriously, put structure to your ideas, thoughts, and furthermore-- your posts. Put your heart into something and try at it, type into your fingers bleed, philosophize until you fall into a minor depression, these are all minor sacrifices to the big picture.

Oh, and it's okay to stroke your ego when you're right, arrogance works beautifully with genius, just make sure you have the latter before the former.
Exactly my point this should have been somthing Ben said and thats what i got from it the point is, is that you treat others with respect(and pyrus i do plan to do that I am putting my own heart and soul into this) and not flame them.
Also i have asked olaph and it is possible.
EDIT
lol i realized my mistake. Changed it

Mmk Maze, I'll stop throwing rocks at-

I mean, yeah.

-hops in pants-

"also you must have meant it meant something because you brought it up so you were trying to use it as grounds to win your argument"
If you really CAN proorfread, you would know why I posted that sentence.
"I'm usually typing too fast to notice these typos and post them."
I type about 90 WPM on average, faster than most people that I know.

Where is the part for the random people?

Where is the part for the random people?
LOL uhh i could put random parts in.
I need to write my scripts first though.

it seems like everytime i go into a thread, thunderawolf, zac, is always defending himself against something with paragraph long words that repeat themselves. but anywhoo, you should seriously put more organization into your works. i don't even know what you're doing besides it's a movie with roles and casting with no lines and no title and no plot and no conflict and nothing... just roles.

maybe you should think of it while in school. then post up an organized scripting, maybe a little glimpse of the story for everyone. i don't know, make it seem interesting.

count me out, but please, take my criticizing into mind without anger or bias. it just might help you become a better writer/scripter.

Whatever, I don't feel like fighting with you again wolf. Ill just stay neutral in this argument.

What server if this gonna take place in? I wanna be a minion :O

it seems like everytime i go into a thread, thunderawolf, zac, is always defending himself against something with paragraph long words that repeat themselves. but anywhoo, you should seriously put more organization into your works. i don't even know what you're doing besides it's a movie with roles and casting with no lines and no title and no plot and no conflict and nothing... just roles.

maybe you should think of it while in school. then post up an organized scripting, maybe a little glimpse of the story for everyone. i don't know, make it seem interesting.

count me out, but please, take my criticizing into mind without anger or bias. it just might help you become a better writer/scripter.
Well i had a backstory and about 10 episodes of the script written already but well i kinda started over as i stopped using the charcter.
Also i adressed it already but i have always had a very large problem with orginization(not sure why) I try as hard as i can to orginize my posts and am very sorry if it is hard to follow.
Thank you for your kind words
your post confused me a bit though would you mind explaining the first part?

don't worry about the first part, just try and make a better introduction for your works. make sure you don't jump straight into your asking for roles. introduce the story and what roles are played in part with the story.

that'll help seperate roles for the community that fits them best. you just can't say "protagonist" because they might end up signing up for a "protagonist of a destruction of sex role" which i'm sure no one wants to play. just an example but i hope you get the point.

don't worry about the first part, just try and make a better introduction for your works. make sure you don't jump straight into your asking for roles. introduce the story and what roles are played in part with the story.

that'll help seperate roles for the community that fits them best. you just can't say "protagonist" because they might end up signing up for a "protagonist of a destruction of sex role" which i'm sure no one wants to play. just an example but i hope you get the point.
No thats a great example i see they think they might be signing up for like good or evil but because im so vague with my descriptions i could flip it on them
All right i started with the prolouge i guess i could post it here, otherwise i will devolp a backstory during school(gemotery class has a use!) and post it here.
Thank you you have been one of the biggest helps

Ehhh. Maplestory movies always suck, they're too boring.

Whether you want to deny it or not, Ben speaks the truth, although he picked a pretty harsh way to say it lole.

The way someone types is pretty much the only way you can really see their personality through the internet (since you can't see their body movement and tone). When he mentioned his classes he said he knows what writing a story is about.

