Anglo
Dante’s Inferno

Wait, you deleted your character sheet? o-o

Yeah, that works. Hypnotism requires the person submitting to the procedure, so it wouldn't work on everyone. I think it is better to control people and then have them befriend you (boy) or love you (girl). They should also retain no memory of you controlling them, unless you want them to. o-o Just the experience of part of you being inside them influences them to like/love you (based on gender).

Uhh...the getting weaker and all was good, but why does it all come down to bloodlust? xD You have to keep some humanity, or you can't be Krai's and everyone else's friends. Remember, Krai's friend is the only person who can support him when no one else knows what he goes through. We also cannot forget when Krai's friend said something about believing him now. That could prove that up until that point, Krai's friend didn't believe in something until he got actual proof. Perhaps he had to make sure Krai was really Krai? That means he has to have some attachment to Krai.

Oh, I guess that works too.
Sorry, ignore everything I wrote to you. :l
I got carrried away...

Well, I'm just giving examples based on what you wrote and what Krai wrote. You don't have to use those powers, but your power should center around "passion". Instead of hypnotism, why not pinning those who love one another against each other? Or crush the hearts of the weak who are filled with darkness (and can't conquer that darkness)? Like, you could control certain people and then crush their hearts in the end? However, since ending a life just like that is unfair, have some kind of weakness. Perhaps your emotions become nul (like, you won't be able to love and hate as strongly)? Or you cough up blood? Or you are incapable of loving someone and your hate becomes stronger (to that of a true demon)?

You can always make a character original. Like I said, read the examples Krai gave of the friend, base those emotions off of your character, and then go from there. How about feeling pity for the way they tried to turn Krai into a monstrosity? Your character could have stood by his side due to that. Also, you mentioned "passion". Passion is usually related with "love" (red roses) and "hate" (red blood). Base your powers off of that. You could control others by having them faun you, thus becoming your minions. Hypnotism perhaps? Oh, but they have to be insecure or unloved (weak minded). And you should only be able to control one or two at a time. As for hate, when the "chain" between the controlled and your character "breaks", you both lose blood...

Foka doesn't have superhero powers. o.o In fact, it's probably the opposite. He has to listen to constant feelings of jealousy, anger, bitterness, agony, hatred, dislike, sorrow, etc. To top it off, no matter how much he learns to block those demons out, they collide upon him without holding back whenever a total lunar eclipse appears! He only finds humor out of releasing those emotions on strained relationships, like couples, "best friends", etc.

Your character is hard. I tried to give advice, though. What more can I say?

Please don't kill me!
You asked me what I think. :o
I tried my best to not express my feelings too openly. ;-;
It's just...well...I was kind of...expecting...an...or...i...g--
you won't kill me if I say I was expecting...more, right?

I just thought it would be more original!
(There, I said it!)
Couldn't you at least have changed the name of Death Note or made all those powers into one? Like, when you left part of yourself in someone, you could control their death with...well, your weapon could be a book, but then you shouldn't have another weapon...

Eh, whatever. Do as you like. <<

Hmmm...your character...doesn't sound that original (sorry!). :/
I was expecting...*cough*...well, it doesn't matter.
Your character...N...although he reminds me of a combination between L and Light, he still is good. My main concern is that he may become too...overpowered.

Are you saying that he can enter people, leave some of himself inside of them to control them, take their form, AND has a Death Note?! o-o That sounds ultra powerful. Not trying to ruin your mood about your character, but how about at least breaking the powers down and adding weaknesses/downfalls to each? Like, when you leave a bit of you in someone, it takes away some of your life force, spirit, power, or etc.

I'm mostly concerned that he might seem too powerful. :/

******.

In regard to Inner Demon...ahhhh, another joke has gone successfully.
But on a serious note, it is quite difficult to come up with a good character for that RP. o.o
Like, if you take it seriously, your best character can be born.
I positively love how Foka came out, especially after it took me awhile to take his name seriously. Think about it. Foka. Fock-ah. ****-ah. F***er. Yup, even my mom got it. When I thought how close Foka sounded to F***er, I was like, "Do I really want to give what could potentially be an awesome character such a name?" After I went through all the trouble of drawing, coloring, writing, etc., the name stuck.

Good luck with your character sheet.

My characters hardly ever fall in love with anyone in RPs. T.T I guess it is because I don't want them falling in love with the wrong man. Who knows? Maybe she'll fall for Jansen? :o I analyzed your character? o-o I realize that Jansen has a demon within him, but I can't have Elizabeth go, "Oh, I can see a demonic force ensnaring Jansen! He is safe for now, but beware of his bloody side of darkness that may murder you in its wake!"

...No, because the soul that killed Elizabeth is still alive (human) and in the custody of Mr. Von Weiss. In other words, he is a completely different being that can send what I believe to be a Psyche Form (what Elizabeth and Ethan witnessed) out when given permission from Mr. Von Weiss. o.o Oh, so sorry, but...yup, it was the "guy who Ethan first fought in that action sequence". Your thoughts have been read. ~