You have to work on your focals. It also lacks depth. I'd love to see these when they're finished though.
... I know this already. It's why I stated twice that there not finished pieces. Care to give your opinion on the smudge work on the first or have an idea to throw out for the second. (As in something I can do with the second piece, need ideas. )
Edit: I should probably also mention my style of sig is to make the focal not be the sole piece of interest in the work, think of it like a painting. Of course for the time being I'm no where close to mastering this style of work, so my pieces will look rather "flat".
Last edited by spiritorange; 06-12-2010 at 10:27 PM.