Okay I'm finished with my character sheet....il post it now...tell me if its an improvement...and atleast semi-original >_<...haha joke Your honest opinion again please, it really helped so it could only help again, I'm watching death note atm, i was thinking of moving onto Bleach straight after (yay for 200 episodes T.T'') and then something else on the popular anime list soon after (or if i think bleach is getting too long). AND JUST BECAUSE IM NOT AS POPULAR AS YOU! I will give Gunnerkrigg a read anyway thanks for the suggestion
whenever the hell is a forsaken gonna have a fan girl screaming "Oh my gosh its Mmmmmmmmmm!!" >_> xD. I'm just gonna stick with N because nobody is gonna go "Oh my gosh its Ennnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn" Its simple and easy to remember just like you said, but remember its just an alias, he will become known as kevron later on when krai realises who N really is...okay?
Then again, N would sound like "En"... Oh goodie, I'm going to watch Full Metal Alchemist!
I like Z better, because when you scream it out like a fan-girl, it sounds like: "Oh my gosh, it's Zzzzzzzzzzzzzz!" xD And then you can go: "Boo! You put my girlfriend to sleep!" xD Or better yet, M! "Oh my gosh, it's Mmmmmmm!" "Yeah, he is so--" Well, you get the idea. xD
BUT kevron could be N's real name (kevron being another name for kevin) thus retaining that he is still handsomely loved but N does not use this name as he did not want to reveal his indentity so soon to Krai, so he calls himself N, an added precaution as he is careful now
Gah, what happened?! Why did my comment get repeated twice? Oh, I must have accidentally replaced my previous comment. It basically said: Excellent! ^-^ Now, did you watch Full Metal Alchemist on the internet? If so, what site?
....for the second time...yes I did delete my character sheet because I'm working on it on microsoft word with your help xD
Yes, I deleted my character sheet so I could work on it whilst talking to you about ideas on editing it
The fact that you said Krai's friend needed reason to believe Krai was really Krai would also make me believe Krai's friend would also lost his ability to know who Krai truly was during his coming to earth. This would mean that in the time Krai was alone Krai's friend could have been actively searching for him, and then he met somebody who he suspected was Krai, instantly befriending him because of his powers over passion, being able to influence people around him quite quickly (like having a knack for having a way with words, this could also mean I could manipulate people, not by powers but be speech...kinda like what hitler did to gain influence over people, a man with a way with words) and then when Krai's friend found out that Krai was seeing these things it was proof enough for him to suspect him to be krai...what do you think?
Okay, I'll do the coughing up blood then and it makes him weaker xD just like in full metal alchemist the way the teacher coughs up blood, can happen any time and if its during battle he could get owned xD The way my character was naive in the past could play host to this, he learned the hard way and tried to stop being naive, thus he tries to gain evidence about something before he actually believes it anymore.
