Takesh
Fat Bowser

Hmn...Anglo actually responds to you, unlike me. Sad his laptop broke, though. If it were me, I wouldn't know what to do (clean and continue to try to master everything on Kingdom Hearts: 358/2 Days so I can get Sora? :o).

Hey, so we are just waiting for Befram to post on "Happy Home"? I got scared because I thought it was going to die (like Anglo's RP ). I'm glad to see that you are still very determined to keep "Happy Home" going.

I hope that laptop of Anglo's is fixed, though. I had high hopes for my characters. I feel like I jinxed it. I mean, Inner Demon died when I drew my character out, and just as I put up Yvon (that boy with the awesome jacket and hair), it...died.

That's fine don't worry about it. I'm sending the laptop off to get fixed tomorrow for some reason the makers of the laptop said they disabled it from being able to reboot for some reason and I don't know why the hell they did it. I might be on sooner but if not yes you can control my character as much as you need to. Thank you for not just kicking me out lol

No I actually need a little push from time to time, this post in particular I'm having trouble with isn't helping me either. I mean, would he even want to stop it seeing as Bazil was the result of him losing his arm? That's the answer I'm trying to find at the moment^^
Luckily the fotball match yesterday I went to have given me an positive push, seeing as we won^^

PART II
RPing was my hobby...
Why, did something happen in your life that makes you feel uneasy? :o
PART III
Yes, it is quite hot. No one got hurt, right? I'm sure you'll find a new place to bowl...I hope.
When I visit relatives, I stick with my close cousins and navigate through everyone with my camera.
Oh, I forgot! I have ice cream in the freezer! :o

My life...o-o Well, it'll be explained as I reply -- or rather, replied -- to your and Anglo's comments.

PART I
Yeah, the slowness reminds me of how much my life has halted. Befram posted, but he hasn't finished the rest of the post in "Happy Home". I don't know what is happening on "Eden:HR". Ah, but it also depends on who's RPing as well. In one of my older RPs, I practically created scenerios for the others to follow, and they STILL didn't know what to post, so it died.
I am a pessimist. o-o I just seem optimistic because what I feel like writing usually gets replaced for something that sounds optimistic.
School starts late this month. But...I haven't even had one job in my life and I didn't get my license (not that I want to drive an expensive car!). I was suppose to try to work this summer, but I waited too late (I'm 17, so I still have to fill out working papers! School officially ended for staff members early July).

Takeeesshhhh. T_T I'm so absolutely bored. Anglo didn't start his RP and your RP stalled. It never felt stalled before, since there was always another RP to take part of, but...the forum is dying. School is right around the corner (or is here for some people) and summer break is almost over (or is over for some people). I feel like such a loser because I wanted to do more during my summer vacation, yet I stayed home most of the time. ;-;

...RPing was the only thing keeping me sane, but now I can only rely on manga/anime/music/TV/etc.

So, since I can't survive without doing something meaningful, I wanna chat with you.
I haven't chatted with Anglo in awhile, but I noticed that you seem quite active (in a way).

How is your life going? What did you do during summer break? I wanna hear all the details of someone's life which is more exciting than my bull one. :o

Weather is amazing indeed, but discussing someone elses injuries as a side topic? I never heard about that one before, might give it a try someday. Luckily I know a few people whose into sports^^.

School in a few weeks,,, what happened with the summer break all of a sudden?_? Oh well, that's the cycle of school for you. Lets enjoy it to the maximum!

Glad to hear you're doing good anyway, at least for that one unfortunate accident but can't always be sunshine in life I guess, sometimes it needs a bit of rain for you to appreciate the good times. That being said I just hope it wasn't anything too serious.

Enough about that, how am I doing you say? Well quite well I think, I had my vacations and my summer rest and hanged out with friends a bit, all in all a decent summer I think. Had my own little downside too of course, but lets stay clear of that one as well^^. Beffy out!

Well it's true!!
This may seem random, but were u going to join Anglo's RP? I saw that you were on the list and got curious :3

Also realized today I got you on my friend list but havn't posted here in ages either, now why is that? Probably because of the very same reason I have problems with right now, what in the world shall I pick as an topic?_? I just talked a bit about weather so don't feel like using that one just yet, one time is fine but if I use it two times it feels like an emergency topic. A quite useful one though, you can always talk a bit about the weather, well not if you live in the same area though,,, "hey it's really sunny today, yeah it is" you don't get a lot of room to broaden the topic:P.

I think I have been going on for long enough now so lets get to the main question which I came up with right now, not a very original either but nothing can beat the classics, just watch charlie chaplin. So how are you doing? Anything fun that been happening recently?

Part 1
I glanced over a few of your most recent posts and i love the detail. Your descriptions are beautiful! :3 I enjoyed reading them because of the amount of detail. And it isn't too much detail either! CONGRATZ! You put in just the right amount xD

Part 2
Really, all you need to work on are the same things all of us do. Remember to limit your adverbs!! The least amount you have, the better your writing. Usually, adverbs just describe more on what is always explained.

You know, grammer, fluent reading, and so on are always good!! Really, your all good, i just included the adverb thing as advice, it isn't really related to your writing in particular.