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Alexdude1255
11-17-2007, 04:00 PM
( In response to what the moderator said, I'd like to apologize to everyone including the moderator for my ignorance.. I obviously haven't been in these forums long enough to find out that it wasn't allowed to post unrelated topics in the posts. Hopefully we will better ourselves by not being off-topic and actually use the PMs to ask questions related to this post. But also, we must try to follow all the rules listed in stickies. Any rules broken will be dealt through a moderator.. pending my report on the individual. )

I saw a Bleach RP in another post and decided it was a waste, so I've decided to revive it and make it even better. This will be a freeform roleplay of the animated show, "Bleach".. this takes place around after the time of the great battles in Hueco Mundo. Here are the rules basically:

1.) You are given the choice of: Shinigami, Physical Human (Chad.), Spiritual Human ( Inoue. ), Hollow ( This falls under Arrancar and Espada classed Vaste Lorde. ), Vaizard, Mod - Souls, Bounto, Quincy, and... Human if you like to progress your charactor further in this area. Any other ideas would be welcomed.

2.) I will be the judge of some classes however, such as Vaizard.. I want someone that is capable to be a Vaizard. Not a ill-natured RPer. I will deem responsibility of the authenticity of the charactors that are created.

3.) You will have similar abilities with Physical Human, Spiritual Human, and Quincy.. but when it comes to the choices of Shinigami, Hollow, Bounto, and Humans specifically you must have a unique set of names / abilities / techniques. Kidou uses are allowed.

4.) Do not rip names off the Bleach Series, use unique names and try to consider what kind of charactor you would create if it came to the series "Bleach".

5.) Take it slow, do not immediately make a charactor that is god-like. Such as a Vaizard that just started that already has the ability to use his/her mask for 20 minutes without real training at all.

6.) This is similar to rule #5, do not make charactors that are top-pwnage x10. Use realism when it comes to creating a charactor.

7.) Charactor-related alliances apply in this Roleplay, so it doesn't mean that being a hollow your allowed to ally yourself with the Humans / Shinigami unless there is a extremely important RP reason.

8.) Do not spoil what happens in the show, you may however use something if there is a RP reason.. I can't stop people from spoiling themselves. =P

8.) I will control plot-twists, AKA.. Roleplay Master.

9.) No irrelevant posts, if you have questions.. PM to me. Any repeated posting of charactor sheets is prohibited.

10.) Follow the rules that were posted on the forum.

11.) Any above rules broken will be dealt with RPly and through a Moderator.

Here's the Charactor Sheet Template:

Name:
Gender:
Race: ( You put your choice of race IE, Shinigami.. etc. )
Height:
Build:
Attire: ( What your wearing, what you look like.. etc. Scars. =P )
Weapon: ( The weapon you use, or what your race can use. )
Kidou: ( Explain basic kidou uses here, if any. )
History: ( If you want. )

Background

I cannot give a background to something that can be done by players themselves, but I will give you the basic background: This RP takes place right after the conflict in Hueco Mundo.

Note: If any moderators find something wrong, speak with me.. I will make sure I fix it.

My charactor sheet:

Name: Alexander Zweith
Gender: Male
Race: Human / Physical Human ( Chad. )
Height: 7'6"
Build: Buff.
Attire: He has Brown hair, and Hazel eyes. The top of the body of his consist of a Red Muscle Shirt, and bottom consists of black track pants. Running shoes, and sometimes wears a sports cap if he feels like it. Other styles of clothing consists of flashy fashion sense.
Weapon: Has yet to get the Armored Arm, just yet..
Kidou: None.. no talent in the area.
History: Unknown, basic school life consists most of his life.. he is however a "Strong" silent-type, sits down.. listens to the lectures but never really opened himself up to anyone until that "incident" happened.

Storyline

Far away, in the town of Karakura in the middle of Japan.. lay a lot of abnormal activities. Such as raving hollows, eating souls and killing people for their energy. This threat was answered with increased spiritual energy, thus giving people abilities.. and the increase of patrolling Soul Reapers. Thus.. eliminating the possibility of annihilation by the Hollows, including the increase of Vaste Lordes. However.. this was only the peak of the problem, In the North American continent.. there was cases of increased Reiatsu in the local populace. This gave the hollows another area to hunt for souls and innocent people. Leaving the soul reapers in the Karakura Town to think on how to handle this new problem. Since it is now widespread.

