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    Default really now another track

    https://soundcloud.com/underthewhisp...ows-of-imps-of

    shorten the length of my useuly tracks. same as always experimental. tried to be a lot less repetitive but im sure i messed that up again

    comments please

    bpm this time 130

    kicks from kick pack and basslineish from sytrus demo that came with fl studio used the pwm2 preset and tweaked to how i wanted it to sound

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    I'll check it out when I get home.

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    i could see this being on the soundtrack of some weird 90s racing game. good job dub

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    Quote Originally Posted by TheSkald View Post
    i could see this being on the soundtrack of some weird 90s racing game. good job dub
    thank you

    i think when i work on my next track i am going to aim for a darker style of down tempo

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    Just checked it out. Pretty good.

    i think when i work on my next track i am going to aim for a darker style of down tempo
    Now do: Lament of the Nephilim
    It shall be a track about the sorrow of living in the shadow of one's parents/never living up to their expectations.
    Last edited by FarmerM; 02-16-2014 at 05:30 AM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by FarmerM View Post
    Just checked it out. Pretty good.



    Now do: Lament of the Nephilim
    i will look them up but im sure i will not be able to remake any thing

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    Quote Originally Posted by FarmerM View Post
    Just checked it out. Pretty good.



    Now do: Lament of the Nephilim
    It shall be a track about the sorrow of living in the shadow of one's parents/never living up to their expectations.
    but how will i get vocals for it?

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    Oh it's an original title to my knowledge. Just throwing ideas at you. lol

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    Quote Originally Posted by FarmerM View Post
    Oh it's an original title to my knowledge. Just throwing ideas at you. lol
    okay ill use that as my next track name ^^ im still learning. and the demo is very limited cant afford it nor vsts yet so have to use what basic tools i have

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    oh can we suggest titles for yr future work?

    how about I Saw a Black Knight on a Black Night, He Told Me Where the Bodies Dance Among the Living Dead of Darkness.

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    Quote Originally Posted by TheSkald View Post
    oh can we suggest titles for yr future work?

    how about I Saw a Black Knight on a Black Night, He Told Me Where the Bodies Dance Among the Living Dead of Darkness.
    lol :P that one is quite long but ill note it down

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    By 0:58 I was groovin'. I think you could have made it better after 2:19. It was good up until 2:19 </3

    Seriously, this... I can't offer any criticism cuz I totally was rocking my head to the beat.
    Last edited by Phenoca; 02-17-2014 at 11:42 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Phenoca View Post
    By 0:58 I was groovin'. I think you could have made it better after 2:19. It was good up until 2:19 </3

    Seriously, this... I can't offer any criticism cuz I totally was rocking my head to the beat.
    thanks man.

    not sure what gave me the idea at the end to change up the kicks >.<

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    Quote Originally Posted by duby View Post
    thanks man.

    not sure what gave me the idea at the end to change up the kicks >.<
    2:19 WAS the end lol. I meant it was good until it ended.

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    soundcloud

    i made that in a hour 2nd time ever playing around on FL studio

    pls duby getgud
    Last edited by Delamorte; 02-18-2014 at 04:26 AM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Delamorte View Post
    soundcloud

    i made that in a hour 2nd time ever playing around on FL studio

    pls duby getgud

    thank you but are you useing the demo are? i dont have any vsts except those that came with the fl studio demo. i know my music sucks right now. i am still learning

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    Quote Originally Posted by Phenoca View Post
    2:19 WAS the end lol. I meant it was good until it ended.
    ohhh got confused lol

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    Quote Originally Posted by Delamorte View Post
    soundcloud

    i made that in a hour 2nd time ever playing around on FL studio

    pls duby getgud
    I like Duby's better TBH.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Phanein View Post
    I like Duby's better TBH.
    Agreed. Delamorte's literally made me feel sick.

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    Duby this is great, but please promise me you made this while being completely clear minded and not under the forgettable experience of being depressed because you can get better; I look forward to it.

    On a side note, Delamorte's version is alright, but I kept expecting to hear that "MORTAL KOMBAAAAAAT!" Sound bite.

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    Quote Originally Posted by TreyTrey12 View Post
    Duby this is great, but please promise me you made this while being completely clear minded and not under the forgettable experience of being depressed because you can get better; I look forward to it.

    On a side note, Delamorte's version is alright, but I kept expecting to hear that "MORTAL KOMBAAAAAAT!" Sound bite.
    i stay depressed but dont worry i am not going to quit. i try to pratice everyday on music. i dont share this much. i have only one dream in life and that is. to get good with psy trance.dark psy.and experimental and be able to play at psy parties and festivals. it takes me longer then some as i have a major learning disability so it takes me longer to learn. most of what i have learned is by ear and failed attempts and to keep trying.

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    I am fairly sure that's how most people learn to make music. lol

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    Quote Originally Posted by FarmerM View Post
    I am fairly sure that's how most people learn to make music. lol
    yea practice makes perfect

    got fl studio open right now since i cant save. useing the pwm 2 preset but tweaked major to give it a dark psyish feel and aslo tweaked this kick as well. will be some results later cant work now grandmum is sleeping

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