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    Default Rate, My first Line art, NO TUT

    My first line art person!


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    Whats an line art? Lol. Not bad for the first one.



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    I dont like it, even for a first try.

    5/10 for effort.

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    thanks for the critism but maybe put suggjestions?


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    Quote Originally Posted by xpubxAlchemny
    thanks for the critism but maybe put suggjestions?
    Take more time on the detail.

    Thats all the advice I can give.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Croix
    Take more time on the detail.

    Thats all the advice I can give.
    Alright thanks


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    No offense, but that's a pretty crappy excuse for line art. I know it's your first try, and it's good that you atleast made an effort. Honestly though, it looks like you opened up MS Paint and drew ssome thing up in two minutes. If you want to get even mildly decent at line art you might want to put a little more time and effort into it. Try looking at a tutorial or two.

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    I dont know how to appreciate art lol. Since I cant draw, I'll say awesome.

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    Quote Originally Posted by BooNeZ
    I dont know how to appreciate art lol. Since I cant draw, I'll say awesome.
    Haha that's a nice little philosophy...

    "Love every thing more superior than you."

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    Is my second one better?
    Last edited by xpubxAlchemny; 06-07-2006 at 08:44 AM.


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    Quote Originally Posted by xpubxAlchemny

    Is my second one better?
    Way better.. But i personally think line art aint good, Try something better like, more superior than just line art.

    And the second one looked as if he got into a fight with another ninja and broke his arm, I mean lol. I'm not those clever kinds who can figure out that his hand is inside his cape or whatever.
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    I dont even know what Line Art is... I thought it was ..... Lines:eek:
    So... I dont think I could help you with that:cool:

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    Quote Originally Posted by kfckaykay
    Way better.. But i personally think line art aint good, Try somethin
    HEhe [[aint]] yeah I dont really like my line art but if you get better at it it looks really cool!


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    i like his cloak but i think maybe the ninja stars should go along the waist? but nice to see your creative :d
    i mean shurikens ninja stars sounds nooby >.>

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    I dont know what line are is but i probably cant do better..

    put more details... 6/10 for the effort.

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    boy.....get....photoshop. trust me, its the best move you'll ever make. paint ok too, but. like it can't hold a finger to photoshop.

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    whats that pink thing between his legs maybe i shouldnt ask though..

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    Quote Originally Posted by Slipknotmaggot
    whats that pink thing between his legs maybe i shouldnt ask though..
    ROFL ROFL ROFL:eek: Lol gj, except the long thing:rolleyes:
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    Quote Originally Posted by Azn_King
    ROFL ROFL ROFL:eek: Lol gj, except the long thing:rolleyes:
    maybe that ninja just saw sakura (naruto) in the dressing room

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    Quote Originally Posted by PyroHokku
    boy.....get....photoshop. trust me, its the best move you'll ever make. paint ok too, but. like it can't hold a finger to photoshop.
    it is with PS but I don't know how to make better characters! with it but Ill get better at it


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    Can someone tell me what the heck "line art" is?
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    um could i have something really freaky with a pic of a hot chick in it but if to explicit make the chick animated please somethig really dark and freaky im in to that stuff

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    Lines made into art but im not exactly


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    1. Line art - A type of graphic consisting entirely of lines, without any shading. Most art produced on computers is not line art because the computer makes it so easy to add subtle shadings.

    Another version, the one he's going for, is where you pretty much color in the graphic consisting of lines, then remove the lines. So there are no black lines or any thing.

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    Line Art is'nt that good either, and i suppose the pink thingy between his legs are what you call, shadows.. But im not sure since its PINK! :/
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    only composed of lines? well ok, for the first one, like I said in the first page. For the second one, just the same lol.

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