As for the local populace in North America.. some either die without revealing their new abilities, or awaken them and fight back. What will happen to them? Will Hueco Mundo decide to send in Vaste Lordes to destroy them? Or will they be able to hold out against the onslaught?

Story up 'till now......

Alexander was just on a walk on the weekend, when he was knocked out from behind... dragged into a Abandoned building and forced to fight an unknown being. The juggernaut survived the attack and unleashed his new ability, and escaped with his life. At this same time, Jessie got an order from the Soul Society in the northern continental Spiritual World to destroy a hollow. But was too late, and left the scene in a "ugh" kind of attitude. Alexander met Jessie on his way to the apartment.. noticing her Spiritual Presence, asked her why he felt her presence. Then decided.. along with the others to speak in the same abandoned building where the hollow was. Questions were answered.. but some were left unanswered when a Adjuchas Hollow came to pay a nice little visit to the four that were in the building, it attacked Alexander first and the fight blazed on......

( You may all post your charactor sheets, but those who were rejected do not post theirs. Those who were already accepted.. post their charactor sheets anyways to keep track. A reminder, any repeated posting of charactor sheets and unrelated posts to this RP will be deleted. )

BleachFreak
11-18-2007, 02:25 AM
Hope I remember everything, sheesh this is gonna be hard.
Name: Ryujoji Tanou
Gender: Male
Race: Shinigami
Height: 5' 11"
Build: Slight, Fast, Flexible
Attire: 1. Beat-Crusaders T-shirt. Jeans with chain belt. short,black hair, Yellow, cat-like eyes. 2. (at this point) Black kimono, same facial features.
Weapon: Mozue Omue (mimic parrot) can copy an opponants moves (examples are, zanpackto effects, attacks, and other special techniques) rules are: 1. User must have fought the peson in order to copy their moves,
2. Person must be in the same room in order for the user to copy the move,
3. The person must be alive in order for the user to copy the move.
Kidou: Byakurai (white lightning), Shot of blue fire, Shunpo
History: Ryujoji is a former shinigami falsly accused of murder and exiled from seireitei, after running for three days Ryujoji was attacked by a hollow. Too weak to fight, Ryujoji ran from the hollow, somehow managing to escape to the human world, escaping from the hollow before he collapses. He then wakes up in the home of Mimori Shuzaku, a human girl, and when Ryujoji finds he has no memories of his past, Mimori lets him stay with her, saying, "It's lonely to live by yourself." After three years of living with Mimori, there is a huge car "accident" and Mimori dies, at her funeral Ryujoji sees a large black creature with a white mask in the woods, somehow realizing that the creature was responsible for his friends death, Ryujoji swears to kill the creature if it's the last thing he does. ( In the old thread, Ryujoji is visiting Mimori's grave three years after the accident when a hollow attacks, Ryujoji regains his memories and easily kills the hollow. After the fight Ryujoji finds himself in Toronto, near a path and meets Jessica (Jessie) Wells and Alexander Zwieth. They then walk to an abandoned building and meet Hasegawa Shun and take turns asking questions. They are cut short when a adjucha class menos attacks them.)
Hope everyone else finds the new thread, it'd be kinda sad if there was only two people. :3

Pipster
11-18-2007, 11:23 AM
(( I deleted it, everyone including the topic starter was argueing about some things, completely irrelevant to roleplaying. Hopefully this one will continue better. Perhaps it wouldn't have been deleted if you read the rules and actually reported it to the roleplaying moderator, or if you told the members of the rp to stop going into OOC about things which can easily be done in PM, nor do I plan to restore it now due to the lies you said in your first post in this topic. You and many others did break the RP rules ))

Splyex
11-18-2007, 06:14 PM
okay sorry i didnt know that where we were until i acutally read alex's first post all of it to be exact so yeah

Name: Hasegawa
Gender: Male
Race: quincy
Height: 5'7"
Build: average
Attire: pair of black trench coat, pair of black jeans, black t-shirt, black boots, black bucket hat with a red stripe, hair that covers up my face with red tips

Weapon: bow
Kidou: none
History: same as before

DaedaluS
11-18-2007, 11:18 PM
Name: Naraku Kamisori

Gender: Male

Race: Vaizard

Height:5'9"

Build: Left Handed

Attire: Has long black hair (Hitsugaya Toushiro style) and deep blue eye's. Wears a bloody red Arrancar outfit without sleeves. also has a strange scar on his neck. He has the body of an 18-19 year old student. Has a nasty temper.

