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    There are very sudden changes that does not belong in hard trance. The pitch changes are also unconventional. The part at about 1:10-ish is also very sudden with inappropriate pitch changes. 1:57 is more like it. 2:20 is speedcore, practically nonexistent in hardtrance. The part at the end also feels out of place due bass cuts with unchanged treble. It's usually the other way around.


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    Quote Originally Posted by SnOwBunZz View Post
    There are very sudden changes that does not belong in hard trance. The pitch changes are also unconventional. The part at about 1:10-ish is also very sudden with inappropriate pitch changes. 1:57 is more like it. 2:20 is speedcore, practically nonexistent in hardtrance. The part at the end also feels out of place due bass cuts with unchanged treble. It's usually the other way around.
    yea i dont listen to much hardtrance :P but i always like trying new things and even mixing different genres together i forget to put experimental on the tags this time as was half a sleep >.< but thanks guys for listening.

    with the kicks and etc i messed them up really bad. some seems to over lap each other did not notice before but just listen to it again. and i can say while some of it sounds good the rest if nothing but a real big mess

    about the pitches changes i like to do that in just about everything. go from high to low and repeat :P most of the time i just put my tracks as experimental for a reason.
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    You hate me? No worries death to all my enemies forgiveness is over. If you hate me so bad come to my house and we can settle it like men. Am i claiming to be a fighter? Nope but im sick of your shit. You bring your boys ill bring mine i can guarantee some one gonna leave in a body bag. Ill shove this pitch fork up ya ass and have you begging for mercy and none will come. As i roast you over the fire laughing at your burning flesh. Im sick of your shit and your threats lets settle this like men

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    https://soundcloud.com/underthewhisp...peacebewithyou

    Experimental trance track. Decided to do a positive vibes this time. Sound quality may be a little of since i made with my head phones

    Bpm is 160. And this is experimental trance. So a little tiny different then regular then trance. I know its a little long this sorry got carried away had so much fun with this trying new stuff. Tried to give it a hook line. And some flow. Any ways thanks for listening and as always please comment

    been a little while. been practicing on different styles and such. and this is what i came up with. i do hope you guys like it
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    Quote Originally Posted by duby View Post
    https://soundcloud.com/underthewhisp...peacebewithyou

    Experimental trance track. Decided to do a positive vibes this time. Sound quality may be a little of since i made with my head phones

    Bpm is 160. And this is experimental trance. So a little tiny different then regular then trance. I know its a little long this sorry got carried away had so much fun with this trying new stuff. Tried to give it a hook line. And some flow. Any ways thanks for listening and as always please comment

    been a little while. been practicing on different styles and such. and this is what i came up with. i do hope you guys like it
    bump ^^ .
    You hate me? No worries death to all my enemies forgiveness is over. If you hate me so bad come to my house and we can settle it like men. Am i claiming to be a fighter? Nope but im sick of your shit. You bring your boys ill bring mine i can guarantee some one gonna leave in a body bag. Ill shove this pitch fork up ya ass and have you begging for mercy and none will come. As i roast you over the fire laughing at your burning flesh. Im sick of your shit and your threats lets settle this like men

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    What you did is fine. Just keep working on it.

    However, it's a tad one-dimensional. The thing is, electroinic music isn't quite like music from a band. It's something between a big-band and an Orchestre piece. You need to look into ways of adding more depth and complexity.

    Stay frosty.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ronin View Post
    What you did is fine. Just keep working on it.

    However, it's a tad one-dimensional. The thing is, electroinic music isn't quite like music from a band. It's something between a big-band and an Orchestre piece. You need to look into ways of adding more depth and complexity.
    okay thanks for listening. will try to find some guides to study
    You hate me? No worries death to all my enemies forgiveness is over. If you hate me so bad come to my house and we can settle it like men. Am i claiming to be a fighter? Nope but im sick of your shit. You bring your boys ill bring mine i can guarantee some one gonna leave in a body bag. Ill shove this pitch fork up ya ass and have you begging for mercy and none will come. As i roast you over the fire laughing at your burning flesh. Im sick of your shit and your threats lets settle this like men

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