And just something I need to throw in there; reading your long posts is a real pain in the ***, I don't know if your story will be really different compared to it but it's a pain to read your long paragraphs.

Oh yeah, and is The War of All Ages the name of it? Something about that name seems odd.

glad i can be of help. :D

Ehhh. Maplestory movies always suck, they're too boring.

Whether you want to deny it or not, Ben speaks the truth, although he picked a pretty harsh way to say it lole.

The way someone types is pretty much the only way you can really see their personality through the internet (since you can't see their body movement and tone). When he mentioned his classes he said he knows what writing a story is about.

And just something I need to throw in there; reading your long posts is a real pain in the ***, I don't know if your story will be really different compared to it but it's a pain to read your long paragraphs.

Oh yeah, and is The War of All Ages the name of it? Something about that name seems odd.
Its because i really can't name crap, it's the thing I am actually the worst at, also i get the whole "taking it out of context" with typing and all but I really AM a lot more careful I proofread my story and my scripts multiple times because of that reason.
I am also sorry its hard to read my long posts im working on orginizing them better D:

Once again i apologize for the name.

You play Broa, don't you? If you played Scania I'd be more than willing to help. :(

Its because i really can't name crap, it's the thing I am actually the worst at, also i get the whole "taking it out of context" with typing and all but I really AM a lot more careful I proofread my story and my scripts multiple times because of that reason.
I am also sorry its hard to read my long posts im working on orginizing them better D:

Once again i apologize for the name.

Zac don't you think you should try to set up the meetings and update the charecter set before starting random arguements? thanks.

Seriously zac just forget making these dum videos. I remember since like july youve been trying to make movies and i havent really seen anything yet. Get a new hobby and put some space in between your paragraphs its hard as hell to read

Zac don't you think you should try to set up the meetings and update the charecter set before starting random arguements? thanks.
Because I will not argue with you i really didn't start the argument, I only said what needed to be said ,and I am very busy with school which is why i haven't been able too the most i checked the thread was yesterday it's the end of the quarter and i need to turn in late work

Seriously zac just forget making these dum videos. I remember since like july youve been trying to make movies and i havent really seen anything yet. Get a new hobby and put some space in between your paragraphs its hard as hell to read
Adrian I usally put spaces in my paragraphs probaly just not where everyone else does but thank you about being, somewhat, nice about it.

Anyways I have another hobby which is percisicly why i have not been able to get these movies done(with a bunch of other reasons computer and needing full fraps reasons) and i will do it eventually i just get sidetracked.

Well if you really enjoy making movies then go for it and forget what people are saying here. I mean if people always stopped because someone else told them its a stupid idea, not a lot of things would have happended. Also remeber if you need me just tell me on msn and il be in the movies

Seriously zac just forget making these dum videos. I remember since like july youve been trying to make movies and i havent really seen anything yet. Get a new hobby and put some space in between your paragraphs its hard as hell to read

lol? all i've seen him do is play Maple for like that past however long i can remember.

new hobby? KartRider! lol.

Err, Zac if this is still going on then I might be a while. I'm reformating my computer as I type this and it might take this whole weekend before I can play again.

Sorry. =/

Err, Zac if this is still going on then I might be a while. I'm reformating my computer as I type this and it might take this whole weekend before I can play again.

Sorry. =/
Completly fine i need to get full fraps >_>

Completly fine i need to get full fraps >_>

same, i've been looking for one for quite a while now.

I've added the prolouge to my 1st post please read it :D
It's between the purply thingys.

The prologue seems pretty bland. I was expecting more, but whatever.

The prologue seems pretty bland. I was expecting more, but whatever.
Could you mind explaining more?
I'm sorry but telling me its bland isn't a huge help.
I came up with this pretty spur of the moment so its not deeply thought out i just needed a smallish backstory to support the prolouge i wrote.

If you could explain your problem better i will try and fix it.

Also it's just meant to spike the intrest the complications are what finish it.