Weapon: His Soul Slayer Nenshou (Burning).Later on when he develops bankai the soul slayers full name is Neshou za Kyuuten (meaning Burning the Sky). The blade itself is a normal 13 inches long blade with a red hilt without a fender. It's shikai (Unsealing the Soul slayer at first phase when the owner gets to know his Soul Slayer's name some of them have physical or kidou power) gives him the ability to control red and blue fire , but removes the user's ability to move because of a special stance he has to remain with so he can control the lightning.

Kidou: None except the soul slayer power he has yet to obtain any kidou powers.

History: He was born in the outer lands of Soul Society
during one day at the near town with his mother (at the age 20-30 years old) they got attacked by some thief`s and at the time of anger Naraku exploded in anger and emit`ed a large amount of reiatsu and a nearby Shinigami who lived in the city felt the reiatsu and rushed down. Afterwards few months later he joined the Academy, at that time he made two friends, a boy Tsutanai Kata (which means Clumsy Person) and a girl Migoto Otome (which means Beautiful girl). After that few years after some accident he left Soul Society in seeking of Hollow powers without anyone knowing why or if anyone knew they kept they`r mouths quiet.

Background: The truth about his escape from Soul Society is know only by high level ranked people, and it is that "one night when they`r team was sent on a training mission in the real world to little town in the foot of an mountain against very low leveled hollows they were ambushed by a extremely high level hollow, and for they bad luck that was the night when there are no high ranked people with the only the 6th and 7th under the Lieutenant and they were not able to kill the hollow. And as he was watching helplessly his teammates being murdered by the hollow came the time for him and his friends first Tsutanai then Migoto were murdered and he was the last one standing. At that time all will for life vanished he was unable to move and just before the strike was hit a dimension rift opened and two Captain Class and 3 Lieutenant Classed people entered and saved him. From that point on people say`d that after that night he became obsessed with hollow powers. Not much is know about him ever since only some speculations about him becoming a Vaizard.



I'll add some changes in my Soul Slayer when he becomes a stronger Vaizard and other stuff tho. That wont be in near future my char has a long path to go.
I did not remember all the details so i did it all over made some updated etc. You did not approve me the first time and few hours after i edited they removed the post...
And i wanted to ask should i start at the night when the hollow killed his friends or after ?!? :D

Alexdude1255
11-19-2007, 12:34 AM
( The Role play will start when everyone in the current on-going RP is suited up, posting their character sheets. I will accept other character sheets however, and accept them VIA PMs, I ask people to put them on the post so we can keep track on the character's attire.. and etc. Please check the PM box pending the posting of your character sheets. )

vknight
11-19-2007, 01:31 AM
how we know ur not scamming us cause you could or this could even be a viris

DaedaluS
11-19-2007, 01:34 AM
It was the day all his teammates were waiting for a week now, they`r first hand to hand combat mission. As the hours passed Naraku and his friends arrived at the dimension portal few minutes early. As they all gathered two high officers the 6th and 7th under Lieutenant came to help them in case of some problem.
As they entered the human world the landscape was breath taking a giant mountain and a village at it's foot all covered in whit snow with only few lights up the only thing that was not at its place was the smell of a hollow.
As the group entered the village and came at sight with the hollow, it was not very much they killed him fast and most of the phrases Naraku heard were "was this all ?". At the same time he heard that phrase a breath taking and paralyzing feeling the proportion of the Hollow power was so big everyone except the 6th and 7th officers were paralyzed as the giant hollow (ant shaped hollow with lots of fangs) started reaping apart all of his teammates, a few moments later the officers were dead and only He Tsutanai and Migoto were left, still none of them capable of moving from the fierce power of the hollow it killed Tsutanai and Migoto in a eye blink as the hollow was making the final steps to Naraku all that was in his mind was that it was all over nothing could save him, at that time a new feeling
emerged but in a way more frightening than the hollow`s power it was far too grated. At that point he spotted the dimension rift and 2 Captain Class and 3 Lieutenant Class persons emerged and in a even faster way than the hollow had killed his friends they slaughtered the hollow.

