Anyone want to critique mine?

i have some free time right now. go ahead.

Definitely not masterpieces. (http://velentine.deviantart.com/)

I'm sorry, but i thought you meant essays XD

I'm not really that great with poems... I'm sorry >_<

I'm sorry, but i thought you meant essays XD

I'm not really that great with poems... I'm sorry >_<


;P

That bad, eh?

No no, i'm just not a poem person. I write poems, but i don't critique poems because i don't know how to D:

xD

Oh, I see.

Most of my stuff is just babble spewed onto a page. I haven't spent more than 10 minutes on a single piece of work.