I believe my post in that particular thread gives you a satisfying answer ^^.
Well it's true!! This may seem random, but were u going to join Anglo's RP? I saw that you were on the list and got curious :3
Thank you! ^^. Adverbs, eh? I'll have to remember that. That's something I rarely think about so it's good you mentioned it. You know, I love the phrase "You're all good". It makes me happy to know I'm all good ^^.
Part 1 I glanced over a few of your most recent posts and i love the detail. Your descriptions are beautiful! :3 I enjoyed reading them because of the amount of detail. And it isn't too much detail either! CONGRATZ! You put in just the right amount xD Part 2 Really, all you need to work on are the same things all of us do. Remember to limit your adverbs!! The least amount you have, the better your writing. Usually, adverbs just describe more on what is always explained. You know, grammer, fluent reading, and so on are always good!! Really, your all good, i just included the adverb thing as advice, it isn't really related to your writing in particular.
Why of course ^^. Feedback is always welcome. Be gentle ^^.
Thanks for replying to my message xD I am not kidding, a great boost to my confidence there MUAHAHA TIME TO GET COCKY ABOUT MYSELF (definately joking) By the way though, thanks for the help :3 ANY WAY i was wondering whether you wanted me to also evaluate you since that is something i offered. PEACE
PART 2 The only way you can make yourself better now is to study more words. This is so that you don't always have to rely on a single word to describe something, like for example "look"(if you check the vocabulary there's a whole bunch of synonyms for it which I'm sure you already knew ^^). I'm not saying you have that kind of "problem"! ^^. I'm just listing things where everyone can always improve. Of course creating even more depth and making sure you have no spelling errors are also a way to improve yourself as a writer ^^. As a side bonus: The more you're able to include others in your posts, the more likely they'll include your character in their post's too. (I couldn't help but to "reply" to your latest message on your visitor messages ^^)
PART I I thought I'd drop by for no particular reason. I remember I gave you some pointers in your earlier RPs, although that's not what I came to say. I've watched(stalked) your recent posts and I have to say that you've improved a lot from when you began! ^^. I mean you're easily at my "level" already! Not that I'm saying I'm great in RPing or anything like that, however everyone else seems to think that way so.. I go with the flow ^^. Well, now I'm just talking about myself. Anyway, great job ^^.
