hey everyone heres a superhero i made his names The WiseGuy

http://i29.tinypic.com/2a0ahrq.png

Powers
uses Jewel of Immersion implanted to his head to steal others powers

Weapon
Stave of Changeover- stave that transforms between mallot, sword and stave, if transformed too frequently at a time the stave gets jammed


Weakness
after jewel of immersion absorbs a power it can only hold that power for 10 minutes after that the jewel goes null for another while and cannot absorb any other powers until its cooled off
if jewel of immersion is used too frequently with no rest it goes haywire and causes wiseguy to act brutal and thoughtless towards friend or foe.

Outfit
outfit is made of kevlar and nomax, meaning its both bulletproof and fireproof

Weird neck, his head is too big, and his fists are too small. He looks short overall. But he looks awesome lol, 10/10 for creativity XD.

ty ty *takes a bow*

Ooo i know what hes missing, add a sexy six pack :p.

i was gonna add a six pack but i figured all comics have them i thought id aim for a more creative look than average comic heroes do.....oh and i forgot to mention hes the star of my upcoming comic book series which will be coming soon

Ooo sounds fun, whats it gonna be like or you're gonna hold back the info :(.

Arms/Hands are slightly too small, and the head is too big.

I like the idea for the hero though, the jewel/weapon is quite original :P

yea i always had problems drawing hands lol and the reason i made the head so big was because i was gonna make a bigger buff guy but i ended up going for the puny guy with muscles and forgot to resize the head......thx for the feedback and yea im loving the jewel/weapon idea myself although the staves look will be different from what your seeing i have to make it look more like something that has the ability to transform instead of a simple rod and i forgot to add its defect in which i will add now

looks like a Protoss Spiderman lmao.

Good job.

pfft he can so whip spiderman!

pfft he can so whip spiderman!

Have his staff turn into a Photon Blade and we're rolling into sexy.

Have his staff turn into a Photon Blade and we're rolling into sexy.

hmm thats a pretty sexy idea youve brought to my attention.......i might actually think about that

Pretty cool. Just fix his head and hand size.

Wouldn't having the stave jam in the middle of changing be sort of a good thing depending on how it worked, say he wanted a sword from a hammer and it jammed, he'd have a hammord which is much better, or a swammer

If you're going for a Super Hero, small head and huge pecks ftw.

It's still pretty cool, but proportions need some work.

Yeah he looks awsome but like everyone said fix the head i think you need to extend his arms a little.

meh.
it aint tha coldest shit on tha internets, but its decent

i will work on him tomorow and do some enhancements...after all this is only a beta phase....another thing do you guys think those colors look good on him or do you think it will look better as blue and white?

looks too much like spiderman... Make the face like deadpool's

http://image.comicvine.com/uploads/item/8000/7606/2590-deadpool_400.jpg

Make it blue and white too.

although deadpool is awesome im just gonna work on this one a bit and come up witha more creative look

He needs a bigger penis(bigger crotch) and his hands are way to small!(how can he fap with those things?)

Looks as if Spiderman, Deadpool and Deathstroke had a threesome and he was the result.

Ooo, why are people hating it :eye:? Find out who it is and kill em is what I suggest.

lol with the names foolishmofo and boinker im sure they go around hating everything....but with that put to the side i will start re-creating the wiseguy i have some sharp ideas in my head and will put them to use

It needs something, different.

Looks like a chibi, kinda cool ;p A few flaws here and there but overall it's pretty good.

lol with the names foolishmofo and boinker im sure they go around hating everything....but with that put to the side i will start re-creating the wiseguy i have some sharp ideas in my head and will put them to use

Yeah thats what this thread is all about, improving on what you have. Rarely do I see someone that criticism the right way, they instead insist that their way was right and they shouldn't change a thing.

thx everyone for the feedback i have created the new version of thewiseguy in the thread labeled wiseguy 2.0