Hey guys my clan leader recently asked people to make a welcome screen for on our CSS servers and this is what ive done in about 20 minutes im just wondering if you guys think this is good for a 20 minute job and what i could improve i dont mind criticism so feel free any help appreciated :P

http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/6676/cccclanio0.jpg

You could've done something....

Original?

You could've done something....

Original?
I have a bad imagination and matrix was the first thing that came to mind (because i was watching it last night) so yeah if you gimme ideas? ill try a few others xD I dont personally like it but my mate thinks its good 0_o what a strange strange man lol

It's pretty good. If you can, change the colors of the logo. And set the text to smooth instead of normal.

i think it would be better if you removed the matrix effect in front of the dude and logo.

Ok here it is i had a go at changing the colours of the logo but screwed it so i decided to leave it xD

http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/8963/cccclan2fe4.jpg
any better?

If you could make reflections in his glasses, that'd be bitchin.

If you could make reflections in his glasses, that'd be bitchin.
I could try it but ive never done reflections before so id need to find a tut :P

Ok here it is i had a go at changing the colours of the logo but screwed it so i decided to leave it xD

http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/8963/cccclan2fe4.jpg
any better?

Looks much better imo.

My suggestion: Add a medium sized border thats rusted and has bullet holes. It'll bring the cs aspect up a bit.

I agree with Peri, btw, where did you get that render?