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    Default Rate, My first Line art, NO TUT

    My first line art person!


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    Whats an line art? Lol. Not bad for the first one.



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    I dont like it, even for a first try.

    5/10 for effort.

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    thanks for the critism but maybe put suggjestions?


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    Quote Originally Posted by xpubxAlchemny
    thanks for the critism but maybe put suggjestions?
    Take more time on the detail.

    Thats all the advice I can give.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Croix
    Take more time on the detail.

    Thats all the advice I can give.
    Alright thanks


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    No offense, but that's a pretty crappy excuse for line art. I know it's your first try, and it's good that you atleast made an effort. Honestly though, it looks like you opened up MS Paint and drew ssome thing up in two minutes. If you want to get even mildly decent at line art you might want to put a little more time and effort into it. Try looking at a tutorial or two.

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    I dont know how to appreciate art lol. Since I cant draw, I'll say awesome.

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    Quote Originally Posted by BooNeZ
    I dont know how to appreciate art lol. Since I cant draw, I'll say awesome.
    Haha that's a nice little philosophy...

    "Love every thing more superior than you."

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    Is my second one better?
    Last edited by xpubxAlchemny; 06-07-2006 at 09:44 AM.


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