Few days after the accident Naraku was given few months break from the academy and he went straight to the library seeking for information on shinigamies that in the past have tried to obtain hollow powers.
After 1 month research the only clues he had was that a little group of gifted students afterwards became a lot stronger than more shinigamies disappeared after some research on hollows the only clue there was that they went to the human world.
At the time he went back to the academy he was assigned to a different team but he had changed a lot, before he was funny and fun to talk with, now he is gloomy all the time and "all in secrets" never talking when he has training against other students he never tries a lot. And when one day he asked his Captain for people who experimented with hollow powers he slipped out a little bit of information that there were sights of people like that in a little town in Japan jungles.
Few days after that Naraku vanished from Soul Society.

When he arrived at the village it was night and no sights of people with "spiritual power" (no traces of reiatsu). Few hours after he was in the town a strange feeling erupted in him a familiar feeling of hollow presence, it was not a strong one "i can take it" he say`d to himself (but the truth is that he was still weak for two months he did not train much) and the feeling of weakness after the long way to the village was taking over him bit by bit.
After trying to evade the hollow it was impossible for him to hide, he knew he was weak at kidou and cant hide his leaking reiatsu, and after the next corner there was standing a half-cat half-human hollow staring right at him. After a long and heavy fight he was heavily wounded and barely staying in consciousness, he had seen a dark figure walking slowly at him and then he fainted.
At some time Naraku woke up at a really strange place five or six people were walking around and talking, and at a point a young woman say`d "hey our guest has awaken", at first he did not realize how were these people able to see him "i am a shinigami ... i think".
After few hours of talking and him explaining why he is here the people moved away from him and gathered to discus something ... a few moments passed and they turned back around and say`d "ok kid we are Vaizards". At first he did not know what to say "what the hell is this Vaizard" he say`d to himself, then the woman say`d again "ok it seems you do not understand, Vaizard is a Shiningami who was crossed the line and gained Hollow powers". These words were like a slam for Naraku ("the people i seek are right in front of me, what luck"), after saying what he had to say to them, they explained that becoming a hollow is a slow,hard and painful process and they told him that once u get past phase 1 there is no turning back, and that there is a chance if he fails to "tame" his hollow they would have to kill him. Naraku did not think much, this is what he wanted it is all or nothing, he say`d that he agrees and wants to become a Vaizard himself. They explained that they will start right away.

BleachFreak
11-19-2007, 02:28 AM
Umm, Splyex, it's kinda hard to continue the story if you switch your character.Oh well, Alexdude, is it O.K. if I just continue my R.P. as it was before since you accepted my character last time.
Alexander rushed toward the adjucha, calling for the others to follow, Ryujoji and Jessie drew their swords and were about to charge when they heard someone say, "What is that thing?" Ryujoji turned around to see Hasegawa standing there, his bucket hat had blown off and he had a bug-eyed look on his face. Ryujoji sighed and said, "That my friend is a menos grande. It will be hard to defeat but I judge from your reiatsu that you are pretty strong so we should be able to handle it. Now, Jessie fire one of your zanpackto's attacks at me, I need some material to work with." Seeing the look on the girls face Ryujoji sighed again and said, "Oh well guess I better get it to fire a cero at me. Such a pain." With that Ryujoji ran at the hollow saying, "You think you can take me, well then how about we dance?" The adjucha growled well if that's what you want, CERO!!!" Ryujoji barely shunpo'd out of the way before saying, "Hmm, you are more of a fool than I thought. Die by your own attack, fly, Mozue Omue!!" A cero shot out of his blade and blasted at the arrancar. Jessie was just about to put away her sword when Ryujoji put up his hand and said, "Don't assume we have won just yet, I don't think an adjucha will be beaten so easily." Splyex, should we just pretend that you an arrancar all along and just fit it into the story? :3

