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    Default omg not again :( another track i mean really

    https://soundcloud.com/underthewhisp...the-whispering

    experimental as usual tried to not be as repetitive but just do something crazy sounding. I had fun making this and trying new things :P

    i know...i know it sucks but i enjoy learning even if i have a hard time doing so. its no genre but experimental that is all.

    bpm is 157 preset synth sorta bassline tweaked to how i wanna have it sound and used goa trance kick tweaked again to how i wanted it to sound


    please comment
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    Your hook just isn't very hooking.
    Needs stronger hook and more layers.

    Did you rework the other one? It sounds so much better in comparison with your new one, lol.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Ronin View Post
    Your hook just isn't very hooking.
    Needs stronger hook and more layers.

    Did you rework the other one? It sounds so much better in comparison with your new one, lol.
    no i made something different. my next track ill work on makeing it more appealing

    thank you for taking the time to listen
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    very curfixtious

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    Pretty nice, but I feel it doesn't need to be anywhere near 5 minutes long, unless you plan to have it used as the background music to some sci-fi india game.


    Condense it down and then tweak a bit and it might be more enjoyable.
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    Make something I can listen to while being in an inn in aelf forest
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    Quote Originally Posted by TheSkald View Post
    very curfixtious
    :P tenelfsinaforestinainn
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    Quote Originally Posted by ApocaRUFF View Post
    Pretty nice, but I feel it doesn't need to be anywhere near 5 minutes long, unless you plan to have it used as the background music to some sci-fi india game.


    Condense it down and then tweak a bit and it might be more enjoyable.

    okay when i begin working on my next track. not sure when i will make it shorter.


    what is a good time length you guys think? 3 mins?
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    Quote Originally Posted by duby View Post
    okay when i begin working on my next track. not sure when i will make it shorter.


    what is a good time length you guys think? 3 mins?

    I'd start small and then get larger. First try making a 30 second track that sounds good. Then make a 1 minute track that sounds good. Then a 1min 30sec track, etc... until you get to a point that you like.


    Personally I prefer songs/tracks that last 3 minutes, give or take twenty seconds or so.
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    Quote Originally Posted by ApocaRUFF View Post
    I'd start small and then get larger. First try making a 30 second track that sounds good. Then make a 1 minute track that sounds good. Then a 1min 30sec track, etc... until you get to a point that you like.


    Personally I prefer songs/tracks that last 3 minutes, give or take twenty seconds or so.
    okay. ill do that next time.


    really wish i could save my work in the fl demo >.< so i can work on it longer and rework it better
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