Hahaha. I liked the first 50 seconds. And the thread title.
And I like the thumps at 1:13
Started getting bored at 13
You know, what some classical composers do is they'll write umm... They exposition each beat individually, change the timbre and rhythm a bit, and then show-off the next beat. And then at the end of the piece the recap all the beats simultaneously in harmony.
I like how you attempted to add a high-pitched melody in the background. But it sounded squeaky.
4:54 to 5:08 was kinda interesting. And then you fade-out nicely.
Hmm... It's a LOT better than your previous works.
P.S. ROFL at previous three posts.