DaedaluS
11-19-2007, 02:29 AM
As the morning came Naraku still could not get even a minute of sleep, it was around 6 a.m. when the others woke up and Naraku jumped of his bed.
As he was literally running down the stairs, the mood in the room was not the way he fought it would be. After staying frozen for few seconds he made a sound to warn them of his presence. They welcomed him with a fresh "good morning" the blond lady (Tsurai Touji which means Painful Lady), started talking as coldly as possible "We have to cut your life chain that is the chain that holds you to your shinigami life or soul ... when we do that we have to wait until you start transforming to a hollow at that point its all in you, you have to fight of the hollow, or you think you have, then the transformation will end. That is the end of phrase 1". After Tsurai made a move with her hand and caught a invisible chain that at that moment became visible, when she draw out her soul slayer she cut through the chains, they dissolving,"you have about 72 hours before the transformation, you better got take a nap to get your powers back you are still weak. !!!".
Two days have passed the 3rd was at its end it has been two hours and he was in an underground "desert" of some sort and there was a large shield of spirit power.
Then they made him enter, not long after the last chain had dissolved and the transformation began. It was slow and painful a strange feeling erupted in him as fast as a lightning hits the ground, anger, greed, huger, instability and an incredible need to kill someone or something just to kill. At that time the outside appearance was almost over "he has about 20 more minutes" someone say`d. At that point Naraku flashed back and remembered how his friends were killed by a Hollow and that he promised himself that if he gets alive out of that he wont die from a hollow ever."1 minute ......"some say`d again, then a large explosion erupted and the shields collapsed and caused a really high velocity wind, but none of the people standing there were affected by it. Naraku was standing still and more confident than ever but his face had suddenly change he was more serious than ever, he close to the them and asked "so what is phrase 2".
They explained how now he has to wait for the inner hollow to appear in cases like him it was fast 3-4 days at most maybe tomorrow, who knows smiled Senpai Arashi (Arashi means Storm and Senpai means Elder).
The past two days he was more energetic than ever but they were constantly telling him to sit or sleep just to rest "go to sleep you need your powers, the hardest battle is to come, you need to be concentrated and don't loose yourself". After that lecture he went to bed and then a voice appeared "You are weak, you let your friends die your a disgrace". After that he went down and told them what happened and they made a spooky eye contact all together at the same time with a little "fear" in they`r eyes. They told him that its a day maximum two. So it was at the end of day one he was weak and powerless to restrain the hollow anymore he was in a shielded room 3 times bigger and the shield was at least 10 times stronger and it came from a extremely high level defense spell. A hour later the transformation started, but this had nothing to do with the last the pain was unbearable after few minutes of pain he was in a black and white room looking at a black and white copy of him with a fierce smile.
Then the Hollow spoke "You are weak so you shall be digested and killed, but if you manage to beat me i shall become your power". And it jumped with incredible speed at Naraku. After hours of intense fighting he was heavily wounded and tired while the Hollow was standing still without even sign of any weakness,"You do not deserve these powers you are so damn weak" and it pierced his right shoulder. The pain was like a fire in his blood burning him inside his whole body."You weakling you let your friends die because you are weak", these words pierced Naraku's mind the burning pain had stop immediately his blood was pumping really fast, a strange power was filling him, the sudden refresh in his powers made the hollow make two steps back. As the power was overwhelming him he charged in attack now the tables have turned and he was beating the hollow.But the battle at the inside was not stopping the hollow transformation,"its almost over, five minutes or less" shouted the Elder. The inside battle was continuing at fierce speed, at a time when they made a "pause" the hollow started speaking just to buy some time "you still are weak and you know it that why all the people you once knew are now dead". At that point the hollow has just finished his sentence when Naraku's blade pierced his heart.
A intense explosion erupted on the outside the shield was broken like a glass and all the people outside made a step back a draw they'r soul slayers, and did not move a muscle more. After the sand fog faded Naraku was standing in the middle with his sword in one hand, and looking at the other hands palm, his Hollow mask was moved across half of his face and he say`d "This is incredible i have never felt so powerful my entire life", and the Elder spoke "this is only the beginning there are no limits now only your will for knowledge and power is your limit." they climbed up the ladder and entered the little house and all went to bed after the 3 hard days of work.

Splyex
11-19-2007, 02:46 AM
nah i will go with my old one i thought that we will be starting over

Hasegawa was gauking at the adjuchas being afraid and running for his life trying to dodge what ever the monster gave out. Just wondering how to get that bow out so he could attack.

Pipster
11-19-2007, 02:56 AM
(( Old RP restored, locked ))